"show These Crabs How To Rhyme Thread"

Peekaboo, let the iller killa through
Your dumb like that lil bit of gum stuck to my shoe
Fe-Fi-Fo-Fum, Honey Dipped like Pooh
More money than a jew scrounging through peru

Dope rhymes are essential to your ego
So people watch me stand tall like a steeple
I'm iced like christ pulling a heist
Entice fiesty miser's who i chop up and dice

Like leatherhead I shred dead bodies up in my shed
Chainsaw chicken's like a rhode island red
Spliff head smoking too much weed fucked my head
Up so i packed up and got the fuck out the thread



*dead* }:T

First class flying above the smoke, and ash
Beneath me ground level explosion like the Hiroshima aftermath
Mental pass cloud nine levels unknown
rewarded the keys of hell to torture Satan with these poems
The true power of skill is hidden and not shown
When displayed those in heat ran for shade
Where the executioner jumped out and executed the brigade
Chopped down the trees above sea another bridge made
Once burned to be rebuilt a born killer feeling no guilt
Teaching my son wisdom spreading myself on the run
Animal instinct to attack those who threaten the kingdom
Iron fist ruler like Genghis khan the days are young
Outside during scary hours robbing cowards for their guns
I wrote the blueprint for who i was to become
A warrior in the jungle opposite of humble reaction
Money to the bank robber transformed transaction

slash the dash, crash the Porsche my horse was flossed
clone domes openly raid pros for flows futurama drama timed armor/
boxed reality jacking backen stacked cattle draddle you tattles
you can't scatter like roaches we apporaches focused on scopes/
drop bones clocked stones you can't fall and trip think you get the tip
you can't spit in black snow and except to flow cold as hell/
drag you from the hells of the depths my chambers
be rearranged in dominant domains open cellars of pain/
came on hoes with skills that float out cha sting ya like bees
read cha sights so you can see bleed cha regin you ain't got game/
shogun assassinate cha primate in time mate we awake
back from a break we transform and roll out/
sold out? never we show e'm how
front cha now blunt cha how/
crunch cha down, punch cha pow!! boom!! bang!! biff!!
switch dance partners as we slice you in 36 pieces, read my thesis/
featuring this... the predatory educating it is what isn't
so you can't figdet the widget you still cannot target/
i pardon the interupt now you get heart of a lion
stigma blot cha plots in blood's aprons that chef was baking wit/

Skull cracking partnership the universal star above the battleships
In a jet sick hovering above the strips unleaded fugitive
Commercial saints bound, then gagged remove the ribs
Smoothest digs feast on your eats finger fuck your wis
Crabs i give knuckle stamps to wigs the pressure rigged
Drop kick the pigs tainted bids for niggas that fire fibs
Never approached with true lies props for shows we did
The PJ's paid a grenade in the crate no bloody escape
Fly with a cape sexual carnival bitches drop the drapes
Chest banging apes monkeys with big bananas
My grapes blue thanks to dirty Diana
Removed her bathrobe dug her out til i curled her toes
I'm fish market fresh passed every exam without studying
no who's the best? Buddha blessed recitals
Marley joints and sideshow sauwed offs
Atheists stabbed in eyes with a cross
Inherit the voodoo dolls evil as i launch
Gym stars loaded kiss the dragon needles
Watch out for feeble feds riding in regals
half nice soda drinking rappers feel the slice
Orange juice leaking learn how to copyright
Abstract ice i bam bam for life

stained glass flash the cash brash the brand crash the cam drama be commas
we inserting when we taking off time dropping dime isn't my thang thang/
black snow cold opperating doctor adminsttrating proctoring time tablets
habitat rappers act hacker slash wit blades we crashing through sets/
blazing saddles caddle fashion pistola cold rover solider through moves
screw schooling i'm tooling up utility bats acrane tame dames/
bristol through those pay lins when pains are aching we awaken
darken harts we harden prickly the flesh be attested gun jabbing/
switch cha stance my lines be riddles unfiltered
kill your codes mines be molds that's no honed yet/
press ya kits flip vids kiss ya kids goodnight
rewrite scripts film the bitch press it up and ship back to studios/

we mgm
we warn a brother
we time wanting
we venomous artisans
we carpeting archtypes

