The Official Poetry Thread

Scenerio

the moonlight shines like the sonata
givin memories of the high school almamata
A son with a daughter age three i'm only seventeen
i try to make money but hard to earn is the cream
hard world, but to the lord i been redeemed
life throws curves as well as shit it seems
i guess its true shit happens
but i gotta make a way so i'm five finger shopin
drug pakin the life for a black man is hard to stand
tried to get honorable work but rejected by the man
but i will survive and strive for a cause just hope not get caught
just 2 mo years of college career i'm almost at the top
the book were baught by nickles and dimes
my baby dipers are paid by thievery and petty crimes
so will i be judged for wat i can not have but for wat i must do
i just know is 2 more years and this shit is thru
if i need credentials to show of my potential
i just feel sorry for those who lost track of the essentials
so i write from the heart only to create senerios
but i always ask the question is heaven my destination after burrial

Envoked

" As all was complete, for what had to take place, all there seemed before, yes in all its truthfullness, happening in this day, and the same sequence, quickly disappearing to another, it is more part of this than what was being seen, balancing was just trying to make equal, in surity was one making it difficult, now must return were all is natural, but had prepared long ago, just in mind, time had taken its choice, others thoughts had to change with it, now can be at peace, where one had all the daily routine, in sight with flowing practice, yes these are just the passed things that are here to be faced, plus take the best decision then, while faded with no place to be, that others knew".

this isn't getting much notice in its usual thread figured i'd post it here


Straight nerds, I hate birds! they always fly south for winter/
Its cold during the winter, park benches gave me splinters/
Those written salms debating on how you should live your life/
Frost bitten palms waiting for a touch of green to break the ice/
Writing your name in yellow with the snow the same old show/
Actor always knows how it goes already read the script/
So he dusted off the 22 he equipped and pops in a new clip/
His shoulder is already chipped, "chill gawd soldiers dont trip"/
If you fall you die I already seen it happen to the other guys/
Don't listen cause the rest lie I'm to depressed to even try/
So I stare at the sky with tears in my eyes asking god WHY?/
When everyone else leaves me will I still be unable to fly?/
But this is all in the plan so I continue with whats at hand/
Moving across this cold land trying real hard to understand/
Harassed for being in the street by cops walking their beat/
WHERE ELSE THEY WANT ME TO BE this is where they put me/
I got blisters on my feet, soles worn down from scraping concrete/
Thinkin on how I can eat, a full meal would make me Complete/
And this is everyday, carry this heavyweight trying to elevate/
Trying to Compensate for this decreppid state wich is my fate/
Moving from block to block all the same with different cell mates/
They carry nickel plates, don't think straight, always figure eights/
Looking for an easy escape, but they never open those gates/
Rather destroy than create, why build, you can buy it on ebay/
The world through my eyes in my life at the other end of the knife/
Resenting and repenting the days sins at the end of each night/
Finding out the hard way if a dogs really more bark than bite/
When you at the bottom of the hole its hard to see the light/
I always see alot of bread but I still can't seem to get a slice/
Forced to sit back and wait for crumbs like some project mice/
People forgettin where they came from numbed out by ice/
Leaving me scratching my head like I got a bad case of lice/
Fightin our own people because we aint got the same rights/
So I sit back chilling with a pen and a pad waiting to ignite/
And Light this fire inside of me to shut out this cold cold season/
A whole entire population commited treason just by breathing/

Teknicel that was real NICE!!

Thanx ben, I used to write alot of poetry havent in a long time.... I'll try to get back on wit it.

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Originally Posted by Chequita

Terror {:(

Crying, :'(screaming, Begging, and pleading. The sounds of horrible terror.

Terror like the wind blazing thhrough on a stormy night.

The fear rushing within me. My minde swirling around like a hurricane.

The kicking, the punching, :ouch: the screaming, the acts of horrible terror. }:T

As the pain rose within me my fear grew stronger.

The fear that the devil }) was with him.

Too afraid to move, Even more afraid to speak.

Had the wind blown our love away?

Was this the end or was it the beginning? :?

Walking, thinking, seeing him sleeping.

Telling myself this is a good time to be flying.

Flying away like a bird to a safe nest.

Only going never looking :looking: back.

