1984 Rhyme

this is a pretty good fictional story piece i made up :)



this is a story about a bad earth-like planetary sphere
unlike earth, the planet was filled with stupidity and fear
and unlike earth, they didn't have great people like obama and the pope
cus if we were ever in danger, stephen hawking would calulate it on a microscope
look at me, on my planet i'm the worthless shit that works for MI5
i sit behind a pc screen all day thinking i keep it live
i press buttons on the screen and it links up to a satellite
which beams down unknown energy onto the victim i fight
oh look the chest pain i've given him/her isnt enough
let's make them feel like they're on a comedown thats rough
i can even inject words and numbers into their head
or make them hear sounds that arent there when they're trying to sleep in bed

why isnt my target slitting his/her wrists like they're supposed to
the mental hospital or the coffin thats where your going to
i'm working for my government on this fictional planet
and our god backs me thats why i do damage
look at this sensor, it shows he's in pain
i don't laugh out loud, but i do get a good kick out of this, i feel it in my brain
and my soul tells me this is right, its for the good of people
we must destroy these invalids for they are truely evil
the ones who take their own path have always been destroyed
don't look for the truth, it makes us rather annoyed

on our planet we had an event similar to earths hitler burning down his own building
there was this crazy guy who said we did it so we shot and we killed him
we don't just shoot people with satellites on this planetary plane
we do other fun psychological attacks to keep them trapped within their brain

when i go home all i want to do is go back to work
these evil people who research truth need to get hurt
i'm like that guy on earth, derren brown, i want to prove powers of the mind are fake
if you dont watch tv and be like them then your a snake
"cut down that fucking rain forest", yes boss i'm on it
like Earth's George Bush we hate the law of the jungle, it's shit
NWO.. that's all i'm here for
let's make rules for everything and call it law
i know gods with me
i wear my cross daily
the governments always right, isn't that scary

oh shit nigha, this is too ill!!

i aint rap to be no flashy faggot like tech n9ne
all i wanna do is describe an experience in a rhyme
syllables, metaphors, real rhyme editor
i go to another dimension and back, styles make it better for
you to understand all the shit that i'm going through
even with all my techniques you still can't get what i'm showing you

i aint draw shit for you who need everything sugar coated
you want everything shiny but thats fake, you can quote this

my art allows me to express a higher dimension down to you low lifes
i put you in a trance state whenever i hold mics
you want everything fine tuned and perfected down to a T
but believe me, that weak shit aint reality

i run both sides of the brain, creative and logical
rap computer designs, symbolism, i even rhyme comical
50 percent of todays population can't even control the third circuit
i say fear, stupidity, ignorance and hating are the main culprit
(humanity in general)

even higher beings hate me, but they still watch contently
my future self is king so i can eat plenty

my art is not there to be read in critical ways
if you cannot see the hidden brush strokes, dissing me is yourself getting played

i'm the last poet alive who can show you the truth
when the NWO takes over, artists will turn methodical and disappear like POOF


[they want more son]

they want commands and rules, but no art they fools
no slang, you must communicate through the language of tools
no joy, no fun only laws and lies
how come there isnt any paintings on the starship enterprise
no more strolls through parks, or getting fresh air on a bike
what kind of art do you think bush, obama and the pope like?
i bet they like that funny painting of god and his son pointing fingers
at each other, blaming each other on whose fault it is the NWO's stink still lingers
it takes a real man to the fucking job done
when i see david rockefeller he better run

[oh man, this is that nigga that used to think that the voice on shadow boxin' was sayin 'Omen']


on the spaceship you'll lose alot of things you don't value
until god see's you and asks himself what are you

you'll be on the spaceship till your finally gone
ya torn, and it won't be until your grandkids are born
that the ship finally lands on solid grounds
so you want to be stuck in a spaceship where your soul is bound?

its shit on the spaceship everythings metal
no trees, no bees, no nature no petals
synthetic foods, artificial and fake
how many more rhymes do i have to make
..until the picture is real
the soul needs to breathe too and it does want to feel

when hiphop was born, the rhythm was the rebel
it even touched the heart of the devil and made him feel special
if 2012 is anything like the way hiphop formed
then i might aswell say a new star is born

we cant just take the scientists approach and document the changes
we must feel the change and the most popular hiphop will def. be the strangest
it aint about keeping it real no more
the re-emergence of spiritual energy will put the fake on the floor

"why should man believe in spirits if he doesn't need to?"
"how can we believe in something that's see-through"
some people don't believe in things until it affects them
we're waiting upon an event that finally connects them
all types of life are connected, dont cut yourself short
i've experienced ufo's, spirits, demons, shadow creatures and things of that sort
the earth is living too, so what energy lives within you?
are you going to let the illuminati drain this till its no longer true?

some people are materialistic and seem to succeed in life
rich familes produce what the government consider's right
some people go to uni or college
and think they're intelligent cus they can simply regurgitate the knowledge
but they aint got it in em, no natural talent
the illuminati have got you within the grip of their talons
this here structure is about to collapse
and i'm right here waiting to fill in the gaps

i trained my mind as a weapon using hiphop as a tool
this style here is something unlike you get in school
alliteration and consonance, multisyllable rhymes
imagery, metaphors, analogies are billy analogues crimes
the art of freestyle, i aim for the stars
i aint know what String Theory was until i heard Canibus 100 bars

i started smoking cannabis and read books like jermaine
but the plants taught me the most knowledge i know it sounds strange
now i cant take drugs cus im on medication, can't abuse it
but like a shaman still can get into trance states using tobacco and music
then i start writing these rhymes like killa sin
niggaz never knew, but im the god of planet x, Linstidind

[too much knowlege man!]

they've cloned another sheep and to me it sounds cold
cus now there's another animal out there who don't have a soul
it might still breathe and be able to eat grass
but nigga, karmas a bitch, gonna whoop yo ass
"hi i'm gza and i don't know if my spaceship will work"
"ok let's put a monkey in it to test it, who cares if he gets hurt"
gza is sick like the illuminati created 2012 olympics logo
it's a test they created cus if you see it they call you loco

i'm like canibus on the quest for the truth
but unlike him i've explored my mind and other dimensions to get more proof

yo psychic powers vs the illuminati part 1


yo i was reading my book and on came a crappy song on my ipod
so i put the book down and pressed next and it randomly put on a beat for me to nod
my head to, it was tech n9ne, einstein
then when i looked back at the book i saw e=mc2

then i looked down and saw 'einstein' on the page too
can you understand the styles i manifest
the book was on psychic powers if you have interest
i'm just using this to train the 5th/6th circuit of my brain to be the best


* bows *

i honestly love readin this shit not even tryna hate bro, do your thing man hysterical

Haha, cool rhymes man. Not sure what your story is. Some of this seems serious and then at other times it seems like you're taking the piss. I found some of this shit quite humouress but at the same time you threw down some pretty interesting lines. Entertaining in any case. Good flow for the most part too.