Letter From West Coast...!!
Preliminary Predicate Prefaced ; Preparatory... Zig Zag... Place Chronic... No Lace.. / Shit...!! > Provoke.. Bluebonic... On Clothes..it...... Has Stipulate Hash..> Streetwise. Plant.. / Strategem... / Enhanced.. ./ Sterilize Fact... < Here We Bust,.. Sagging Pants. . Pick Up ..< Specialty Syntax... > Indignant.. Horseplay.. ; Ill Spate.. .. Smitten Smack... > Subside Crack.. < Neat Front Porch . Writing.. Where 2 Live At ... ! Smoking Out The Homie... > Oncoming Dub Sack..! Omnipotent Euphoria. . < Location West Coast..!> Post California.. ! New Omnibus Pertaining Taste.. . > Smoke Cannabis.. .; Blaze All ...< Day Influences... On The Block.. ...:::: E-40 ... N.w.a. ... > 2 Pac .. . No Roadblock ... Down The Street ....: Mac Dre.. , Eazy E ..// Entire Bay.. Request R B L Posse .. > Post-meridian State... > Lesson Length... < Real Not Fake.. .. < Labial Library.. > Lacuna Mockery .. / Iterate Jape.. ; Dont Copy Me... .. > Jack Of All Trades./ Inherent .. .. ; Alter-ego Safe.. ; Inquiry Intrude...> Mental Hallucinate.. . < Invigorates. Aerobic Haste.. . Mixtapes.. Disgrace Commercial Makes.. > Difficult 2 Face.. Invisible Mistakes.. > Analyze Life... Amoral Species.. ; Approximate Kind... ! Much Practice Takes Time..> Appoint Apology Word Line.. > Apprise When 2 Get High.. < Debilitate.. Eyes... > Decamp. . Sight.. < ... Daydream Daze .. Nice .. ; Cool Ice.. < Dazzle Right.. > Decadence.. In Own Mind .. / Clear Pipe .. .. Misread Might ... / Write Mistime.. / / Circa .. < 4:20 > Miscellany .. > ./ Plenty.. < Portal Not Quite.. > Storm Pose Rain.. / Toke And Burn..; Simple > Process. . // Indica Strain .. . < Stimulate Brain... ... Lift West Coast .. On Map.... No Boast.. , Exact.>! .. Self Described Fact... Soporific Angles .. Tangle... > Specific Spirits.. . . Spatial..>/ Square Root Smash Ratio ..> Staccato Facial. .. Truce .. / Wooden Table. ..: True Fable.. .. Its Getting Late Yo.. ! Enter Scene..: Wu-tang Instrumental.. / .. > Turntable.. < Pen On Paper.. .. . Uncertain .. Dying Pencil... .. ; : Undersigned.. Ritual.. >> Neo Style.. mild //
Yours Truly.. ,, :: /// Johnny Tical.... !!
Re: Letter From West Coast...!!
Bandanas from here to Watts, teh cops on teh blocks/
Implantin on us the rocks, Servin beatins on the docks/
Low Low here to krenshaw hittin switches wif bitches/
Done diggin ditches, took the riches we bury the snitches/
From Long Beach ta Compton its da Dro in teh wind/
Knowin we sin, reincarnated so now we growin again/
Billard Blood in da Bay, Um high son what u done say/
Chillin teh killa tay, Rockin old school like Marvin Gaye/
Cali home of the drive-by, curls an the sign/
girls so fine, like suicide they blowin my mind/
done come if u pretty, stay in the New York City/
we showin no pity, get killed for less then two fiddy/
Like Diddy Cali Park Compton Crips be dancin/
Crazy like Manson get smoked cuz u were glancin/
the sun shinnin, the state like granite/
Beat place on the planet, Where u see more titties like janets/
Re: Letter From West Coast...!!
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Originally Posted by JOHNNY_TICAL
Preliminary Predicate Prefaced ; Preparatory... Zig Zag... Place Chronic... No Lace.. / Shit...!! > Provoke.. Bluebonic... On Clothes..it...... Has Stipulate Hash..> Streetwise. Plant.. / Strategem... / Enhanced.. ./ Sterilize Fact... < Here We Bust,.. Sagging Pants. . Pick Up ..< Specialty Syntax... > Indignant.. Horseplay.. ; Ill Spate.. .. Smitten Smack... > Subside Crack.. < Neat Front Porch . Writing.. Where 2 Live At ... ! Smoking Out The Homie... > Oncoming Dub Sack..! Omnipotent Euphoria. . < Location West Coast..!> Post California.. ! New Omnibus Pertaining Taste.. . > Smoke Cannabis.. .; Blaze All ...< Day Influences... On The Block.. ...:::: E-40 ... N.w.a. ... > 2 Pac .. . No Roadblock ... Down The Street ....: Mac Dre.. , Eazy E ..// Entire Bay.. Request R B L Posse .. Yeah San Fran Here!> Post-meridian State... > Lesson Length... < Real Not Fake.. .. < Labial Library.. > Lacuna Mockery .. / Iterate Jape.. ; Dont Copy Me... .. > Jack Of All Trades./ Inherent .. .. ; Alter-ego Safe.. ; Inquiry Intrude...> Mental Hallucinate.. . < Invigorates. Aerobic Haste.. . Mixtapes.. Disgrace Commercial Makes.. > Difficult 2 Face.. Invisible Mistakes.. > Analyze Life... Amoral Species.. ; Approximate Kind... ! Much Practice Takes Time..> Appoint Apology Word Line.. > Apprise When 2 Get High.. < Debilitate.. Eyes... I like the way it reads> Decamp. . Sight.. < ... Daydream Daze .. Nice .. ; Cool Ice.. < Dazzle Right.. > Decadence.. In Own Mind .. / Clear Pipe .. .. Misread Might ... / Write Mistime.. / / Circa .. < 4:20 > Miscellany .. > ./ Plenty.. < Portal Not Quite.. > Storm Pose Rain.. / Toke And Burn..; Simple > Process. . // Indica Strain .. . < Stimulate Brain... ... Lift West Coast .. On Map.... No Boast.. , Exact.>! .. Self Described Fact... Soporific Angles .. Tangle... > Specific Spirits.. . . Spatial..>/ Square Root Smash Ratio ..> Staccato Facial. .. Truce .. / Wooden Table. ..: True Fable.. .. Its Getting Late Yo.. ! Enter Scene..: Wu-tang Instrumental.. / .. > Turntable.. < Pen On Paper.. .. . Uncertain .. Dying Pencil... .. ; : Undersigned.. Ritual.. >> Neo Style.. mild // SickYours Truly.. ,, :: /// Johnny Tical.... !!
Nice Imagery Panoramic Scenery Plenty Picturesque Dreams Of Misery!
Re: Letter From West Coast...!!
Your verses have people reading trying to keep up with your flow. It seems to continue whilst leaving the reader thinking what was the previous line expressing. Nice style. And decent flow.
Peace
PS: Keep posting