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I'm sorry but

LOLOL

Continued
" Those that failed when the last moment was placed, some could not have known, with revealed instance to convey the onslaught, from which hardly recognized, yet notice must have been observed, many occasions occured to achieve the sights, though motions cleared what had certainty, requirements maintained the positions, through its reliance the purpose was trully fulfilled, only within completion would another proceed, as set in the heavens, things conditioned toward their source in pure accordance".

Efforts

" And we have become accustomed, to what was once learnt, yet must not loose sight of it, the works continue, during each time, all that is experienced but half spoken, for its just a pattern, and one treads off to revive, it was the position given, for as all that had to experience would have a tough while, so proceeded in lessons, that has to be collected to make the procession more enjoyable, though there was non of that, but plain really taking time in its own gain".

DAmn Guardian !!! Nice messages!!

PeacEcaeP

Tek

Prospects

" As comes to its end, and rememberable actions of different kinds, enhancing all, as the rate you only know, shared amongst could be not, for it was in the protected part, that is delayed to come to, what had passed by, when going through, gave the meaning to the time, though had various decisions layed before and that was just how it was to be, others would wonder what was happening, a past lesson, that now is here with nothing to be said".

Peace bigben happy birthday!!!!!!!!!! Nice to have you here!!
And Welcome TeknicelStylez and the others!!!

Thanks man I have to post some poetry I've been hella busy lately

A yo i got this poem call'd oh! zhit kinetic heres a lil sample
Obedience iz betta than sacrifice, Strenghth'n what remainz i thought twice
Concentration through mire lips recite soft sips, Done in split seconds i work wonders with scripts
A counter-attack prosper'd the perfect jab keen, I act'd quickly to this operation foreseen,
The unexpect'd delivery came back around, Anxious to show others i leave them astound, Diversify try to pick me from out the crowd, Kick things up abit you should of seen how i smile'd,This ancient-style move might come so smoove, I linger'd unto perfection by being kool,Where i stand in case of a jam will succeed , The spy apprehends the finest xzibit indeed,

A yo i got this poem might turn into a rap call'd oh zhit kinetic heres a lil sample
Obedience iz betta than sacrifice, Strenghth'n what remainz i thought twice
Concentration through mire lips recite soft sips, Done in split seconds i work wonders with scripts
A counter-attack prosper'd the perfect jab keen, I act'd quickly to this operation foreseen,
The unexpect'd delivery came back around, Anxious to show others i leave them astound, Diversify try to pick me from out the crowd, Kick things up abit you should of seen how i smile'd,This ancient-style move might come so smoove, I linger'd unto perfection by being kool,Where i stand in case of a jam will succeed , The spy apprehends the finest xzibit indeed,

Ordained

" Examples mislead those that seek assistance, many words which had given out what others thought, nor that not mentioned, yet observed their stance, how most relocations left some bewildered, those cautioned before, as tests continued to be persued, even when positions exchanged the places, recognized much as also got into deciteful trends, always returned and maintained the path, conditions worsened plights exposed, true as intensified efforts had its limitations, forces unexplained plus insignificant matters expressed".

probe'n the outskirtz of my brain wave , a wift of this rave, i work my way around the spark thatz spectacular , a mirage ponders me vernacular , a bee bounce'n roun to yo flower i bumble ,breath control deflect'z edible responses humble,improvement being test'd fo conduct,tunnel under the city to abduct

Support

" Forms reduced what others saw, subdued effects which captured anothers attention, with unsolved forces, gone further to distinguish, as certain experiences, complaints mystified just not to be even heard, did not bother motives known, disturbed the normal flow, though devious ways where explained ones history, later outbursts supported the pleasures, thought of measures to define its interest, covered stances only noticed after, closer quests to find difference when emphasis was put, tensions gave their own parts and hidden agendas".

Projections

" Yes it is not that we don't care, as actions of all turn to truth, each has their own ways, well for this it can not be said, and to make another follow your ways, its just the attention that most lack, they try and its appropriate, so all goes in their so called rate, yes those that acquire leadership, for we are not leaders of others, and don't request to be led by another, we don't claim nor thrieve for superiority, for all must be equal to accomplish goals in thier own suppreme knowledge, and we cater for ourselves, those helping is worth while".

