i liked it alot keep it up man!
everyone's poetry is very good im impressed!
Printable View
i liked it alot keep it up man!
everyone's poetry is very good im impressed!
((\\\::~ 3rd World America ~::///))
this punishment’s sinful if crime in Heaven blackens Christbut governments dwindle if Nine-elevens happen twiceso you listened to a fool, who contrived election from Gorewhose religion was a tool to disguise intention for warit laughed at feds, but more truthful: you lie and shed tearsBin Laden’s dead, just more useful alive to spread fearcrash conspiracies, Anthrax, Weapons of Mass Destructionfascist tyranny, hands clap, President’s last discussionconquer nations, Apaches eat ‘em, as cobras slide over soilOperation Iraqi Freedom, though soldiers died over oilit coulda created democracy, we took the strongest cowardif Bush’s greatest hypocrisy’s we put Saddam in power
. . . .
rules alter our right’s precedence, in essence of legislationschools offer us life-sentences instead of an educationfaceless classism and Stalinism of systematic communitiesracist fascism of politicians with diplomatic immunitywe know the Tuskeegee Project was preparation for AIDSbelow it was greedy logic with reparations and gravesnow we pray for assassination in this fervent murder storyand we’d slay for a vaccination in his urban purgatoryblasphemy killed a blame-scoffed atheist he aided betrayalfactories buildin’ brainwashed patriots, created to failWar is peace, Freedom is slavery, and two plus two is fivesworn defeat, even in bravery, ‘cause truth was suicide
. . . .
Home of the Brave, how blessed this nation to let ‘em diehope for the slaves, found gentrification and genocidetanks roll through the streets over Molotov hand grenadesranks rose to the feat of a holocaust, damned brigadesif hearts should fall, repeat fate, we fight to stop intrusionit’s Martial law, police states rewrite The Constitutionsacred files, wars pushed, to see if our nation could witherSatan’s Child, George Bush: a reincarnation of HitlerAmerican rebels praised if dead, shows no man’s impurityour terrorist level raised to red, no Homeland securitywhile a breath of resolution is stifled and tried for treasonI cried death or revolution, my rifle provides a reason
Copyright © 2005 Psykosus, The Soulless Survivalist
bery nice!!Quote:
Originally Posted by RockD
When i die
I take off with made height
flying over graveyards sacrificed to do right
flooded bodies rock the underbelly of illuminati
star struck
Fade on our eyes with third sight
Ray bans reaching out to my body
With one way to die inside a quarantined fire
its in the up turned dirt
the ground we played on at birth
Massive Supplier
We fuckin' up when we get down there kid
recess with resuscitation daily and vivid like dream
rest then recieve it like cream
forth coming of the never been seen
I hope your exoskeleton is clean
Cuz after every cover up the covered become more interviened
Mostly Spotted
Our rock takes hold your atmosphere
Engines can't fuck with discs from crystal clear
With a telegram A.K.A. signed off as mr. grey a headed straight for the milkyway
Pray, its our time the Hades clock ran up
The streets is flooded now the walking dead shall walk among us........
there is more but i thought of that years ago.
Dismantled
" Would not have accepted, though confronted on a whole scale, if had known, the propulsion of existence, with those that get things done, while expected to control, misled conflicts returned toward the guideline, later involved with discreet intentions, wails then which continuously came, what was real was left so sould be mocked indeed when noticed, these trully than that went wrong, nor justification of where was to strike after, still revealed there was an abnormality between the relationship, as there was only non, certain acceptences prepared the types inplanted, further contributions attained things forgot, these suspended before its course, what heard later disbanded, the stolen sights while searched for another, parted efforts changed the positions to accomodate the inbalance, often tributes expelled what others thought not wise for the ones that died and some faced the rest plus taken cared of offsprings, situated in patterns which displayed articulated moves, though thorough through all mankind".
Aspire
" Discriptive hearts when got caught at that which gave no part, plus those solemnly forgotten, distant facts where led others toward distruction, methods thought now unable to be recalled, the types that expressed, how far had it gained, as all it seemed only a dream, whilst the stream adapted to its habitual form, them lost not remembered, what helped sustained the begotten, mentioned remorses caused little effect to progressive tones, unbalanced notions rear and involved in action as stored, after marriages a female had sex with the one allowed, and before performed intercourse with the ones that wanted, just to be brought to point, while many miss what could have been real, not known of rapid strides, with humanities success, granted facts which gave treatments to certain kinds in society, though trends shared their half, out placed occasions which retaliated in norm, those that heard, now soon relinquished".
