White N Dangerous $$$$Thread$$$$

24 Hours to live with no money

On Hour one I'd Gaze at da Sun, Thinking bout da Fame i'll Retain when im Done
Walking down the Street, Feeling my Options Starting to Deplete
with every footstep i took on the Concrete, Hardly..Happy
Finding it difficult to be in such a Calm Peace.. my Heart Beat starting to Race Faster..
Another Hour and Eighteen Seconds After, I'm lookin worse then the Bums that been there since Last Year
downtown..my mind Hellbound, wondering if i'll still be Alive at Sundown
Arrived at my Sons House, knowing that i'd be soon Deprived of my Only Child
i Cast a Lonely Smile to the Background, knowing that it's the last time i'd see my GrandChild
10 Hours have gone by and i want Sum Pussy Before I Leave, so i go down to Rampart n Cherokee
Where all the Ladies Be, trying ta Sell they Pink..Taco, trying to impress the Pimp Across da Road..
so i Whip my Dick out my Zipper like its a New Trend, I flash "My LIttle Friend" and she gets On my Dick
Fuckin a Nasty Slut, Her Passion Climaxed more then Once, as i Forced it in her Butt
Realiseing its Going on Six...Cum in her Butt real Quick, then head for the Only Place Left...
My Soul Bleeding, knowing that it won't Heal overtime like a break up in Elementary School
Step into the Room with a Weapon and go BOOM, Depressed and Confuzed..
Everytime my Tech Shoots it's just Proof That my Death's Soon..
My Next Move is ta take as many as i can With Me
in my mind Wishing, knowing that Inside I'm not Really Winning
Leaving Bloody Vessels all ova the Generals Office,
I'm on my Last Clip i Pop In the Socket and start screaming "God Please Forgive!!"
as i Got three Injury's in my Knee's and Arterties, and Finally the Fireing is Ceased
My Body on it's Knee's, Blood drips down my Cheek, as i finally Found wat was Promised to Me
and thats a underground Spot so i can Sleep for Eternity, never to Feel da heat on my un-recognized body

startin this cypher back up again
aight imma be real focused this time


I walk among one of the best, hot in writtens, known to devour the feinds
Pop your lungs from under ya chest, droppin villains, prone to scatter ya dreams
I'm the one They call deiesel, burried underneath you, young and decietful
Watch my thunders deplete you, varried wonders, but equal, None up 4 a sequel?

not as good as u can be

STAY OFF DA METH

and yo, since ur sick at schemes, rate mine??? Then drop another good written back, to liven up your thread homie 1

haha listen to you wanting me to rate ur drop in my thread haha, ight..


shits ill homie wat else is there to say..

no, on the real

ur shit, was very scattered flow was missing in some parts...but i know u can do better, and that is why i had u rate my schemes, make a verse that LIVES UP TO UR SKILL, and you'll get the propa feedback homie

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Originally Posted by White N Dangerous

Psycho? Just a little bit, disclaimed by my ancestry/
Darkness draws like a moth and only the light can answer me//
Bullets flying from the mouth, like the climax from Matrix Revolutions/
Beat impossible odds, King David’s Evolution//
The pure rage intoxicates my conscious behavior/
Zombie-like, bubonic plague shit, I’m no savior//
I fight back against the storm, step in the middle of a cyclone/
My rise is a story forlorn, shadow hounds ripping me bone by bone//
God’s light has left me blinded, early comprehension of my potency/
You had me in the dust grinded, paying your pension by my fiery tendency//
I’m never coming back, that’s already evident/
Once I reach those halls I’ll destroy your residence//
Offer no reverence; fuck this fake hierarchy/
Get off me so I can escape this earthly lethargy//

Descent? Happened a long time ago, I won’t pretend//
I wear these battle scars proudly, the devilish dancer,
God’s time is over, I’m that underworld cancer//

feedback?

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Its seems a bit forced, or maybe more of a complaint rather? Anyway keep up the good work. Will check the rest of your posts.

Peace
PS: Keep posting!

ayo word!!

be on da lookout for more drops and much luv to everyone for leaving there opinion

u good ur all betta than me anyway i mite jus quit wat does everyone else think i should do go and never write lyrics again or keep tryin peeps decide for me plz

lol don't just come here and say im good then tell me ur problems and ask people wat u should do, get off my topic

can't sumbody clean this up?

bump'n this imma drop sumthing new today

waitin to feed on your new verse.

