2 rounds, 12 lines just like u said, ill b back on later tonite, so u can spit first or wait for me
-peace
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2 rounds, 12 lines just like u said, ill b back on later tonite, so u can spit first or wait for me
-peace
listen
man u sed u culd step but i dont c nuttin for u to rep/
weve only just begun and im already sayin next/
u goin to hell and im already bein blessed/
rip those rusty lungz out ya so called iron filled chest/
heres somethin for u to test/
how really good are u if u battlin a 16yr old n still gettin wrecked/
u givin me 12 lines and im beatin you in less/
i wont even change the rhymes scheme, wont waste a breathe/
this battle is a joke i wont even need a rest/
cuz u aint fuckin wit a kid u fuckin wit the best/
i was gonna wait but i said fuck it
no hard feelings but it is a battle u no the deal
yo when u gonna spit cuz, im about to start another battle wit someone else
get at me
sorry man, i won't be able to drop till tomorrow, so do the other battle first if you wanna
I smack wack cats like this for fun, respect yo elders
I take the track back son, spark liquid metal like a welder
you think you is blessed? yo ass is cursed
get out of this mess so i don't blast you first
you cudn't drop 12 lines, you don't have the endurance
and skill's not what you need, you better get an insurance
man, you cudn't hit me with one of your rhymes
so sayin you the best is wastin a line,
cuz i've seen hundred verses that are just the same
you can't flip the scheme, your metaphors is lame
you can't come original, can't make it visual, so how's this
i'll sow your eyes fixed, make you watch as i throat-fuck your bitch
now that ive got ur attention i think it would be wise for u to ask for an extension/
u kno u cant beat me in 2 verses not to mention no doubt whose gonna win this election/
5-0 votes is a unanimous decision no question u cant step to this rap slash invention/
u couldnt even touch it cuz u wuld get n infection/
my mind is a big muscle that constantly b flexin nd its a rap battle so who gives a fuck wut u bench pressin, this forum dont got room for u so stop stressin/
ill take you out ya misery so u can retire wit a pension/
by the way ur dick wouldn’t touch the sides of my bitches mouth/
after I already stretched it out, so look elsewhere/
matter of fact did I see ur mom on welfare/
nah I wont go there, keep it gereneral, im a strike you a spare/
listen to the critics sayin dam this shit wasn’t fair/
that little nigga gave it to em right there/
ill start respectin my elders when theres something to respect/
u wanna go down my girl throat but u culdnt reach her neck
yo i was feelin ur verse fareal, get at me
Stop talkin bout what i can't do, do something ya self
Fuck it, i ain't gonna malm you, i'll give ya some help
I'm white, i'm from norway, i can't do the slang
my best line was bout someone u know i'm gon bang
and now i'm spittin my last verse like eminem on 8 mile
and still i fuck you up like damn! i got weight, style
besides flow which you cudda never have heard of
still i keep killin you like i'm macgyver, you murdoch
don't even speak on my mom when you don't know who your father is
this clown-ass cat is spittin shit i can't be bothered with
as for your bitch, she must be one tall chick
if i can't reach her neck, fuck it! YOU still on my dick
good battle man, your last verse was a big improvement!
can mod post "votes needed"?
peace
ill be the 1st voter, but ya gotta vote on my battles to finish em (only 2 more)
il-aw
flow 8-7.5
wrdply 8-7.75
punches 9-8.5
crtivty 8-8
vocab 8-8
v= il, u sounded readier, and more hungry to win
good battle, by the way, when i said u culdnt reach her neck i meant as in ur dick was too small to reach to the back and not that shes to tall, but its all good, lol nice verse
1-0 ironlungz
Iron Lungz takes it, Aded definetly had some confidence in what he was saying but I didn't see any lines that backed it up, no metaphors, basically no similies, no visuals....ya got to step it up man, IL saw the same thing and basically tried to just help out in the second verse, props for that
Yo the battle ground was heated this go-round
But I'm feelin Lungz, Shorty Ad had some nice lines
but they didnt strike me like some of LUngs shits
this line in particuler (as for your bitch, she must be one tall chick
if i can't reach her neck, fuck it! YOU still on my dick)
I got waht he ment and that shit had me rollin.
Lungz AD
flow 8 8
wrdply 8 7
punches 9 8
crtivty 8 9
vocab 8 8
Lungz won this round
Big up's to both Rottin rhymers
peace thanks for the votes, ggod battle fo sho... i'ma drop some votes on other battles later today.... as for now i'ma hit the library...
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Yo, Ironlungz KILLED it with that last line...when it comes to flow, adedwutang had Lungz, but his rhymes were kinda simplistic...Lungz managed to stay complex, and get in his shots edgewise...that line is going in my sig. Yeah boy!
VOTE=Ironlungz