Word now thats wats up!!!! u got my respect Luther thanks for taking your time to read.
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Word now thats wats up!!!! u got my respect Luther thanks for taking your time to read.
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BigBen WnD
Paint the Town Red ( with bigben)
Automatic Gats with Clips, the only outcome is a Tragic Accident
Again me n the Same Head Destroy our Foes, got the whole town watered Down like Toilet Bowls
Unfold the Scroll, so we can Uphold the Old ways but new Path's to Roads are Known to Fast Erode
So Max. exposure was only Masked by Soliders, Strapped with Gats Mac's and Holisters
We Ran Plans like Sculptures, and ate from the desserts Land like Vultures
The Passive get blasted, sanded down and branded,
I hold my own! like I carry a cannon, intelligent mind,
fuck the dumb, deaf, and blind, Governed obsolete design,
the new molds and outlines, manipulates the viewing mind,
the cattle are primed ! chew on cud and trample thru the mud,
ethics become smudged, family values are lost, children become thugs,
wheres the love? todays teenagers hug they guns trading poison for Funds,
fertile soil is Gummed, thoughts on elevating come undone...
pictures of past....
I strangle the wicked with Love,
show compassion always ready for action,
brothers be lackin, with movements backtrackin,
spinning they wheels no grip lack of traction,
subtract ya action, butterfly affect muscle's contract,
Penetrating Paint brush.. visual collapse Crushed,
heart attack bloodrush this art is fact,an artifact,
spraycan fat nozzle effect,
these murals of life painted in hues of red,
Me and BigBen we Stoled Grands, killed all the Kings Men then.. Foes Ran
And things can only get Worse, We stepped inside a Vacant Church
our Aim ta Rape the Earth, so we Came with Grenades that Burst
and a Flame Thrower, to Celebrate the almighty Satans Birth
while the pastor reads, those Fake Script Words..
we Erase ya Curb with Effective Well Placed Urns, we gonna win cuz we Takein Turns
So ya know we were Packin Heat, While we were Servin a Blast for Each
Causein Complete Catastrophe, But this time with more Casualties
and Rancid Screams, while loadin those Gats with Beamz..
to fully Detach ya Seamz,
bram stoker addicts and vultures,
scavanging squadrons of soldiers,
danger and ben paint the town red!!...
the culture poacher ratchets spit n strike Jags, Leapords & Cobras,
Urban Taxidermist trophy toter,
closet holdin' endangered coats,
the Heat smolders it's hotter than Vegas,
I'm warnin' Dangerous, bring the Red Sharpie,
shit is boisterous ! Purple Velvet Plush,
remove the vein roll up the Dutch,
Slow with the clutch never automatic
laziness creates tragic habits causin' unwanted Panic...
next day you read innocent bystanderd's branded,
No!! hell nah!! we're not having it!
motivate the motor rate chess moves paint the Town Burgundy,
swollen noses Bleed from make-up wearing clowns,
the tainted terrain towns ebb,
Our flow is sleds! among these snowflake icicle heads,
blue faced bastards turn brick red,
brush strokes maroon the dead,
cluttered city canvas we Paint the Town Red!!
Were quick ta get da Biscut, then go click click with the Trigg if theres Conflictions...
leave'n the rich kids no longer livin in sin, but in da cement.....
we got the lead for more bloodshed, and the infa red for more instant deaths..
dim wits is deminished text like imprints on a Infants head,
then if ya don't listen were casuin inflicts in ya skin flesh
Cuz Dangerous with BigBen is the Opposite of Painless..
we quick to shoplift with da Stainless, ya best Option is to Lay Stiff
cuz if the Glock Spits and its Aim Hits, you gonna be six feet deep...
