Dae Ja Nae's **Diamond Thread**

Its quite a powerful verse, or can i name it "verse in thought". And suitably titled as here it shows a new difinitive approach than the conventional lyrics mostly placed. And you seemed to lure with the lyrically content in discribing what is only there. And what more ample title than the one you gave it. This verse showed a more developed sense of thought (hey you know there are many schools of thought) and yet this one had its own clarity (with nothing).

Peace
PS: Keep posting. And i had not read this one before!!

A WHOLE FORUM OF THUG WANNA B'S TRYIN HARD TO LIVE UP TO THESE
STANDARDS OF HIGHER LEARNIN', ALWAYS YEARNIN' BUT NEVER LEARNIN
THAT FIRE BURNS ...
SO SIT BACK AND WATCH ME TURN
SCEPTICS INTO BELIEVERS, YALL ASSES IS TOO EAGER
YOUR STYLE IS WACK ... SO THE BATTLEFIELD-YOU SHOULD LEAVE IT LIKE BEAVER
CLASSIC UNDERACHEIVERS ... NIGGA UP YOUR GAME
THIS SHIT IS CHILD'S PLAY AND I'M CHUCKY-READY TO WRECK AND MAIM
... LEAVE YOU LYIN' IN SHAME,
CUZ THIS DAME DON'T PLAY GAMES DUN
I'LL SNATCH THE RAP STATS FROM THE CHOSEN ONE
DAE IS SECOND TO NONE ...
I BREAK PUNKS LIKE YOU FOR FUN
HOW YOU WANTING TO SPARK BEEF WHEN YOU AIN' T HOLDING GUNS?
YOUR FLOW IS SLACK-IT LACKS TACT LIKE COOK COKE, CRACK
GET THAT? ...
MY 45 WILL MAKE YOUR ASS LEAN BACK
NO SHELLS, I FLOW THAT WELL, A STEP AHEAD OF THE REST
THE SHIT YOU SPIT IS ILLEGIT, IT'S BULLSHIT AT BEST
CONTEMPLATE YOUR WORSE FATE-YOU WANNA GAMBLE-YOU'LL LOOSE
INFILTRATE YOUR CAMP'S GATE AND SHUT YALL DOWN LIKE JEWS
CONCENTRATED MY TOOLS ...
WITH MY REP, I'LL NEVER LOOSE
LEAVE YOU PISSIN YOUR PANTS, CRYING-BROKE AND SINGIN' THE BLUES
SPLIT IN HALF FROM THE AFTERMATH OF MY VERBAL MACHETE
I WHOOP ASS BADDER THAN BETTY BUT YALL BITCHES AIN' T READY-FOR THIS FIRE ...
NIGGAS THAT KNOW ME CALL ME BARBed WIRE
YOUR IMAGE, I RIP TO SHREADS IF YOU TRY TO CONSPIRE
FORCE YOUR ASS TO RETIRE
YOUR CREW WILL DEEM ME AS "SIRE"
SEALING YOU GRIM FATE, THAT'S MY GREATest DESIRE




Respect My "G" ... LMAO ...

Peace

Pretty Tight I Like That Sig
KNOWLEDGEABLE FLOW
Tight Ass Verse
Yo Shit Was Raw
Peace 4.4.4 Trumpets

Wuddup You Wanna Battle
COME In The Chamber
Messing Wit Shu
Peace

cool,...fuck retiring tho,.....ima kill it till the end, tha hell with that, peace

