The Lyricist

Tell me what u lot think

You are listening to the Lyricist
The lyrical deconstructionist
A shia islamist
I aint a terrorist although I’m a Brutal arsonist
I want to expose Israeli fundamentalist
Coz I’m a anti Zionist
Remember that prophet muhammed cartoonist?
I’m not gonna let that Danish Pussy exist
So make sure u dn’t make me clinch my fist
Coz u will be part of my hit list
Forget assassinating me coz I’m an immortalist
I am also a historical chronologist
U know the Space race between the capitalist and communist?
The Americans didn’t walk on the moon they hired professional illusionists

I Will be recruiting people like Malcolm X
In the procces assassinating prime suspects
Your crew is nothing apart from rejects
Remember bin laden didn’t blow up the projects
U ain’t ready for my ideologies they are too complex
Making u motionless coz your perplex

thats some nice shit yo, you got some BIG words goin and thats allways cool..
keep tha steam up..

peace

It was str8 theres room 4 improvment though

haha, that was really funny man. Its very nicely written, but as far as a rap flow i think it was kind of off, but only because you had to use such big words. Really intelligent rap though, just kind of written in essay form.

SAFE people

Check this people

I’m darker then Darth Vader,
I will slice u in half with my light saber,
If u enter my country I will track u with my radar,
And run you down with my bulletproof hummer,
In the process I will rip out your gall bladder
Leaving u in a life threatening coma,
When I visit u I will break your knee caps with my sledge hammer
One strike will make your legs shatter
If u declare war I will take war to your country coz I’m a suicide bomber.
In case u forgot store this in your head and remember,
I ain’t Bin Laden and ain’t George bush either,
I’m a natural born leader, like Xerxes and Julius Caesar.

nice vocab:thumbup:the flo cud improve tho
peace

Thanks for the feedback peeps. In what ways can flow b improved.

Yo i'm workin on this 1 at the moment

It’s time for me to lyrically tear the zionist into pieces
Now I know why Jews all look the same coz they only marry their nieces
They don’t let Palestinians live in peace there houses are surrounded by fences
U best protect your olive shaped, obsessed president coz when I’m in town I will reduce his life chances.