Luther Large Lynguistics ( Official Thread )

good stuff. u got skillz

good replies krazi....anybody else?????

i need ya'll to read this and tell me your thoughts on it.......its short as hell......but i'll only finish and post it if ya'll think i should




analyze under the street lights blood penatrates deep/the dead getter was armed b4 his guts hit the street/it was 45 degrees but the heaters werent siezed/evils deceased/diseased thieves/spark up the heat/ the irony be cracked out peaceful crooked police/character searchin frantically still stalkin the streets/5 dollar look outs for officers walkin the beat/witnesses yellin claimin that they talked to the beast/now it's 200 pounds of cadavers the coroners facin/murder cases/and the physical basis is shell cases/labratory's tryna put crooks inside of there places/plastic bagged faces with they whole torsos laced up/

ayo beef in red attracts pork in blue/







arite i finished a ruff draft of my 1st verse.......and i am starting my next with the beef and pork line.........what ya'll think about the verse and it's additions......

feed appreciated........

nice start make it longer good punches LL good stuff work on it


go check out mine called,

"tha visionarie part1"

thanx g.....any else can give me input?????

yo that was sum fresh shit luther

i was feelin that shit

big ups son , u did ya thing on that verse


peep my shit in temple of darts gimme sum feed back

peace god ~1~

aight i'll check it out later god.......any1 else?

any1 else..........should i finish???????

feed?????

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Originally Posted by Luther Large

i need ya'll to read this and tell me your thoughts on it.......its short as hell......but i'll only finish and post it if ya'll think i should




analyze under the street lights blood penatrates deep/the dead getter was armed b4 his guts hit the street/it was 45 degrees but the heaters werent siezed/evils deceased/diseased thieves/spark up the heat/ the irony be cracked up currupt peaceful crooked police/purp searchin frantically stalkin the streets/5 dollar look outs for officers walkin the beat/witnesses yellin claimin that they talked to the beast/




just sumthin i started writin about.......a shoot out on my old block a while back.....


i aint done.....i just started it right now........should i continue or scrap the idea?????

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I'm lovin' it so far ... the multies are off the hook ... stop teasing us though ... hurry up and drop the rest. Luv your style.

Peace

much luv dae....i'm tryna get it done i just added to finish a ruff draft of my 1st verse...and i only have 1 line starting my second........



hope ya'll still like it though?

Uppin on feed ya'll

...you need me to read this -- and there fore i need you to pause, delete the thread, and stop writing altogether...

calm down chief if you wanna say you dont like it do so...............but dont try and start a homo ass e-beef

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