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Dae Ja Nae

A WHOLE FORUM OF THUG WANNA B'S TRYIN HARD TO LIVE UP TO THESE
STANDARDS OF HIGHER LEARNIN', ALWAYS YEARNIN' BUT NEVER LEARNIN
THAT FIRE BURNS ...
SO SIT BACK AND WATCH ME TURN
SCEPTICS INTO BELIEVERS, YALL ASSES IS TOO EAGER
YOUR STYLE IS WACK ... SO THE BATTLEFIELD-YOU SHOULD LEAVE IT LIKE BEAVER
CLASSIC UNDERACHEIVERS ... NIGGA UP YOUR GAME
THIS SHIT IS CHILD'S PLAY AND I'M CHUCKY-READY TO WRECK AND MAIM
... LEAVE YOU LYIN' IN SHAME,
CUZ THIS DAME DON'T PLAY GAMES DUN
I'LL SNATCH THE RAP STATS FROM THE CHOSEN ONE
DAE IS SECOND TO NONE ...
I BREAK PUNKS LIKE YOU FOR FUN
HOW YOU WANTING TO SPARK BEEF WHEN YOU AIN' T HOLDING GUNS?
YOUR FLOW IS SLACK-IT LACKS TACT LIKE COOK COKE, CRACK
GET THAT? ...
MY 45 WILL MAKE YOUR ASS LEAN BACK
NO SHELLS, I FLOW THAT WELL, A STEP AHEAD OF THE REST
THE SHIT YOU SPIT IS ILLEGIT, IT'S BULLSHIT AT BEST
CONTEMPLATE YOUR WORSE FATE-YOU WANNA GAMBLE-YOU'LL LOOSE
INFILTRATE YOUR CAMP'S GATE AND SHUT YALL DOWN LIKE JEWS
CONCENTRATED MY TOOLS ...
WITH MY REP, I'LL NEVER LOOSE
LEAVE YOU PISSIN YOUR PANTS, CRYING-BROKE AND SINGIN' THE BLUES
SPLIT IN HALF FROM THE AFTERMATH OF MY VERBAL MACHETE
I WHOOP ASS BADDER THAN BETTY BUT YALL BITCHES AIN' T READY-FOR THIS FIRE ...
NIGGAS THAT KNOW ME CALL ME BARBed WIRE
YOUR IMAGE, I RIP TO SHREADS IF YOU TRY TO CONSPIRE
FORCE YOUR ASS TO RETIRE
YOUR CREW WILL DEEM ME AS "SIRE"
SEALING YOU GRIM FATE, THAT'S MY GREATest DESIRE




Respect My "G" ... LMAO ...

Peace

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OMG yo.....i mean...even at my best, im sure i couldnt flow like this yo, on the real though...thats my word Dae....fuckin ripped tha shit 3 times over with this peice....
left me speechless, no doubt mama
keep breakin these cats' backs, they blind without the catarats
lol no doubt mama.....

PAZ

D A M N, that shit was fucking tight! You ripped that shit apart like a fucking tornado on that verse. Hot shit.

LOL ... thx for the feeds. I am in no way a battler, except when I have to be ;). This is something I was just kidding around with ... :). I think I'd better stick with my original format though.