My force blasts warp we move like wasps on your fort
Gas masks on while smoking those new squares by the Port
authority authorized by red eyed guys with no remorse
Painful hits scrabble scripts readers digest these thoughts
Me and Chaos rhyme like none novels deep still not done
Van Goph paintings on walls my misery numerous calls
Swifter than Kanye with that Taylor diss
My sound clicks optimistic like the sound of blackness
Sound theory blasting bedroom speakers soundproof

crushing bust dusted off the fluids screw losing
i'm bruising darts leaving you smoked up like you was chilling wit dogs at the whorehouse/
score bound trounce you townslands my brownstone be cold as a brick boldly hitting you
thinking i'm bugs when your just a bunny with a carrot in yo mouth/
vicious sick nutritious sid cha andreas i'm canvasing the pad with pens
end cha lens when skills that be potent leaving nothing left after i steps in the place/
i can do bad all by myself without a dart your just an al la cart can't even spark
your darts aren't even battery power just a tower with no juice in it/
best stop drinking them red bulls they ain't giving you wings
they giving you burst anchors weighing you down after they burning you out/

I don't sleep insomnia man dangerous like the streets of Afghanistan
opposition stuck like traffic jams leave bodies destroyed like ham
a hot spitting cold man when it's on cowards running for cover like beavers in dams
Thoughts deeper than clans and protesting Iranians
Body fluids I'm draining them doing autopsies in the stadiums
My hustle don't knock it or be prepared to run from flying rockets
Rats snitching stop it or else your laying on the block hit
uncontrollable like gang violence the pigs can't stop this
revolver delivery uncut raw crack flow
Packaged to blow over standing these pre-school subliminal s
louder than crows basement full of corpses decomposed
basemen racing to fill your face with holes
you mice trapped for the cheese they sold their souls
devil controlled population soon to be slaughtered sheep
by the time i get to Arizona I'll be the public enemy
Living amongst base heads, and bloodsuckers
my cribs tapped so i speak in codes to brothers

joker jacker pol pot packer smash avid rappers be unfinished pics
dicpited deciphered by hirogliphs i rip through spacial ships/
cause the fuzz in your dome to leak out of rome
open bar, open poem loan a lone ranger danger/
middle named him jacab bobby malcom rocking talcum power
drop a heat rocket leave your brain unplugged from the socket/
can you kick it flick it up like motion picture
you can't even register to vote with out an oar to the boat/
wrote cha own death note remember me The "L" that excels
spell out cha nature debate cha against the principles of kira/
i'm the paul bearer to any emcee trying to under take the taker
mission breaker lionsault smashing crash your party wrecking havoc
snap my fingers and the tities come out like MAGIC!!!!!!!/

fishing in the pool of thoughts caught one school of darts
Do the walk lit trees left Bubba sparked
Baking soda thugs in clubs, pubs, and parks
Bag them for bragging the dragon with a fiery heart
Motion picture scriptures a prelude of marks
and markings face masked so u can't see who's talking
stalking dimes with pecan complexions and stockings
splash the tragic it's sad to see a severed savage
Hit women without the baggage
slide out the lab that's lavish when i was homeless i was the saddest
Young dirty bastard surrounded by crying doves
you can keep the faith like Evans but you gets no love

It’s the one man wrecking machine dexterity can’t cure
Found cha buried in the interior/
Coming super superior out cha area
Now you want to test the best even now/
Deadly wit the pen chapow growl out cha snarl
I bound cha together like a book and toss ya ass in the recycling bin/
You ain’t winning you ain’t got the gimmicks to mimic
This ain’t wrestling you ain’t maneuvering on me/
Hit cha psychotically psychoanalysis can’t prognosis
When try n diagnosis I’m just too focused roasting emcees like bon fire/
Shock you with electrodes you don’t got probes to unload
I’m the matrix you cannot infect so easily/
So don’t underestimate the ripper so sicker
I can flick it up and leave your boo asking who is he/
It’s the sheep didn’t cha peep or did cha catch Z’s the cousin of death
I’m not the referee, I’m just sickest you’ll ever see when you step in the place to be/

from any angle i can disconnect cha brain leave your spine smashed to bits
and continious ask you what's this.........oh it's your brain on drugs/
suckers get dumped like dogs in muzzles you can't puzzle a brat
spit out cha wack lyrics you can't even ghost write that/
i write down darts with domes chopping up flows like producers do metronomes
expose your flow like bad snares and propped up hi-hats
that can't clash like symbols you don't hear or appear/

