Dead line 5:15 tommorow ghost.
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Dead line 5:15 tommorow ghost.
I'ma repost my verse so when you post yours the verses are on the same page. It'll make it lil easier for voters.
My "bars" is straight fire, get ready for the sahnna "bid"*
Hoe let me know u got a newborn, and i'll fuckin bomb a "crib"
That first bar was ominous, trust me, u won't stand drama kid
For recoils, my rhymes'll have u slave'in, like yo great grandmama did
These "cabbage" smashin lines'll, leave yo brain in a cast
At me, if u pop mags i'll cop fags, that wanna be the "pain in yo ass" (back door shit)
This about to be some tragic shit, when i aim on yo ave.
And i shake my magic stick, watch blood rain on yo grass
Red "monsoon" bitch, this guy'll try to sew a balloon stitch
When that shit go "pop", i'll be there, to throw'em in the tomb ditch
I'll make a womb twitch, when i straight boom clits
In a series, this lightweight'll get "swept", on some broom shit
Ever since he walked on "water", he think he superman
But duke was talkin bout snow, just another stupid fan
Yaw gon think i can dissapear, when i "catch ghost" (The ghost)
You my "bitch", when i make u "break-fast", go "fetch" toast**
My "bars" is straight fire, get ready for the sahnna "bid"*
Metaphor means, my bars- as in lines, and as in jail bars, is straight fire THe sahnna bid, means my "bars make yo jail cell hot, there fore the "sahnna" bid. I'm asumming u all know what a bid is.( jail sentence).
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You my "bitch", when i make u "break-fast", go "fetch" toast**
"You my bitch"- female dog, when i make u "break-fast"- break fast and breakfast
"go fetch toast", go fetch it like a dog would "my bitch", and toast ties in wit the "breakfast/ break-fast" concept.
Yo Negroid you ain't a czar, bitch you a princess/
I'll walk you in the rain dog, and literally get this bitch wet/
You the softest dude on your block, he just rhyming tough/
Probally on the internet sucking cock, dude came on his face I guess his timing was rough/
From my watch your time is up, the clock stop ticking/
Had sex one time, moms took him to the hospital his dick wouldn't stop itching/
You shouldn't be in the house of flying daggers, you should be in general chat/
Your bars feel like soap mainly cuz they clean and they generally wack/
You not getting money, you a czar but making general stacks/
He said no feeding cuz he know that I come hard with the attacks/
Saw the last battle and was like "shit I'm not getting served like that"/
Said "no feeding" and came up here and posted a written rap/
I know why though, mainly cuz he can't freestyle he would have no way to come back/
He can't even flow, last thing popping out of Cincinnati was Hi Tek/
You not even fucking with me, I'm keystyling everthing thing i type is abroad/
Treat this 16 year old bitch like one of R.Kelly hoes and piss on this fraud!/
I guess we can take votes now
Yup but outa 6 battles of mine in the past 8 days, only two have been decided. Just depends on the voters.
But about me comin wit prewrittens on my verses, yeah i do. Most my classes is borin so i'll just write a couple punchlines to pass time. But the one i spit on this thread i had wrote in one "bell" or class. SO its not like i was stayin up all night thinkin about it.
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hmm this a close battle too me and both of yall flow was vicious i think czar killed it with the "fire" line and the how he hit his punches seemed very strong n complex i think ghost also came wit heat
vote=czar
good shot on vote, 1-0
Come on people vote its a democracy
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vote bump, jus becuz
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