Satisfied

" How various tricks are repeated, the part of beings having to go on, as the failure of certain moments, but still in path, yes two men treading the way, strong as its own natural will, what is it that truth is found, and others dodge that, for must go in the correct mode, performing the good for the better, all of the survival set upon still is striving, its developed if it was all back to the same, most times just press in the direction with thoughts focused, many ask what is that for, yes have set all these forms around, that give increased concerntration, on what has to be done, plus yet what will be to come, each segment proceeds, with its new intensions".

Friendships

" Many questions said, sometimes embarrased though witnessed much upon this earth, with every word spoken, little types gained momentum, as the vast cycles were in purpose, while sustained, still wanted desires that could not have meant, an imbalance toward the basic patterns, and recuperated in time now humble deeds when seeds had grown their worth, seemed misled through forceable traits, which each other gave, distant friends that had been to end, formations in the heavens".

Normalized

" Tried to cushion the causes, with actions not able to commend, as they continued by the stance, processions brought for humble claims, though needed to take into account, traditional patterns meant to always be observed, functions maintained at critical moments, could not disturb positions made, while reports explained of assumed facts, nor the ones involved, each concept to pretend, tractions concerned defeated the best, yet others forbid in its commune, had to express at purposeful deeds, decided pressures when some consumed, upon this earth, and drifted souls, for the living motioned above, the dead lay deep and beneath in thought".

Hatred

" One must learn to pattern theirself in the situations they get, areas that are discovered in all, experiencing gives more truth than just one, others try and make their lies true, and the chosen points magnitude, contained development gets better, yes they are not to be recopied, each progress in their decisions, the ones who had experienced its breath, and knowing its supported elements, just to help them in what they acted, plus new methods of associating with others".

Prepared

" Respective paths when chose the gradual raptures, which soon occured, yet went further, as the patterns changed the focal balances, though claimed less while received, nor those that maintained their facts, just so was kept clear, and others which exaggerated, listed methods that gained surplus amounts, some moments relapsed to give them each part, how conclusions bent to what was meant, non seemed to relate, gone through various modes to achieved desired folds, plus conditioned faults"

Blasting and raping glacier cold thoughts caught devastation...
mocking the good and the poor with wars trepidation...
highly contagious emotional gestation turns to aggravation..
Emancipation and freedoms mirages in this slave nation...
controlling the world with precise moves of assassination...
I'm elevating mental ascension thru my text illustrations...
waking the dumb before we fall to devil condemnation...
erasing lifes elation New World Order is our Damnation..
I’m escaping these turbulent trifling days of hate propagation...

Today is laced with 85% of the population's indecision,
i'm cutting off circulation with scalpel incisions,
politics dividing the populus with devil division,
calculated movements thought-out in precision,
pivotal plays made like cutting for circumcision,
90% of the wealth is kept from our vision,
circulated through television is fear and disdain,
while most of us lost our true king names,
in the american cypher cycles never gain,
just continue our living in this reign of pain,
twelve jewels why isnt that taught in schools,
lowering test averages Ebonics masks the mules,
used like tools for leveredge and to carry the weight,
as our families are shocked and scraped shipped upstate,
contemplate our fate its a matter of time,
gray matter never matters if ya not willing to climb,
used that ladder in your mind and break those binds,
that litter our heads commiting garbage crimes,
living is now we must revolutionize these times,
I dont know about you but im willing to stake mine and CLIMB

Seven seas the seventh day savage men stray,
coarse criminals cantankerous subliminal sway,
radio waves play as the young are denied today,
while televisions show sex and violence as the way,
perpetuating love as cash gold fronts and guns,
tragedy encompasses the poor left out to dry in the sun,
withering away as the young are tried and shunned,
watch your back the devil likes to surprise and stun,
slowing creeping up and then ya life is done....