Swear by the sweat in my pores I'm leaking piss raw
Unleash the blow dog paw contenders flying through walls
Names written in blood capitalized though the block letters small
Chained to crawl and brawl me against all
Who oppose easy murders on Sundays slow
retarded beating on heathens to scar the evenings
Fatherless flow i keep up with life changers and snipe mic stranglers
let go or hands break get out like Jo Jo niggas evacuate
The premises y'all premature menaces
straight up society enemy from know til entities
drunken box champ full bottle remedy

Postimus ravenous I’m back from the depths of hell, tarterus
Back up on the primus I’m data reconfigured trigger me you’ll get expelled/
From the dope era back in the quote era you hipster don’t get the picture in picture
Your frugal like a plasma tv screen, get cha grime I slime all over your dreams/
I’m ghost that hasn’t never been busted been tagged wit the logo of the sheep
Never lead to the cliff, I’m man your pastor talked about accompaied moses/
Dipped of ticker slipped off in the shadows, battles acosted me on trees
Spree past cha leaves watch fall receive prediction, clicked up addiction/
Flicked up panels from 80’s saw acuras, caddy’s and delorians imporium
Chastized rap guys they can’t be truth be telling lies to your vision/
Pyrex pots my pans be beats I beat cha wit
like dinosaurs wit frying pans in hand/
scroll unload cha mold my flow froze
check your load watch the style progress/
process me like an intel atom being spliced like nutrino nulcetides
my raps are phantoms you can’t phathom/
stole your masterpiece with the van gogh sheets
watch them warhols before your art thou that sparks that don’t have a cow/

I'm sO ill i need a dust-mask when i go on blast
the way i wreck it, you could say i'm infected
i eat these emcees and I leave em digested
twenty eight days later and hip hop is resurrected
but ninety point ninety nine are rejected
i'm mighty fine with tidy lines, but i'm reckless
I was accepted cause I ink in excess
i got punches that'll crumple your solar plexus
you at the doctor like, "yo check this"
"I'm sorry, sir, but he's left you legless
And it looks like you'll need an expert dentist.
Cause you bitin crowns in every sentence"
Sight n sounds, i'm strikin lightnin down
till im ignightin the bounds of the fightin grounds
who's hypin now?
the defender and the hero, to be defined
On September three zero,
oh nine

it's the razor sharp sheep cut cha while ya sleeping
i'm the one who's deeply destroying opponents close it down like area 51/
spit syndromes infect any who comes near
radiate rappers with all the wackness they ain't guaranteed plaques
just rotten raps stinking up the tracks they meet when they get on/
get cha brain shattered like a car crash handed on a silver platter
don't got the edge to sharpen the darts i cut wood wit/
flip the switch shock you with a thousand volts of electricity
you can't pre-date the predatory ways
flows in styles emcees can't even enclave/

I bomb caves and stay calm in the shock wave
like green berets, i raid through fallin stockades
three years after saddam paid
i induce flashbacks of abu gharib
are you saved?
u hit with that spiritual phase when your world is dark.
I reverse your spark like lois and clark
place you in that space before you start
so you don't bus back like rosa parks.
no club and i ain't got no stolen parts
lion cubs, jah wants emboldened hearts
targets hung over astrological charts
its your turn and you holdin the darts

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Originally Posted by J.T.S.

Swear by the sweat in my pores I'm leaking piss raw
Unleash the blow dog paw contenders flying through walls
Names written in blood capitalized though the block letters small
Chained to crawl and brawl me against all
Who oppose easy murders on Sundays slow
retarded beating on heathens to scar the evenings
Fatherless flow i keep up with life changers and snipe mic stranglers
let go or hands break get out like Jo Jo niggas evacuate
The premises y'all premature menaces
straight up society enemy from know til entities
drunken box champ full bottle remedy

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nice one j.t.s havent peeped ur thread in a bit thats my bad, but im back :cheerlie:

Thanks fam peace.

Weapons deception criminal complex conception
85 couldn't analyze the lesson or understand the expression
The warehouse scanned for fed taps so they scrapped confessions
Of inside infiltration a puzzle for secret agents
blow job bitches swallowing information
Another officer hit no DNA professional wig splits

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Originally Posted by J.T.S.

