Re: The mentality of warfare
http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2THN8UXMTXS7A316P2XDUTKAGW..........
when reading this verse.......do it out loud over this beat.....it sounds much better that way....
uppin for feedback
(wish i had the instrumentals all i got is the song)
Re: The mentality of warfare
yeah you can write this shit but you can't fucking respond to our fucking freestyle battle motherfucker type your shit quick you've already lost ne wayz stop wastin my time!
Re: The mentality of warfare
uppin for feedback ya'll???????
Re: The mentality of warfare
yo man that shits ILL homie.....nyce werdplay
ur killin it son
yo peep my thread and gimme sum feed back 2 homie
and merk that undead ninja herb
Re: The mentality of warfare
its good but i think you can work on it and it could be better
Re: The mentality of warfare
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Originally Posted by Luther Large
no homo
Re: The mentality of warfare
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Originally Posted by Luther Large
supreme challanges hittin, extortin foes/, heavy dosage of blows/goin to war sportin our court clothes/and us pros we still get managed and hold/i eat souls and be feedin off bodies grabbin on they gold/cattle catchin second hand cancer from gunsmoke/battles stay gung-ho/never 1 dumb joke/illegal carriers smash and bust the sound barriers open/fightin in projects my streets bound but only 1 areas chosen/frozen faces is tasteless/catalysts harassed like an A-list/you better be smart enuff to put the umbrella up when it's rainin/battles'll start sprayin and that's all that i'm sayin/
this is a verse i'm ghost writing for my boy.........the track is called "The mentality of warfare"
tell me what you think so far........leave strong feedback...........i know it aint that long but it's not supposed to be we r tryna fit 4 people in.....
(I'm writing it to the gravediggaz-unexplained beat)
feedback please.........
NO HOMO!
Re: The mentality of warfare
^^^shit man even tho i'm kinda ticked.......that shit was mad funny.......
uppin
(it'll be different soon once i edit it)
Re: The mentality of warfare
hahahaha no doubt man
im not at ALL hating on ya shit dude......just whenever im bored i like to read shit and point out "pause" lines
its fun :D
Re: The mentality of warfare
Nice shit LL ... yeah it's short, but it's on point.
Peace
Re: The mentality of warfare
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Originally Posted by Luther Large
that verse was flames son keep it movin son
Re: The mentality of warfare
Can ya'll rate this 4 me?
lights cameras and action photographed the assassin
verbals overtake the world to get a 3rd of the rations
overdosage of anastetics, see ammo and paramedics
calastetics for cammos and special dimensions sections only at its best during damagin presence aswerin questions price expensive like pentions caressin the senses due to depression of detention and preventive detention selective sessions re elected defendants sentenced to spark up and start up the tension armed with projectile inventions sellin drugs at park benches
i know it's short but just give me a rating please like 1 through 10
...........i'd appreciate it(i'll probly add later)
peace
Re: Can ya'll rate this 4 me?
Yeah that's pretty hot, right there. The last few lines especially. I'd say 7/10
