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lemme jus go nd touch the surface
of how my nd my clergy gonna dismember your whole band of eathlings, supporting roles pass through and batter bones whip em up with the wrist game but no kitchen nd stove top double,
this is that double shotty to your face got you in double trouble,
mumble trip nd stumble attempts on evadin a bloody frozen bank hold,
sold joes more then just soft hard nd chemicals,
gave em they whole style from start to ending,
and now a wanna be with some knowledge try to spit out his philosphy, scientific how i got these boys clockin controllin they whole anatomy,
static kicks in when dramatic actions cease the heart of this kid..
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i carve your heart to the shape of a gun, and pull the trigger
which causes your capillieries, to shrink and sliver, artieries quiver
nerve endins shiver, i deliever much pain,in my slayin endeavor
your sprawled on the floor broken n bruised, my barz hit slicker, quicker
....board of directors, the only thing you direct is the board of garbage collectors
sneakin round the forum, biting shit emcees lyrical nectar
but you aint no inspector, jus a fake emcee projector
i be the hip hop protector, guarding in it from heavy metal defectors
no where to escape, from the katana appiritian spectre
possesing your mind, soul and charted rapper vectors
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lay the fuck outta here with this tradesperson talk..
carving fake guns and believe they can buck..
board of directors so that means i got untouchable luck..
chuck, smuts, in your cut, and decypher your whole plot..
what i expected your iq level aint really up to par..
send your soul to the stars, like nasas rocket cars..
guns never back fire invesments protect ares..
automatic instincts have you fossilized bones extinct..
hammer on the banger be relluctant, severl more vessels get ruptured..
breathing capabilities inuce heavy convulsions..
i guess these bullets you couldnt stomach, in my astrial projection..
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see.. my problem with this shyt is... i'd drop bars on this bruv' since he's been postin' all over the place challengin' everyone, but the things is.. he's no good.. he's not rly challengin' no one, it's like a retarded kid with turrets screamin 'HIT ME!'.... would u hit him? lol.. pea2e
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stop talkin you insignificant fagget... if you can spit lets here it, if not... stop tryin to make dudes laugh with your downtrodden fuck face sense of humour
peace
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suav-
you release, dieased verbal grease
pulsating your deflating life-ceased lyrical crease
i be the knght n king you be the pawn piece
playin your shit like gay withdrawn police
slayin you, your torn,scorned and deceased
you be jason and i got the golden fleece
your method be sixty second , homeboy rest in peace
your fake n phoney, like a drug addicted obese priest
your flesh i feast, cremate your bones for bakers yeast
last but not least bury your body north by northeast
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man.. letme explain somethin ta you.. nice and carefully so you don't get all female n' shyt.. you opened threads, started claimin' you'll merk any EMCEE, so I viewed a couple of ya verses ta see what you wer so confident about.. I read like 2-3 before I came to conclusion you have absolutely no battle skill, and the shyt got old real fast.. than became sad soon after.. no hatin' at all, I look at this shyt in a very honest way and you should take it ta heart, and quit cryin',,.. stop posting nonesense battle raps, chill fer a bit, and take shyt one at a time
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muthafucka you dont spit, so your feedback= useless, my FORTE aint battling, but i still ripped katz, thanks for taking notice in my threads and contributing your constructive feedback, but it dont mean shit to me...
please dont past anything else on manz threads....unless its a verse
peace
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man... the shyt i said is the most feedback you've gotten.. i was bein real wit chu, not my fault u cant handle it and start actin a bitch... plus i do write, i've written ENOUGH poems on this site, under this name and Lynguitistix.. battles and free writtens and they've shit on anythin' u've ever wrote
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lets see one of your "poems" you lonely muthafucka,you aint the only feedback i got...search th threads if you care that much...and like i said battles aint my forte, thats what iam workin on it...i can handle CONSTRUCTIVE feedback you understand what that means you annoying fagget, pointing out whats weak whats strong blah blah, you jus start chatin shit waitin for another kat to agree with you so you can make a new friend...well it dident work so just shut your fuckin mouth PLEASE
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I be breakin emcees at they whack ass knees
I bought a key and a chopper just to stack that cheese
( gimme the dough) and a hoe, with a duece duece and a sack of indo
for the playas who be chillen in bodegas, with a dirty duct tape on that 38 handle, ya can catch a sample, fuck bitches feelin riches imma toss em in the ditches, catching stitches, all them mitches and the crazy 5o second bitches, i stick fuckas for they larger paper problems, i copped p's for weeks, feelin up arena seats, on the beach, politicking with my hommies blazin stoggies, with a 9 milli, packing black skullies and a tan hoodie,
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sleepwalker stop buggin, sidious iz alwayz battle ready, AND he'z nice-
but not az nice az OTB yet, peep it-
yo good attack
but i'm clappin back like george w. at iraq and ja rule
clash wit OTB and crash like nasdaq and compact daewooz
my advantage, i'll damage you like KMD and Jeru
my stylez wild, leave you wet like Dondi sprayed you
flow got a bright future like Barak Obama and Oguchi Onyewu
taylor made to fade you-
digital bullets stay true and go deep like bobby abreu
i'm nice-
compared to you OTB iz Mohandas K. Gandhi and Nehru
OTB - live and uncut
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OTB OTB OTB...
swing cursin shurkiens, slice phonies like diced gherkins
attempt verbal contempt, deep gash - blood splurtin
no action exempt, raw rash, bullet holes be squritin
"always battle ready", my static deadly, steadly diverting
to the realm of unreal..my verbal appeal, be like the lockin steel
i lock n peel, killa mujhadeen, armoured automobile, no navy seal
camoflague conceal, lazer darts, get the deal?
fatal freestyle, hundred strong - body pile, my militant mind be hostile
like toxic waste vials - burn skin vile, a death sentence with no trial
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^Dope sidious- you 1 ov da nicest on wucorp- F- da haterz
sleepwalker - step ya game up sunn-
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yza yo-
lyricist supremacist-
vehement proponent of blatant discrimination
peerless nemesis who vacates lenience to create complacent opponent elimination
serious blemishez for moments of impatient deviance and imitation
component's premise: superior achievment thru flagrant intimidation
statements with the clearest cadence put potent bereavment adjacent to incrimination
premisis locates vagrance: the agreement's career postponement with no litigation
atonement's placement came in sincere and frequent vizitation of Genesis to Revelation
blessedness shone in impeccable maintenance of progressive innovation.
OTB - live and uncut sunnz