Weapons deception criminal complex conception
85 couldn't analyze the lesson or understand the expression
The warehouse scanned for fed taps so they scrapped confessions
Of inside infiltration a puzzle for secret agents
blow job bitches swallowing information
Another officer hit no DNA professional wig splits

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continue to pig split and sic signatures against your dog's dinner,
these gods' scripture chisel single digits on iddd-gits grills,
drawn bigger,
follow the fallin liquor and get chopped in au8ht 5igga ligaments for censure
no beginner's luck,
I'm here for the shark's dinner and you lunch
chew slugs and spew huge chunks on your girl's cute juggs
this is four you punks,
1'm 2 huge for your lil' jumps,
it's like I'm Hugh payin ur BM for a few pumps







Yeah right!





No dis to you and yours
I felt you and wanted to add on.
Mary+OB4CL2
peace

[QUOTE=.5KutSkeleton;1706452]continue to pig split and sic signatures against your dog's dinner,
these gods' scripture chisel single digits on id dd-gits grills,
drawn bigger,
follow the fallin liquor and get chopped in au8ht 5igga ligaments for censure
no beginner's luck,
I'm here for the shark's dinner and you lunch
chew slugs and spew huge chunks on your girl's cute juggs
this is four you punks,
1'm 2 huge for your lil' jumps,
it's like I'm Hugh payin ur BM for a few pumps

Continue to dump bodies of chumps with my wasteland pump
Quicksand comes beneath your feet you sinking in city slums
Chums challenge I'm styling on them wolves on the run
Merciless to see you not exist exit the stage bitch
Magnetic scripts with attraction powers
Cowards thrown off light towers i don't fight flowers
Ripped out soil skin skinned for that oil
make your mark or else your cabbage is sparked
Sight is dark above all Hannibal escape jack the Benz parked
Crash course collision on thin ice were skidding
Given a sentence that demented that thought of repentance
The chair thrown at the judge the one with the grudge sent it

[QUOTE=J.T.S.;1706844]

Quote:

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Originally Posted by .5KutSkeleton

continue to pig split and sic signatures against your dog's dinner,
these gods' scripture chisel single digits on id dd-gits grills,
drawn bigger,
follow the fallin liquor and get chopped in au8ht 5igga ligaments for censure
no beginner's luck,
I'm here for the shark's dinner and you lunch
chew slugs and spew huge chunks on your girl's cute juggs
this is four you punks,
1'm 2 huge for your lil' jumps,
it's like I'm Hugh payin ur BM for a few pumps

Continue to dump bodies of chumps with my wasteland pump
Quicksand comes beneath your feet you sinking in city slums
Chums challenge I'm styling on them wolves on the run
Merciless to see you not exist exit the stage bitch
Magnetic scripts with attraction powers
Cowards thrown off light towers i don't fight flowers
Ripped out soil skin skinned for that oil
make your mark or else your cabbage is sparked
Sight is dark above all Hannibal escape jack the Benz parked
Crash course collision on thin ice were skidding
Given a sentence that demented that thought of repentance
The chair thrown at the judge the one with the grudge sent it

---

Reduced to a Smudge Batterd n Bruised Bones Reduced to a Slush
To late to Undone what was Done, so i Knew what Was Com-ing
as i Choose to Do Dumb Things, my Moves were Just Crumb-ling'
Under my Clumsyness, Something's Gotta Give, Lucky for Alotta Things
nothings Funny so whats tha point in Bothering, if its cowaredly
erase ya Colony, in aprox-i-mea-lit-y, a couple seconds Destructive Intentions u can Construct Defences, but its never Enough up Aganist tha Unpleaseant Agression

[QUOTE=White N Dangerous;1707539]

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Originally Posted by J.T.S.

Reduced to a Smudge Batterd n Bruised Bones Reduced to a Slush
To late to Undone what was Done, so i Knew what Was Com-ing
as i Choose to Do Dumb Things, my Moves were Just Crumb-ling'
Under my Clumsyness, Something's Gotta Give, Lucky for Alotta Things
nothings Funny so whats tha point in Bothering, if its cowaredly
erase ya Colony, in aprox-i-mea-lit-y, a couple seconds Destructive Intentions u can Construct Defences, but its never Enough up Aganist tha Unpleaseant Agression

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Everybody living wants to be a legend regretting their sorrows
Continuing the same mistakes knowledge can't be borrowed
A carload of misplaced cargo never ending baggage
Traveling madness a souvenir for a savage