A greater force

Do you believe in a Greater Force? Ancient Lore..
that there is somebody that Created ya Fate and Form?
and Awaits Always Awake Makeing Sure..
Everything he made Stays the Same like Pain n Gore
What if he Came ta Earth and Proclaimed the Worst
would you look the other Way not ready ta Substain the Cure
And in a Instant, the whole civilization become's Extinct
my Instinct Within, lettin' of Adrenaline, that got you knowin' if Heaven Exist's
Never Ending Dreams turn Dramatically, from Mental Insanity..
Ta turnin NightMares ta Reality, I Cry Tears of Malice that Surpasses Grief
Imagine Me..Traveling' at Maximum Speed, inta the Ballad of the Deceased
Sadness Crafted Bad-Habits of Havoc, Madness Expanded ta be Disastrous
Tired of Being Obssesed and Feeling Regret in these Seasons of Stress
the Beast in my Chest, Leaves me Possessed ta Seeming Upset

Sadness Crafted Bad-Habits of Havoc, Madness Expanded ta be Disastrous
Tired of Being Obssesed and Feeling Regret in these Seasons of Stress
the Beast in my Chest, Leaves me Possessed ta Seeming Upset

hotness

the whole thing is pretty tight but those last three lines are real nice. i couldnt follow a flow through the middle in some spots but definately some good stuff.

ight imma starting to try and get away from the style im using ..i know i know crazy right?? well i though it was time to stretch my legs..

blackness everywhere i go...it's like im BlindFolded
feeling my body weigh me down... like Old Men
perhaps im forsaken.. cuz i know my Destiny
and thats everyones fate...Rest In Peace
wondering wats the Reciepe for the Remedy

my future is like im stareing into a.. Eternal Abyss
Working a Shift.. that is Hurting my Chest..
Burnin da Cess.. ta help my Nerves with the Stress

God please point out the right Path ta Pick..
Status has Expanded.. to Catholic.. ta Can't Exist

they say Practice makes Perfect.. i Learned Quick
Courage has a limit for each and every Person
a WorthLess Cursed Kid, Cursing my Birth An..
wondering my Date of Death, wat Day will They..
Forget this Flesh.. ta forever put me.. ta Lay n Rest..

just sumthing.. imma get active again be on da lookout

in da casket at the funeral (collab wit Master War)

WnD = Green

Master Wars = Red


i can hear these cries and weeps, but i cant find my peeps
........im surprised......do they realize that im not asleep............

Repent my Sins Lived, Repative Depression relentless..
from my Friends and Relatives..Regret my Decison's...

awkward.....old memories of those that befriended me keep comin like clockwork
...my heart hurts.....so i start recitin in abundance.....some of that crack shit
i could here the dead kid next ta me buggin.......i wish i was home huggin
and my son and-my beautiful daughter..marriage i had thoughts of..
but instead of kisses its a box for 6 ft ditches at the alter....
.why bother imma never get out of here....
the pebbles n rocks crashin down made that loud and clear....
outta fear i scream yell and beg for my life back.....
wish i could be saved from this sinkin feelin but aint no life jacket..

Sign's Vanished, While I'm Transfixed on being My Assassin?
i Cry Lackin love n Satisfaction, start ta Panic..Gasping..
like it'll be my Last Breath, Sadness Active, Havoc Advances..
ta be Disasterous, another Obstacle, Blocks my Road...
leaves me Shackled from my Skull ta Toe, Hollow Soul...
Swallowed Whole..Although this Desperado Dissolves Slow
i've Always Known that i will be in heaven with God ..
but it's Odd, Still Feel Sorrow it's Impossible ta Control..

its like i stopped dropped rolled w/ all this dirt on me....
never dressed up before now they got this pleated shirt on me
....the hurt haunts me....always wanted ta be...close ta nature
but this is too close ta the Earth honestly....i guess..
i gotta suck it up and take it modestly....atleast im outta poverty
how'd i die in hostile animosity prolly.....cant feel my body...or my heartbeat
.....try ta speak ta see if my lips work....try ta reach but my wrist hurt....

