WINNER---->Dusk Vs. Eric Unseen (BATTLE COMP SEMI FINAL)

due to defeat, the grewsome heat will change ur pigment to a darker state
view me as weak, and in an instance face a martyrs fate
ur hard as plates paper textured, i SEE the lesser of both us
and trying to rape the expert gets you terror from the lo-tus
whenever u quote dusk, u choke up due to rhyme intensity
to get them votes up, get ur throat fucked, cant find ur memory (GAVE brain)
im fine with weaponary, 20 lines get reclined, shredded and stabbed
eric is fab til Zed is deadin leavin lead in his abs
bet its a hab-it for u to rap wit less than little skill
guess whos droppin it in and u, cold shoulder leaves ya nipples still (no homo)
kept the personals to a minimmill (minimul) to please saddle blazers
instead to battle send lyrics that'll razor cattle grazors (makin bullshit)
that ol age is kickin in harder than narcs in crack condos
im dusk, cant beat me in the dark like black bongos
kind of like they unseen, lunchin on ur bait style
got beef like pun's dreams, cummin out ur fake child (step son)
brakes smiles shit on grins, and demember teeth exposin
confirm ur gender, u gettin burned wit ur placenta beaten open
ud never beet potent if ud ever gotten that far in the tourney ric
take it from ro-BERT u need to get off ernies dick (flame joke again)


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WE DID IT FOR B.O.M. (for life man) lol

oj, ssc...

..anyways jus lettin ya kno that the only reason for me usin lots of explanations in my verse is cuz ya gonna try to hold that agaisnt me so...w/e...vote 1

nice battle from the both of you, keep up the dissin and all that!

ok, I guess that means I can vote, even though I should vote against Dusk for eliminating me out the tourny, [just kiddin'], I'm a have to say that Dusk took this battle with more punches, multis and wordplay, but Eric's verses are always tight, close battle, but my vote=Dusk!

gracias don

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this was a good battle. Dusk came with schemes multies personals and punches were a bit played, and confusing. I don't like when you explain the punch, that makes it innefective if you have to, but i knew what they ment before i read the entire thing. Eric was good, cool play on his sig, had some lyrical ability, but didn't get him with the punches and flow that MF brought. I have to say...It's a close call but i vote dusk.

vote-dusk

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Originally Posted by VernakuLa

this was a good battle. Dusk came with schemes multies personals and punches were a bit played, and confusing. I don't like when you explain the punch, that makes it innefective if you have to, but i knew what they ment before i read the entire thing. Eric was good, cool play on his sig, had some lyrical ability, but didn't get him with the punches and flow that MF brought. I have to say...It's a close call but i vote dusk.

vote-dusk

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this is why i did so, and if the judges dont get them than they will hold it against me, and they arent hard to get but some people are stupid do..thx

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guess maybe I should be breaking down my lines.

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but didn't get him with the punches and flow that MF brought.