Free style to jay d.o.a

the only other nigga to blaze harriet tubman
hitt it raw spit and pound my chest while she moanin
this the 2 thous plus 9
niggas stealin rhymes commit crimes
comp get covered like songs 100o's of times
pistols blast em like stars and enquires
keep a burner blazin like chefs in hells kitchen fire
rip mic phones link with apple factual
revelations theres an app for that
designin niggas craft bullets after da vinci
the sun dont chill tho i keep the other side frosty
used to rock the fat belly like garvey
christina got me wantin a sixer
so i work out like level 3 pen niggas
how my mic sound like god or hovah
cuz thats what im aimin transmission over

the only other nigga to blaze harriet tubman
hitt it raw spit and pound my chest while she moanin
this the 2 thous plus 9
niggas stealin rhymes commit crimes
comp get covered like songs 100o's of times
pistols blast em like stars and enquires
keep a burner blazin like chefs in hells kitchen fire
rip mic phones link with apple factual
revelations theres an app for that
designin niggas craft bullets after da vinci
the sun dont chill tho i keep the other side frosty
used to rock the fat belly like garvey
christina got me wantin a sixer
so i work out like level 3 pen niggas
how my mic sound like god or hovah
cuz thats what im aimin transmission over[/QUOTE]


Guns down let's see who can oversee each round
As the dedicated practitioners perfect blows, and pounds
Movements of clowns attract the circus shorten their circuits
An obvious master of magnificent titles for certain
you emcee's got skirts in closets only ones in y'all wallets
Begging for change rejected by big names you dream of title gains
billing drinks you can't afford ammo your giving your enemies more
Unaware of what's in store a buy out for sure
Everything on the market murk ed including clubs blood on dance floors
Lance lord used to prance poor deeper than ant wars
My brain colonies explore no exaggerated metaphors
Metal pours mixed with acid i blasted your facade swords

Smoke toked murder wrote stainless steel quotes
A haven of notes to culture shock racist folk
Rhymes remote they vary by variety
Channels unnumbered watch waters exit quietly
Spot their irony 4 devils died silently
From quiet weapons tested, and approved with no defections
everyday is a lesson so get your life off repeat count blessings
Learn from mistakes i never could relate to fakes
House protected by a live shock gate
Hands off or get smacked down no more teeth to floss
Those who refuse to worship him inherit the cross
Carried for miles every blow leaves the crowds aroused
Death isn't far as vultures hover around
Head rocks the crown of thorns pain pass the norm
I've been reborn ribbons in the sky as i perform
No more struggle your flows popped as bubbles
Blood seethes in puddles i published the trouble
record sells double as teams of producers huddle
Ball thrown your defense owned i touched down home
With a Rome warrior nature to kill cats that cast stones
Bully clones domes damaged the sight was savage
a perfect combination in the ring made boxers vanish
Mannish men sniped in contempt to never test again
body your pride your whole empire petrified by no weapon
Just a setting of deceit, and conceit in the beat session
Seated the judge as the heated thug caught clips for a grudge
entered his fitted snug wounds to be operated on at noon
while he lay in the room i stay in tune
Even in death these rhymes blossom, and bloom
Tip for your goons save that loose change
Pennies add up retards ask for me to explain
My moves are secrets never revealed
Scrolls hidden you want a preview drop Amil
My skill makes them want to blast the steel

[QUOTE=J.T.S.;1713440]

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Originally Posted by White N Dangerous

Everybody living wants to be a legend regretting their sorrows
Continuing the same mistakes knowledge can't be borrowed
A carload of misplaced cargo never ending baggage
Traveling madness a souvenir for a savage

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by J.T.S.

Guns down let's see who can oversee each round
As the dedicated practitioners perfect blows, and pounds
Movements of clowns attract the circus shorten their circuits
An obvious master of magnificent titles for certain
you emcee's got skirts in closets only ones in y'all wallets
Begging for change rejected by big names you dream of title gains
billing drinks you can't afford ammo your giving your enemies more
Unaware of what's in store a buy out for sure
Everything on the market murk ed including clubs blood on dance floors
Lance lord used to prance poor deeper than ant wars
My brain colonies explore no exaggerated metaphors
Metal pours mixed with acid i blasted your facade swords

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nice

Quote:

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Originally Posted by J.T.S.