Which Turn did i Miss First?? Forever a Prisoner ta my Insecure Perimeter
i see the Minister... and he Administers my Hearst with a Single Verse
from the Bible..Truimph Go's from Vibrant ta Quiet and Dull..
the Climate Cold, Frightened and Alone, Fight'n but i Know..
how hard i Fight Death i'll always Subside In This Dry Ditch
Lifeless while My Skin is now Bones..another Lost Soul

im food for the worms- and maggots.....i hate the dark wishin i had matches....
cant seem ta 'cheer up' like a 'bring it on practice',my back its..
attached to this matress and the fact is i need ta relax shit
......like a fat chick after attemptin backflippin tactics...
my mind wanna think jokey but my souls too dramatic....
the two clashes as the rubble continue crashin....down.....
for Christ sakes i wish i had His passion now......
i cant breathe minds cloudy feels like im passin out........

my Casket Contacts With da Ground, Nothing Lasts and thats a Fact like Math.
one minus one Subtract's ta Zero, Stuck Sunk in the Grass n Soil..
God..if ya there..I'm Askin For You.. Brainwaves Remain da Same..
Shame and un-tamed, but Brave ta my Dying Day, my Eyes is half Way Open..
Knowin' in Time i'll Find Why i Lie Blindfolded, or will it be i Rise ta da Sky..
and my Eyes will Look Into my own Demise, will i go to heaven?? or be Declined??

madd deep tho
liken that shit we gotta colab some time soon white
and master wars madd dope as well.. what i enjoy seeing
keep reppen ninjaz
peace
eversick666

haha word, defintely hit me up on pm or sum shit collab sounds good :)

I was really feeling this peice of scripture dawg, schemes on point, mad cool flow, kinda depressing at first but got in to some real deep ish


btw, dude vote on the battles in the tourney, all we need are your votes dude hurry up

1

oh my bad ight going now

ya we gonna get a colab rollin, would be
honored to rep wit ya son hit me up soon wit a time frame
will get on that
peace
eversick666

left a message in your mail box if ya did'ent get it hit me whenever
at [email protected]

bump like a bump a coke mo fo'z

Crazy good shit WnD Good stuff.

~C'Dub!~

mess with me its personal, on the scene burnin dro
learn ta grow, ta a worthless person with no courage
then switch modes fuck beta, im digital ill wit flow
skills im pro, fa real ya know, neva diminish or go
always relentless like a criminal, not typical, or predictable
i'll hit ya ho, with this dick thats bigga then missles yo
a individual that is invincible, and can't be seen cuz im invisibile


I Analyze Friends, Back when i was a Guy that didn't Realise Then
like my EyeLids woun't Find My Time Spent..Shinnin' Righteous
da White Kid, dat Writes Things, Surpised he's Comprised These
Dynasty's start Rivalry's, in all different Varieties, Design Unique
Keep Lines fa Weeks, so i can Finally Free my Anxiety

1st verse >>>>than 2nd

Really feeling the first verse, pretty depressing but you made it interesting and the wordplay was on point....
peace

Never Stopin!!!

Temper Shocki'n like da Weather Watchmen,
can't predict the Vessel's Droppin
Baretta....Tossed It, put Together a Toxic Tonic
that Allow's Us ta Never Stoppiin'!!

like the light Stays Green, Frankly..
we Reamin' Seen in the Eyes of the Angry
cuz they Realised they Hat-ing..
on Me and my Team..
they furious like they got Rabies

Lately Lame Dweebs i Stampede.. Exactly..
me and my Family is Past da Beef
Glad ta See.. us never slowing or stoppin like..Energizer Battery'z...
Lessons I Learned Sessions I Yearn...Challenge Me
Never stopin production like a Factory
and my Facuilty never Naps or Sleeps..can ya Match da Team?

P.I.R

Bank Heist

White n Dangerous AKA Paper Soulja


Ski Mask's on our faces, we enter the Bank ready to empty the Safe Quick
Look at my Homie and Nod as we Open the Doors, Pull out our 4.4'z and yell Get on Da Floor!!
the security guards go for there Side-Arms, while the clerks hit the Silent-Alarm
Without Hesitation, we Aim and start Blazin' like Rambo, Makin an Example
my heart racing Faster, we head for the vault my homie got my Back walking Backwards
we get in the vault without any Argument's, i load up da bags while my homie kept a Eye On Da Rest
tellin the Civilians if they Comply they'll Live, or Decline and Get Five Bullets ta da Head
hearin Cry's from the Kids, knowing if we Survive this Crime were Set.. till our last Breath
we ran out of there like a Marathon, bags in our hands and like Despair...Were Gone..
come to a Sudden Stop, about a Dozen Cops, and the S.w.a.t. point Glocks saying Drop wat we Got..