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Like Cheech I'm auctioning off pussies from Dusk to Dawn (ever seen the movie Dusk till Dawn? him and one of his boys right? Cheech pimpin out all kinds of pussies, I'm doin the same)
I'm a killer in this battlefield whether it'd be King or Pawn(Dusk='s King of circle, Dawn='s Pawn, anyone can get it)
You's all gone when the mentals get focused,
swarm on you like conrnfields & locust (when I'm on point chumps getting devoured)
You's hocus pocus like a fake magician, (better watch out for that next pack of tic-tacs, there might be one of Dusk's mutants in there tryin to turn me into someones dinner mint)
the loc'est send your phony ass to a mortician (the killa beats the cornball)
Beat into submission, enjoy this sleeper hold,
when the cards are on the table alotta fools fold(he don't want none of this high hand I'm holdin)
Fools gold thinkin you were comin on top, this is a comp,(did yall see the word play here or would have been better if I put cummin instead?)
not the pop shot in u and ur moms porno flop(Cuz Dusk had a hard time selling those videos of him bustin' in his Mom's face)
You can't be from the home of hip-hop,(He ain't spittin the realness)
he's really from montana choosin between boots and flip-flops(more like brokeback mountain)
Blood clot everwhere you are the flow stops, (His wack shit is killin cyphers)
crowds gett to runnin like a crackhouse and cops (Dusk grabs the mic and mothafuckas go running out the door)
You couldn't drop if you was a cumlious cloud,
dark grey and crackin thunder real loud (He ain't comin w/ it even if he talks a big game)
Disappointed those in a drought prayin for a storm,(People are hopefull, but they ain't gettin what they want)
when I reign supreme the joy is uniform(should I have have spelled it rain instead? I figure dudes reading this is smart enough to make the connection. Yall tell me. Anyways the line is sayin I delive what the people need. Lyrical nourshiment.)
I don't conform to these norms of what it means to battle (People be getting caught up in that straight punchlines shit. To me there's more to writing verse than just that. It's certainly part of it and should be but I'm aimin to come with more than that. I write with the intent of givin visuals, lyrics, punches, and storytelling and I'm not about to change my ways just cause people loose sight of the bigger picture and start focusing on only one aspect of what it means to write. If that apparently means taking some L's because of it, fuck it, I'm still gonna do me)
I'll dead your beef like these Texas ranchers do to cattle (we kill alot of cows down here in Texas, we used to handling beef, straight up)

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Originally Posted by Eric Unseen

guess maybe I should be breaking down my lines.

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dude sounds just like mf doom

how do I sound like MF Doom?

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Originally Posted by Eric Unseen

how do I sound like MF Doom?

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dusk duz, FOO!

whoa calm down there buddeeee, lol

im sensing some hostility (FUCK U) between us,...
vote

^^^ok then, i'd appreciate it if the votes were explained more, i know these two votes aint dickriding but you should be using house rules with a couple of sentences explaination or house rules, 2-0 to Dusk.....oh and luther maybe i wouldnt have had to change shit around if there had been more cooperation from the so-called judges....oh and coz this is semi i thought it was appropriate for two verses per writer....after all time is an issue in earlier rounds
peace

ok my turn


from what ive SEEN, this fiend eric is *cough* a stiff (square)
but ill actually "THROW YOU IN A SEMI" (truck) and drive u off a cliff (same way u were thrown in the semis)
man i oughta spit a verse or two to further ur personal anguish (10 losses)
i herd that ur hangin wit vern in a "vertical sandwich" (man on man sex)
preferebly pantless? i murdered this faggot long ago
when i first joined and spit a verse durin his battle wit radio (http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=7956)
after he tried to play me though he got tight and told me to leave,
but fallin off lyrically and bouncin's a goal we kno hes achieved (fell off bad)
i wasnt kiddin in that pm, when i told u, u had turned to turd (he pm'd me askin me about his current lyricall abilities)
wit as many V as the dm (dmv, 1 v) and audio only vern has heard (vern studies people)
member that comp. u tired to lead that was merely spare chit chat? (wack unfinished tourney)
u couldnt TURN-A-MINT (tournament) if u were bitten by a WERE TIC-TAC (once the were tic tac bites him he will turn a mint)
so get back as rhymes are tossed and talk from pussys quiets down
cuz kickin me off a thread back in the day was cool..but try it now (again wit the past thing)
i like it how i threw u in oj for nothin more than pitty ( i feel bad for ya)
since ur flow i couldnt locate, like whores with 4 inch titties ( they have to be stiff)
in foreign cities,war'in wit me leads to loss of a permanent tooth (punchlines, ow)
couldnt "MAKE THE FINALS" if u ran this tournament to (literally make the finals)
burnin the truth in ya brain, fuckin 2 mirrors aint a 3 sum (go fuck ur self)
and since ur unheard like ur unseen....i might as well be dumb! (dum deaf blind)

ite chew on that