Smoke toked murder wrote stainless steel quotes
A haven of notes to culture shock racist folk
Rhymes remote they vary by variety
Channels unnumbered watch waters exit quietly
Spot their irony 4 devils died silently
From quiet weapons tested, and approved with no defections
everyday is a lesson so get your life off repeat count blessings
Learn from mistakes i never could relate to fakes
House protected by a live shock gate
Hands off or get smacked down no more teeth to floss
Those who refuse to worship him inherit the cross
Carried for miles every blow leaves the crowds aroused
Death isn't far as vultures hover around
Head rocks the crown of thorns pain pass the norm
I've been reborn ribbons in the sky as i perform
No more struggle your flows popped as bubbles
Blood seethes in puddles i published the trouble
record sells double as teams of producers huddle
Ball thrown your defense owned i touched down home
With a Rome warrior nature to kill cats that cast stones
Bully clones domes damaged the sight was savage
a perfect combination in the ring made boxers vanish
Mannish men sniped in contempt to never test again
body your pride your whole empire petrified by no weapon
Just a setting of deceit, and conceit in the beat session
Seated the judge as the heated thug caught clips for a grudge
entered his fitted snug wounds to be operated on at noon
while he lay in the room i stay in tune
Even in death these rhymes blossom, and bloom
Tip for your goons save that loose change
Pennies add up retards ask for me to explain
My moves are secrets never revealed
Scrolls hidden you want a preview drop Amil
My skill makes them want to blast the steel

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niceness son

RYHME FEST I CANT STAND WACK FLOWS
AFTER YOUR BEST 16 I STUFF IT LIKE SCARECROWS
FILL YOU WITH THE FORCE LIKE YODA
M.C.s LACKIN CRACK NEED MORE BAKIN SODA
MY FURY UNLEASHED CALL THE RAP JET LI
IN YOUR CITY WITH A BLADE SHARPER THAN WESLEY SNIPES
LOOKIN FOR THESE FUNNY RAP GOONS 2 MAKE LIGHT
LETTIN KNOWLEDGE BE BORN IGNORANCE TAKES FLIGHT
LIKE A LIU KANE KICK
RAP CZAR SMOKE THE CIGARS
ONLY IF ITS FILLED UP WITH FRUIT IN IT
JIMMY HENDRIX WITH OUT THE H
SLAMMIN ON NIGGAS PAT EWING NO KNEE BRACE
FORM IN THE PATTERN THE ALPHA AND OMEGA
NIGGAS TRY 2 HATE FAIL PLAY SELF LIKE SEGA
BIG BREAD LIKE CAKE WALKS
IM A PULL A CAPPADONNA JUST AIM ME AT THE CHARTS

Thanks for the love guys!!

Yo, I dont know if this is the right thread, but ive been writing for a few months, im trying to get some criticism or feedback on how I can improve, heres a few of my verses.

my raps can split an atom, i spit science of rockets
burn corneas i scorch eyeballs out of the sockets
dont knock it, i can magnetize money out your pockets\
inspiration, hit a wall jumpover dont writers block it
dont question my methods, i spit lessons
have you chopped like some meat in a delicatessen
felon obesseive, what comes out my mouth is agressive
vocal vibrations creating conjugating a hidden message
see the truth for what it is illuminati
pump shotty for interlopers who tryn to stop me



apply the skin to the skeleton the scipture to the scroll
paint a picture with the melon and, the knowledge yo behold
into the mold i pour the liquid wax for the creation
causein fresh impressions, and unfamilar sensations
mutation of the natural toungue has been enhanced
but acknowleging the culture like natives fire and dance
transplant wisdom of the old into the youth of today
a formula for innovation, dettering dismay
whatever articulated rises up and implodes
sending shrapnel every which way wisdom bestowed
i hold the key that opens the vault of creativity
music drops it unlocks spillin words hit the beat
way of attacking emcees is similar to military
divide and conquer but its stealthy to the contrary
from here he ties the loose ends and adds finishing touches
x marks the spot so now i got em in my clutches


do rappers a favour my flavour is immpecable
im intellectual when you spit its inacceptable
my tech is full of full metal jackets im packin ratchets
infact im john mackinroe hit you with a tennis racket
my team aline in formation speak divin information
line for line its amazin combine divine innovation
writin rhymes in the basement strategic placement
your facing embrace the content i live with no laments
ima marksmen my bars are like 50 cal razors
with a red dot lazer attached able to hit from far back
ive attacked wack fools on the tarmac in preschool
so listen up because im here to teach rules
one, dont mess with the 7 letter smooth
ill remove your head from your shoulders if i disaprove
two, dont speak to me once ive begun
i spit words sicker then h 1 n 1