Akeliz

The 5-0, has us surrounded, their presence had me austounded,
Profounded, I yelled "SHOOT-OUT", and I moved out while announced it,
I found clips, in my jacket, but wasn't taking off my mask yet,
I did this for the +PAPER+, so I'm a +SOLDIER+ till my last breath,
So I blast sets, of bullets, I see my homies trigger as he pulls it,
Said he was down for the cause, and I never figured it was bull-shit,
With a full clip, I started blasting, the cops were dreading with depression,
Dead and stressing, but we needed the whip, so we headed that direction,
But seconds, after we left the crime scene, we heard the sirens scream,
Trying a scheme, we pulled off, jumped out and laid lying unseen,
Trying to clean, the slate, we put the car in nuetural, and into a lake,
Felt like something was absent, but by then it's too late!!,
Finally removed my mask, so I could comprehend what had happened,
Wondering why peoples thoughts, ain't ever quicker than they actions,
Perhaps then, I realized, a long with the evidence, all the money was sunken,
Looked at my parter, and told him all of it was for nothing...DAMN!!

this is the first time i got a chance to really look at your style. its fast, good flow, and very intelligent. there is always room for elevation, im always looking for ways to elevate the sound and flow. try removing a few words ya know, but still keep it catchy. but other than that, its madd good. your a really good writer
and i can hardly match up.

this gonna be a audio, but i figured i'd put the text verson in my thread

HOTNESS

Tried to Cry

Corpses and Faces, Warped from They Vein's slit..
from a Force with Swords that Trained In and Swang It!!
cause of da War of da Nations, Portionz of Brain Bits..
all on da FLoor who could Afford.. all da Graves Digged!!

Assignment is ta Remain Alright, no matta my Dayz Alive
my Pain and STrife in this Daily Time is about ta Incave my Mind!!
It's the WAy of LIfe ta Pay da Price, Dangerous Signs..
Anguish in the present Date It's.. Debations that caused them Plane WREcks!!

I STAY in Allignment, everydAy is a Crisis!!
turn da Page and Pray ya not Caged in Confinment!!
Plagued with all different type of Races and Raped Kids filled with Hatred
be gettin Raised In Poor Places and Violated by the Mankind of Satan

Complain but the DRug Game would rather Buy n Selll..
but imma Shine at Night-Time like Orion's Belt!!!
all them Gun's Firing..Shells, Done..Divide'n Cells
Funds Supply'n Everyone, but the Ones Tryin ta Help

I can't Cry.. my Eyes.. is Dry like i can't Find water in Dessert Sand
im Wise and Yet..I'm Just a Man..Tugged Enough and i'll break like a Rubber Band

therer re structured anyone??

nice lil diddy white been sleepin on the corp my comp is gonzo,but hopefully ima cop a new one till then peace.
stay up
eversick666

ok changed that last verse for the last time lookin for love

ight no luv lmao ummm bump!

WHITE N DANGEROUS

Wive's I Puncture, Kind of Absurd im known as da GAnja Puffer!
Highness of Violence! da Tyrant dat Truimph's ova da Spineless!!
Icicle veins from da Tips of My Toes, Ride Ho'z like they da town Bicycle!
Tormentor Dispenser, Adventure Protector! no Lecture's from this Professor
Eerie Be Me, CLearly It's Seen, Dexterity Dense like da Seven Seas!

Necromancer Necessities! Technically Dangerous like mis-used Chemistry

Dragon that Castrated those not Obeying! Surveying my Oasis
Arrogant American! aint no Comparison so save ya self da Embarrassment
Napalm killed more people then Graveyards! dat's Bizarre leavin lyrical birthmarks
Graceful Advocate, Demonstrate then Detonate and Devistate da U.S.A
Emperor i control da Temperature! i Reckon ya Best Bet is ta Exit
Ranger wit da Razor, cut bodys like its a Rapier! Trainer...not Traitor
Organs Hanged, when i Break ya'll FAg'z Porcelain Face, Mourge's ya Fate
Uranium Weak, i'm Titanium a cyclone Sinister Typhoon...
Sap ya Strength, Accidents Make it so theres no need ta get da Ambulace Rang!

shit was hot kid, did it better then me haha
get at me-

sup ya'll been on vacation for 2 weeks! im back tho..

bumpin this shyt

sicknin i see u got flow and a acronym i need one of those

i got ma official thread too gimme some feed back much love

gizzatme

Yeah Dangerous is always spittin' flames!