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damn, that was nice. i'm feeling your imagery a lot, its vivid and conveys your message very well. i checked out the audio and that was good too. i really like your style. please post more, this was a very enjoyable piece to read
peace
i would explore if it came with a condom :P j/p Dae, i loved it, listen to it, might listen to it again, i love the way your thought pattern gives off a clear strait vision..........
word, thats mad nice!
good stuff
when i read this one, i got that tune of dear summer in my head, fits perfect.
Once again, thanks to everyone for the love, and props to all who felt my piece, but please know that for me that's not what it's all about. Any criticism, be it positive or negative, serves a purpose to a true writer. Not ever person that views another's work is going to approve of said work. I am more than aware that people have different opinions as well as tastes. Because it is so, I also know that I will never be able to satisfy the palate of every individual. In my opinion, negative comments help a person to grow and become stronger/better, so I am not offended by them, and actually view them as stepping stones to success. However, it's the blatant disrespect that I dislike. So ... if you choose to be disrespectful, it's all good, but please know that ... I AM THAT CHICK ... I'll serve that shit right back to your ass ... RAW.
Peace
Thanks Spoken ... yeah, those were better times ... The Poet's Corner. I still miss it ... and My 4 Horsemen ... lol ...
That thread contained some real jewels ... so much talent. I really miss reading them all, we all contributed to the insightful inspiration that was felt there. Hopefully we'll be able to build some new memories in time ...
who knows :)
Peace
PS: I'm down for whatever ... still waiting for that beat ... ;)
Damn Mami...............
reading it word for word made me like it even more....
damn......
eye am speechless...
good work.
peace the older God.
p.s. still waiting on your verse and what direction we gonna take this...
you know where to find me
Kingz and Queenz for life!
thats deep thats a level i'm tryin to get to keep posting
whoa ... it slipped my mind ... sorry ... I'll get at it soon and let you know.Quote:
Originally Posted by NAKHI the SOLORIAN
Peace
^O^ ^O^ ^O^ ^O^ ^O^ ^O^ ^O^ :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: ^O^ ^O^
^^^ ;) ... :d
I dont think this lacks fighting spirit at all...To me, the descriptive & emotional language of the verse leads me to think that you are neck deep in your battle, letting off a little steam, and gathering yourself for your next move. I liked it! Keep the ink flowing
ONE LOVE
Thanks EF ... I'm glad you enjoyed the read ...Quote:
Originally Posted by Elusive-Fugitive
You are very much correct. This is my verse from a collab that I did with CD ... :looking: ... it was centered around my frustration with our entire electoral process and the unjustified war that was waged against Iraq. It was really my way of letting off some steam, while at the same time calling attention to how we are being viewed, or dare I say judged, by the actions of our so called President. There are so many people who are and voted against him, yet we are all forced to wear the same badges of shame as those who are in support of him. The masses blindly flock behind this "Shepard" being foolishly mislead by his unfounded suspicions, which serve as the weakening agent in his supposedly "solid" foundation. It's almost as if he were single handedly trying to destroy us as a Nation and a people. We are looked upon by all as a greedy, selfish nation who is only concerned with selfish gains, and for the most part, it's sadly true. But that is the image of those in positions of political power and authority, not the common people, although we are the ones to pay the ultimate price. It makes one really wonder who the true terrorist are. They try to blind us even further with all these bullshit illusions about voting, and how by doing so, we can make a difference ... lol ... what's even sadder than that is the fact that so many people believe it, as if the previous election wasn't enough of a mockery. Things will never change. The state of the world will only continue to diminish. This is just the beginning ... of the end that is.
Peace
muah ... *D
you speak the truth Dae, really enjoyed that piece, thought your train of thought flowed real nice line to line. Peace,