Peace

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Dae Ja Nae

A WHOLE FORUM OF THUG WANNA B'S TRYIN HARD TO LIVE UP TO THESE
STANDARDS OF HIGHER LEARNIN', ALWAYS YEARNIN' BUT NEVER LEARNIN
THAT FIRE BURNS ...
SO SIT BACK AND WATCH ME TURN
SCEPTICS INTO BELIEVERS, YALL ASSES IS TOO EAGER
YOUR STYLE IS WACK ... SO THE BATTLEFIELD-YOU SHOULD LEAVE IT LIKE BEAVER
CLASSIC UNDERACHEIVERS ... NIGGA UP YOUR GAME
THIS SHIT IS CHILD'S PLAY AND I'M CHUCKY-READY TO WRECK AND MAIM
... LEAVE YOU LYIN' IN SHAME,
CUZ THIS DAME DON'T PLAY GAMES DUN
I'LL SNATCH THE RAP STATS FROM THE CHOSEN ONE
DAE IS SECOND TO NONE ...
I BREAK PUNKS LIKE YOU FOR FUN
HOW YOU WANTING TO SPARK BEEF WHEN YOU AIN' T HOLDING GUNS?
YOUR FLOW IS SLACK-IT LACKS TACT LIKE COOK COKE, CRACK
GET THAT? ...
MY 45 WILL MAKE YOUR ASS LEAN BACK
NO SHELLS, I FLOW THAT WELL, A STEP AHEAD OF THE REST
THE SHIT YOU SPIT IS ILLEGIT, IT'S BULLSHIT AT BEST
CONTEMPLATE YOUR WORSE FATE-YOU WANNA GAMBLE-YOU'LL LOOSE
INFILTRATE YOUR CAMP'S GATE AND SHUT YALL DOWN LIKE JEWS
CONCENTRATED MY TOOLS ...
WITH MY REP, I'LL NEVER LOOSE
LEAVE YOU PISSIN YOUR PANTS, CRYING-BROKE AND SINGIN' THE BLUES
SPLIT IN HALF FROM THE AFTERMATH OF MY VERBAL MACHETE
I WHOOP ASS BADDER THAN BETTY BUT YALL BITCHES AIN' T READY-FOR THIS FIRE ...
NIGGAS THAT KNOW ME CALL ME BARBed WIRE
YOUR IMAGE, I RIP TO SHREADS IF YOU TRY TO CONSPIRE
FORCE YOUR ASS TO RETIRE
YOUR CREW WILL DEEM ME AS "SIRE"
SEALING YOU GRIM FATE, THAT'S MY GREATest DESIRE




Respect My "G" ... LMAO ...

Peace

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PEACE DAE...I SEE YOU OPENED THA CHAMBER OF FLAMES ONCE AGAIN.....

YOU SHOULD'VE CALLED THIS ONE "IF IT OFFENDS YOU, DEN ITS ABOUT YOU"

NICE RELEASE.....

MUCH LOVE

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Originally Posted by Dae Ja Nae

LOL ... thx for the feeds. I am in no way a battler, except when I have to be ;). This is something I was just kidding around with ... :). I think I'd better stick with my original format though.

Peace

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I concur.

peace

WOW! good stuff!

Would love to see you kill some dudes at a Battle

*Wink*

*please look down under my banner*

LOL!

PEACE... i liked this, it reminded me of Jean Grae's "haters anthem"... even if it was just fuckin' around, i love to see people post verses like these, 'cause cats are so sensitive on this forum they all feel offended in some shape or form... no need to name names, they know who they are, and they know they need to step they're game up! keep them on their toes, 'cause this verse could've easily set the battlefield into a panic...

PEACE

PSY

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When I think of Poetry, I think of the wind beneath my wings
soaring to new heights, viewing all that life brings
all things ...
become anew, for this art shines a different light
it embraces the ills of this world and somehow makes wrongs seem right
magically turning adversities into an impossible victories
mysteries begin to unravel as we travel through out history
unlocking secret tombs and giving voices to Taboos
illuminating dark places, creating faces from lost clues
nothing is unknown ... for it enables the mind to dream
putting everything within our grasp, no matter how inconceivable they seem
silent screams ...
are now heard because Poetry has given them a voice
cries that once fell upon def ears, now have reason to rejoice
to me, it’s life’s essence ... the very force that drives me
like the blood pumping through my veins, it keeps me alive, see ...
Poetry is who I am ...
the continuous rhythm of my soul
the fire contained within that runs wild and grabs hold,
of the smallest hint of imagination, turning stray thoughts into great visions
manifested into fruition ...
... it’s the teacher of life’s lessons-never requestin’ a tuition
It’s gives the smallest life-a true purpose,
a creative mind-a new surface ...
to draw upon whatever desires the heart inspires into service
all these things and more, are reasons I will always adore
Poetry
and her depth ... I will endlessly explore



How about you?

That was deep, very nice wordplay, it flowed nicely in my head, and I didn't need a beat, so that's Ill, peace.

It was tight, keep it real holmes, 10 / 10

pssst..... Holmes is a Lady, :)