but not with the people you Came With, instead you'll be rottin in the Pavement
Cuz me and BigBen High, Glide when we Smite the Unkind
Usually come out when the Sunrise, for ending peoples Dumb Lives
thats Intertwined and Combined, with ill spits and Blood Lines
cuz i've created whole Mountains, while i Re-arrange the TownsMen
ta get used as we please cuz we Paint the Town Red
YO,mega nice colab wit BIG B,fuck, readin this all blazed,you two got madd flava keep up the RAW shit son,hit me back
eversick666
yo thanks eversick your opinon is greatly respected
tight shit yo, keep it up
thanks for your insight...
im walking thru the shadows of my past//
gotta think fast, hard to live lika an outcast//
my heart is pounding so hard that it hurts//
my hands are shakin and i feel like my head is about to burst//
empty shells of lost souls like an echo of silence//
streets filled corpses and cops that use violence//
my brain is racin and I´m soced in sweth//
my world is fadeing now I´m close to death//
i close my eyes as i drag my last breath//
but i wont give up untill my soule gets blessed.
Well consider me a Pastor, for my mic Blessed ya Trash Verse
Mr. Merrick i said make your own thread, don't post it mine
sorry dude
no problem dood
just bumpin my thread prolly gonna drop soon
My Eye is in the Scope
My Eye is in the Scope, as I Snipe from High Window's, turning my Foes Wives ta Widow's
Opponets Size is Little like Minnow's, my Ink Flow Tip-Toes ta Give Those that Appose defeat Syndrome
Like a Execution, my Text is Electrocution, Un-Seen cuz i fucked up ya computer Screen'z Resolution
holding more Green then the Western Union, I'm the Best with Text and i'll Prove It
Cuz ya'll fall off more then Acorn's, while i stay on the grind like Skateboards!!
as my Rage Takes Form, Tossin Claymores Galore that Came For Pain n Gore like HailStorms!!
so wat you Expected? my Pen Flicks Edge Tip let's of Agression puttin me in a Stupendous Suspension
Respected like a Lieutenant, ATTENTION me and my Friends Hit HARD like an Erection!!!
no Exceptions i'm the closest thing to a Fugitive, Immune ta Trick'z, try'n ta Ruin my Shit
so know the only time you "CROSS my path" is ya Ass on the Crucifix!!
Causing much Dis-Honor ta my ForeFathers no Longer the young GrassHopper
War-Monger not knowin life's ClockWork, a Martyr that Partnered with a Monster
i Depart with my Revolver, only ta Acquire an Attire that Fire's SideWinders the size of IceBergs
my Tight Words kill Entire Empires thats Guarnteed to get you layed out like a Recliner!!
while my Adviser's Admire My Work, cuz it'z not leaveing a single Survivor!!
uppin this...
^O^dope verse!
these lines really stood out 2 me
Cuz ya'll fall off more then Acorn's, while i stay on the grind like Skateboards!!
as my Rage Takes Form, Tossin Claymores Galore that Came For Pain n Gore like HailStorms
so wat you Expected? my Pen Flicks Edge Tip let's of Agression puttin me in a Stupendous Suspension
Respected like a Lieutenant, ATTENTION me and my Friends Hit HARD like an Erection!!!
peace
word now thats wats up!! propz to u sirkulayshun!!!
bump
bump yet again
yah,those are some true lines dude madd props..
get at me tho
peace
eversick666
this post is levels above your previous ones in my opinion. you are becoming alot more skilled at portraying deeper meanings in a fluid manner.
" i Depart with my Revolver, only ta Acquire an Attire that Fire's SideWinders the size of IceBergs
my Tight Words kill Entire Empires thats Guarnteed to get you layed out like a Recliner!!"
word thanks andrem for giving me your in sight in my thread. i shall proceed
better than me fo sho!
nice lines dawg
off topic: do i have to make my own verse thread to get some feedback? someone better skim through my verses and tell me where the hell i'm goin wrong. Any opinion is welcomed. Remember: I am Romanian! so if i suck, i suck, but for a Romanian guy i guess i'm hangin on pretty good.
holla at me! peace
word thanks homie, and yeah make ur own thread haha :D
ur getting better but poetry man work on ya rhyme schemes
u wanna spar? in this thread?
haha ight u start
Fuck this yappy kid bitch,he only recieves lil snatched tid-bits
Xed off santa's wish list, his lyrics are left alone like naughty misfits
Two shots to the head, body lookin " dismembered and red"
He couldn't drop it sick if he fell over on the tile then bled
You can't handle verns set, haven't you learned yet?
