I'm walking I'm living

I gotta levitate above the water like I'm walking
With punchlines I penetrate the boarder with compelling extortion
It's the lord with the broad sword ready to cut
Fronting huffing and puffing blood rushing ready to strut
Ready to bust an upper cut to your gut
Ninja stars are spinning rapidly so you better duck
Better get the fuck up out of here till it's to late
Knuckle up give you a toothache turn your brains to toothpaste
For being belated you get liquidated in a whisk
In an abyss you get assassinated in the mist
What's created is the money for the rich
In this blazon we blaze on saying money is a bitch
You ain't funny you a prick
With your muscle we don't struggle we bust your tummy with the clips
I'm running this shit quick in a condominium we forced to conspire
Hotter than fire thrown off the top forced off the spire
Caught on the wire tripping you up sounding the alarm
I got this kingdom ringing in the palm...
Of my hands arms of the clan disarming your gang
Starting to ban smacked wrist to smacked hand in debar
I'm a pioneer going on a journey see how far
About 20 miles 20 styles divided into 2 different files
In the department with the parchment in the most significant isles
I'm belligerent for a while all heated up
Come within a certain distance of my rage ya'll get beaten up
Like the belly of the beast eaten up where juices simmer
Having dinner grabbing the inner intestines of the living winner
I want the throne the jewels and the stones
Instead of getting thrown in the cat-a-combs with the bones I'll live alone
Never give up my home without I fight
How my supposed to bless and show my success without a mic

On a mic I fight divide amongst the plight
When I ride I strike leave ya on the blight
Leave it on the bright like a diamond I'm shining like corraskate
Glimmering blinding climbing to conquer and dominate
I abominate like it's in my blood and I'm akin
To the king next of kin step with a spring I rep do my thing
Thrown in a sling you couldn't escape
Tracking down the silver ring till you get checkmate
The next earthquake that makes the earth shake where there's active volcano's
Turbulance bring forth Tsanami acting like tornados
But I paint rainbows and retrieve the gold
No hate can penetrate my cardiac and leave it cold
I need my soul uncontrolable to the grim reeper
I'm looking searching eagerly so I dig deeper

Very good the first 8 lines really were good, as well as the whole piece.

Thanks

Liked the newest piece you posted, you cane with vivid imagery and a good vocab to describe your technique, i caught the wu influence in this. The rhyme scheme could've been more complex and i would've liked to see you tackle a more original topic but this was good reading.

Keep posting man.

Once again let's get this popping karate chopping the ice in 7 sheets
You got problems with beef across 7 different streets
7 different beats mixed and fused for the new creation
Causing devistation land mines scream detonation
This generation is more wild than the last
Back cutting cause my styles grandmaster like flash
I attack this track like a swarm of bees
Unleash what's within calling the beast
Break the cage bend the bars
I'm the alpha so I defend the stars
Affend the sharks cause they be biting to often
Copying darts why aren't you fighting your problems
It's a mess and I guess my progress can mend
part of the begining half of the end
rap and defend this fortification I send in delegates
Cause they trying to decimate besiege and penetrate
Still I elavate to the top of the world
Bring forth fire water earth and winds that wirl

u improvin...keep training...the road will be difficult, but with discipline the peaks will be reached...