Speech

" And some don't experience what have done, if only its for their better they accomplish, the extent of that circumstance, has been to evolve and show its true effects, for might not even know it, a further time that will come, to them it was just a daily routine, which is kept up, and only part of the self, this has caused the lifestyle like this, from before till then, it has given roots to its own ways, now has a foundation, to relate to and others are the way they came, patterns have their own translations, all that is observed is seen by the mass, they experienced that set towards them, and don't want to be left behind".

hahaa, got your sticky finally, "benben good mod"

Misinterpretation

" For all is real, and then plans are made to make the imagined join with reality, they are so many, yes and some are just too realistic to be left without noticed, others deserve their minds attention, they strive for the ones of importance, others tried to be fitted in, the correct course must be taken from the beginning, advance shall be done that was also before, with the added help of the resources given".

Pies or Puddin? frozen lives dispute it.
minds rerooted who displaced the conduit?
coax computed bugged and traced beetle thorax's litter the place
chemicals embraced borax is laced inhaling toxins our DNA tastes
morbid estates of these horrors escape souls boiled evaporate without a trace
picture a fractured face of child in pain forced in terrain to die in vain?
what cycles sustain maintained to contain with honor and traditions
psycho analyzed convictions trained composite compartments of blame lockers and lockets
safes and shoeboxes safe deposit boxes protect our profits which utterly cause it as we eat the regurgitated vomit!! oh, by the way, picture the beauty of haley's comet

from golden apples to sour grapes
the light of reason to wrath of despair
in metaphors to which we sink our teeth
grasping for enlightenment to rise from beneath
the state called fallen about the way
gathering the senses that enhance our fate
in and about our world and selves
on the highs and lows upon which we delve
preparing the embedded ness on the heart - the pulse we track
toil through the dross host most gross
to capture the renown story of crown's glory
knowing cause effect affect a change
placing the right opposite the wrong without gray
utilizing the light of the olive and the bee
tracing the path that leads to the point where sun meets sea

ManifestationsEach is trying to learn, they enter in their own angles, which is what they want, and can see to only get in that way, yes they check at all times, when they see it best, many later go on to express, their awarded respect, that they don't claim deserved, all are lessons that try and get where they reach, will be to their limited point, so go and discuss amongst so they develop, and use to certain depth, there is no one to help, for enclose themselves in influence".

Peace Queen
My spirit gets lifted every time you pirouette
Your posture makes it impossible for an imposter
I'm postering your image upon my cosmic walls
So it will still remain after the final comet falls
At the end of time
Which will define a new form
To you I would stay true to form
You're equivalent to equality
Your walk exudes your brand name
Elevated quality
Your model be worth more than the hope diamond's colossal fee
Gabriel's apostrophe's for what belongs to me
You belong to you
Whatever it is that you do, Queen, do you
This comes from the depth of the soul to you
I close my eyes, two
Open my third
I see you
One

through esp i see the evil aura, subjected to visions of horror, as the unknown defends its state of grace and overtakes the explorer, dig your ditch of ignorance, ill stay behind here on surface, some say the fires of hell burn to hot, but i say the temperature is perfect, remain unseen like the mighty wind due to the catarachs of society, an implosion from within O THE IRONY, black hole style greed as we construct our own abyss, no roads now lead to eden our demise has become our bliss, solution confused with dillution mainly commited by the masses, no denying or refuting these aka mental pollution tactics,

unfinished and upolished it is what it is

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Originally Posted by BLADED_THESIS

unfinished and upolished it is what it is

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Okay!!!
Nut_end nice verse, Bigben nice verses also didn't notice you now have the powers that be! Born R 1 good verse (sentimental) nice.Welcome

Peace

Clarified
" What they saw was the soulful smile, it was all real, deaths distrustful field, works were not to be consumed, as they believed all was pure and simple, natural as the darkest truth, thats not subdued, yes they had experienced what was not to fake the place, that took its space, not in the correct part, while changed a bit in the reality of it, those at sleep, the heavens take their toll, all strolls with its presentness, yet an often decided moment, what signalled that was the appearence of those not here at this point".

LOL "unfinished and upolished it is what it is" that wasnt my end verse yo, im stating that piece is unfinished and unpolished. i just felt like dropping it real quick.

those that lie
when cheat and cry
to deceive through ply
getting treats from tricks that apply
for into getting attention
is the main and only frame of apprehension
for bringing around together the company
is the pleasure of their principle of misery
not seeing the view of what's called
for when it appears - who's life will be hauled
as it will happen - by due prescriptive measure
will bring about the real pressure