You aint wanted at the table, like some prunes and burnt bread
drop back lol
wutup duke? still fuckin all the earths bitches?Quote:
Originally Posted by Palehorse
Quote:
Originally Posted by 200 proof
lol ok
seal ya life like a envelope ya head in my scope, now ya dead cuz ya provoked
you be like 50 and snoop and be saying oh no, ya lines are so-so
like that mo fo jermaine dupri, cause u his agony when he comited bankrupcy, fuck that skank you see, then flank ya street with artillery
go to every house company and facility, im a gladiator, you just glad-ta-be-a-hater
Call me the son god, better yet mister osirisQuote:
Originally Posted by White N Dangerous
Blister ya iris, scrolls lookin sloppy like they on some ripped up papyrus
You couldn't get shit tight if you shopped at S&M hangouts
bitch, get ya fangs out
finish it later
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just sum shit i found...
Zeal is what's Atackin' Ya, living by survival like Zebra's in Africa
Act'n Thug, i'll Jack ya Mug, ain't no stoppin me like like Crack in Slums
Ask dis Stud, spittin Acid Blood, as i Slash n Thrust, you just Scratch n Shove
you can say i stopped ya gameplan like I Sacked n Rushed
with Ease you fall behind like i was Lappin ya
It's Simple G, the way Sympathy Singles Me out of this lyrical Symphony
Miracles every other Century, Essentially, Progression Processes Professions
Sew Text Heads, so now ya know a Legend, blow da Smith n wessen
shot a foe on my block Shoutin Bold, i got da Masterful gift of GAb that spits with jabs
My life is bullied by Hatred, Why tonight must i Shapeshift from a Patient with Patience
ta a Plantiff with Lame spits, its Plain SicC the way my Day Ends
Make friends, Take Treasure and Display Sin
My Visions See, Vixens in Imagery, Instantly a Victory Visits Me
My Spits Twist ya Spleen so Visciously, Tricks Wish n Plea fa Trickery,
Trick or Treat cuz im shootin recklessly like Pistol Pete, as Missles Seek
This Little Dweebs Lips n Teeth, Rip ya Meat, Wickedly
leave ya ta Twitch n Bleed i bet now you Whisper Speech,
or you'll be Missin' Feet like cuttin down a Green Christmas Tree,
that last post was very good
i liked the way it was structured , made me want to look for more and appreciate it on a higher level
much love and respect brother , that was a post of illness
word thanks homie good lookin and stay tune'd fa mo
word now thats wats up shittttttttttttt good feed :D anyway be sure to stay tuned i got more coming ;)
i agree with spoken man, IMO best shit in the temple as of late
ps get on aim man
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im on where u at
papersolider722 u off line NICCA
lol, u got another screen name?
naw im online now homie wats ur i.d?
vernakula
im me then
LMMFAO it says ur not available
A Elite
I'm an Elite when it comes to this Rappin', if you don't Believe me just Ask Them,
They've Seen Me in da Heat of Passion, when Rapid Peeps Retreat befo' they in da Casket Deceased
in da Soil and Earth havin Relaxin Sleep, no more Turmoil and Hurt havin Ever-Lastin Dreams
Artifacts of his Arm un-Attached, his Lungs Collapsed From my Comrade's Contact
no Counter-Attack, as my Partner's ripped out there Diaphragm, leave'n em' Handicapped
Man WnD Back, with a Weed Sack like fuckin Aristocrats, P.I.R Maniac's that'll kill Just ta Get a Laugh
With the Gift of Gab, that Makes Me a Supreme Textcee, Tempt Me ta da Tenth Degree
and i Guarntee This, that the last Thing you See Is, this Emcee's Fury Unleashed Bitch