my raps can split an atom, i spit science of rockets
burn corneas i scorch eyeballs out of the sockets
dont knock it, i can magnetize money out your pockets
Dope



apply the skin to the skeleton the scipture to the scroll
paint a picture with the melon and, the knowledge yo behold
into the mold i pour the liquid wax for the creation
causein fresh impressions, and unfamilar sensations
nice wordplay
way of attacking emcees is similar to military
divide and conquer but its stealthy to the contrary
from here he ties the loose ends and adds finishing touches
x marks the spot so now i got em in my clutches
also nice

thanks for the feedback

exploitation of mistakes we got choices
my sentiment inaudable i write to voice it
mind over matter, words can shatter a persuasion
will power decisions is the correct equasion
you could become a private stand and suffer inline
take orders from everybody not utilisin your mind
approach the situation when you in position of demand
choake the weakness that inhabits you and start makin commands
when the hands of all humans crush the shallow
i will emerge from the sand with deathly hallows
shoot burning arrows at all of the opposition
your eyes is mad narrow so open your mental vision
accept my manner, every man for himself
you slept, i aint changed, its the cards i was dealt
each and every person has weakness and strengths
so embrace the good and tolerate to a length


thoughts on bicycles while im rollin down streets
my brain spins like the chain interlocking the teeth
mocking this beat, zoom into it like binicoluars see
unpopular he let his mind drift, the lockers empty
the concrete seen many things, people rise and fall
a good kid growing up comprimising it all
falling off, teachers askin where he been cant recall
now hes rollin in stalls scralliin words on the wall
the sky darkens, birds will vanish and hide, they can sense it
the atmosphere is getting darker and cold, growing tension
dissension sun and cloud fighting for attention
bad surroundings can inffluence bad result suspension
precipitation foggin windows is holdin him back
gotta get out, lockeddown,hes shackled and trapped
when the sky clears he disappears, persevere,
shed a tear move on, the concsience is clear


^dont have much experience writing with that style, what yall think

Never tolerated the overrated this spots mine dictated
Many fables faded due to what he created the date stated
On the finished production the beats seduction to the eardrum
Pressed, and packaged to arrive on shelves by tomorrow at one
will it sell or flop? Will it collect dust, or will he have to restock?
Only time will tell the release date as avid fans flock
To purchase the LP we saw lines for blocks
Boosters, mad cops even copped it the day it dropped
people are pleased singing the hooks, and lyrics driving high speed
verses memorized by seeds who just learned how to speak
The songs even made enemies congregate in harmony
Congratulations on the plaque some proceeds i gave back
Signed hundreds of copies of the LP, papers, backs, and hats
Touring reassuring the critics he gives energy the game lacks
From N.Y. to L.A.X. he commands stages with tremendous effects
The workload seems heavy but he feels too blessed to rest
Assured respect to his devotion instead of coastal boasting
he continues grinding and half the worlds vibing
See's the opportunity as a pool then dives in
unaware of a situation he exits the palladium silent
Then out of nowhere things get violent
Gunshots people drop and some emcee's are still rhyming

throw your axes i rack your facts get cha heads severed like live server, when i am surfing the web you best cut cha connection so you'll be deemed detected/
injected a weapon infection are you comprehending what i am saying....?
get cha team, they're all snakes bretryal waits in bushes and leave while u lay/
get cha grave symbolistically i kill rappers in a cataclysim wisdom derby
verbally worried you'll get deaded by my thought process speeds at overclocked reads/
obvious opposite drop in sets wave your flags get cha dragged to hell
excel dwellin the maze sell your soul so your a caft that just grazes/
it's the chaotic sheep sleep on me i geez your leads get cha wires crossed
electrfy the audience when i throwdown break you bulls back down to cows/
you can't prowl round my sound it's too murky like a rainy day with fog on the way
so if you wanna stay safe you best not come toward chaos
or odds being hell will you be breathing/

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Originally Posted by SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS

throw your axes i rack your facts get cha heads severed like live server, when i am surfing the web you best cut cha connection so you'll be deemed detected/
injected a weapon infection are you comprehending what i am saying....?
get cha team, they're all snakes bretryal waits in bushes and leave while u lay/
get cha grave symbolistically i kill rappers in a cataclysim wisdom derby
verbally worried you'll get deaded by my thought process speeds at overclocked reads/
obvious opposite drop in sets wave your flags get cha dragged to hell
excel dwellin the maze sell your soul so your a caft that just grazes/
it's the chaotic sheep sleep on me i geez your leads get cha wires crossed
electrfy the audience when i throwdown break you bulls back down to cows/
you can't prowl round my sound it's too murky like a rainy day with fog on the way
so if you wanna stay safe you best not come toward chaos
or odds being hell will you be breathing/

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the bastard of swords aligned with the lord
Attack like starving alligators my prey lay dead by the door
break all your locks hardheaded with a headache
score settled you meddle forced you to freebase
Speaker blaring heaven's sake i execute the featherweight
Guns, and duct tape for traitors and snakes
after my cakes that i baked at half past eight
new breeds just wait until your disco flow skates
Back in effect butcher chop sicko's that practice incest
Hands in chess boards to master the next war
Solo rocking polo draped in muslim garments
Custom searched and after they begged for a pardon
Jums gave me street stardom the jail gave me blues
The system is designed to stagnate your moves
C.o.'s suffocating fools in life there's two sides to choose
Bundling up for these winter wars shootouts in front of schools
Blood pools babies lay in them the mothers are broken women
after every ending is a beginning my hair thinning from sinning
nothing but crying from kids dying from slugs flying
For years held back tears for fears no softies here
More murders as more years pass devil whispered in my ear
Temptation was broke the make belive solutions a hoax
Instead of going to church brothers are going to toke
Once their high their ready to roll on the block and post
Killing over notes no jokes just running from gun smoke
Hearts broke as folk question their mentality
Feeling bitter about issues of reality
Talented is wasted young girls dressed half naked
Virgins get smashed relatives cherry breaking
Wino's shaking the last drink before he collapsed on the sink
Choked on his own vomit they found him due to the stink

Don't dare the tested, tried and proved, parented guidance suggested
didn't cha read the warning NOPE guess that's why you getting slaughtered/
with every verse I author
it's another lesson in verbal torture/
don't dare the best even weaponry be presented in the any version you just uploaded
get cha team deciphered and decoded when I am reloaded/
dead the stress, your just another flee I flicked off
you cannot bicker, battle against the sicker picker upper/
if you wanna get ripped to shreds like a paper towel
I suggest you take a bowl and get tossed in the toilet/
I AM RATED R, never thinking openly vicious spit acid at cha bitches
get cha shit switched swatched watch out my havoc be malicious/
speak twisted I get cha dart dipped in pools my blood be cold as ice
they're ain't no emotion there when you stare just see black holes in me/

Drops burn like bleach to eyes my speeches rise
Me and hip-hop go together like
Italians and pizza pies
On beats I'm fly with my soul i socialize
Touch the sky as these scavengers die
Due to starvation
I stir up creations enemy of the masons
Degrees hotter than the basement
Every hit blood tasting
Your spots vacant
So spaced out i day dream of cosmos
Out of space conquest while eyes closed
I show them how to make mountains out of mo' hills like the volcanoes
Y'all exchange flows time to boss up
Got your jaw broken from the gossip
Drop this constipated hot shit
Spit in your hot grits grind your chick tonight
Back broke soon as she hit the lights
Heavy breathing blew out the candlelight's
Give them a lesson on how to handle dikes
While you were locked i gave her all the mail except your kites

rhyme like you got a hatchet to pick wit the Sheep didn't cha peep the sign on the entrance
“watch how you come at me” guess it's a hack-n-shaq job for me, hand me my machete/
i slit cha wrist like i'm leaving a death note in this bitch/
out cha in the cold froze flows time capsule rapture after math
draft you back in fire watch me destroy booths like Godzilla was here/
joke's on you thinking i'm the Penguin when your just frozen from the deadly combo I lay on ya head
give you more aches in pains check the way I amaze cha team by how much I fucked cha brain up/
duck from the low crush the dame you wit, crash through heads like a car HD didn't cha see me coming
I guess you'll have to die hard like John McClain/
check the game I blame the name know the chiefs I roll wit
we exiting any scene with hell from 9 different guillotines/
drop more terror than Napoleon and his regime
it's all a dream sequenced up to the drag toward hell your knee deep in/
this ain't Kansas, you better abandon ship quicker than a you dig in ya chicks clit
my flow is the flip of a light switch i'm burning down this bitch quick better say your goodbyes/