The death of the reciprocal/
I reach a pinnacle of imbecile/
A few years ago, and I mean in the literal/
Was pitiful, in mythical proportions/
Knowing the eventual residual emotions/
That would erode my soul in slow torment/
Boughs disposed my ambition from my reason/
To every event there is a time and is a season/
Chronologically I logically needed lesions/
Legions of reason, ta bleed ink in, a better harvest season/
Treason against Him, but the heathen within refused to repent/
And my soul’s slow roll to the black hole wouldn’t relent/
I prayed to men, not the Lord and Saviour of them/
It was the money, since cents made sense/
In a life where there’s only popper and prince/
No proper dimension for median ascension/
And since you’re either the sacrifice or sacker/
In a lynchin’…best to be the lynch pin/
A sinister sinecure, when the minister’s miniature/
To my cerebral cortex, preachin was out of context/
To succumb to duress, suppressed by the mess/
A melding of confused reality an’ sinning and vex/
Lucifer’s nest became my preference to rest/
And Devil’s pie to subside my hungry eyes/
Gluttons of immoral imagery, a sinful synergy/
Of shared energy between a mortal and the Enemy/
Keep droppin those fire poetry scriptures peeps!! i like wat i read
put your life on the line for the crazy masses of The People and you get your future revealed as a sacrifice like the holy book states. your sig intended for me to say that.
I think it's very beautiful for your first "real" attempt at Poetry. It captures the purity of an emotional transition from boyhood to manhood. I appreciate the fact that you were not afraid to let your insecurities show. A word of advice though (from someone who's learned the hard way) ... never let your past dictate your future, and always stand stronger than your fears.Quote:
Originally Posted by MefMan36
Keep at it, this was really nice (I need to drop more in this thread myself).
In Shadow Of Death
In shadow of death there exist many forms of moans
You'll hear the horn when Lord opens his door
He doesn't care if you was poor or rich
But if you was bitch
If you was good or you burned down the witch
Be witched, be lynched
Sunshower is here I know it surely
If you don't believe just open ya eyes, you'll realize it early
Lil' curly boys, lil' blondie girls
Throw out all ya toys, you don't need ya pearls
Diamonds, jewels or gold
Only bleedin' Earth to hold
All the pretty stories was told and all the redemption was sold
We brought apocalypse to ourselves, I see dark clouds all around
And I hear gun clap, the same old sound
Dead man fallin' on the ground
Stains of blood is what we dealin' with
Sippin' it, spit or swallow, swallow or spit
Bitter taste in mouth begins this final part of way
Which part of day will we see in the end?
Noon is midnight, evening is morning, message sent
Strenuous Smoked Out and Now I'm high hypnotized the lie
On fakester studying of the rhyme recreational past time
Chillin' with the $10 extra I charged menace
passing the suffocation to his children I puffed on behalf the ones of kindred
Passed it back quick, my body functions flew through the ceiling
"I'll be right back"
Probably sounded odd with my last breath
Got up all casual with tightening in my chest and to the kitchen to rest with my head in the freezer
Wasn't doing any good, I crossed the house to try and get a breather
Made it to the AC cooled room i saw a cloud when i looked in the mirror and soon turned to nothing
Flat out on my conscience meter I grabbed for something to hold onto
This big kid fell and the last of his senses heard his skull hit the floorboards
Pure nothing echo
that's it
No longer trying to gasp for air
Stars shaped a blown out white face asking if i wanted life or death
I chose fuck it
All of a sudden there's a cold sweat running, it felt like I was passed out for years got up to my feet back into my wonderland
Cause I've been Smoking for years not knowing my much better chances of strenuous heart attack, born with low blood pressure cardiac, intoxicated sperm cell grown from my dad.
extreme asphyxiation.
Thanx for the feedback, I appreciate it. Also thanx for the advice, I am trying to work on that, btw.Quote:
Originally Posted by Dae Ja Nae
peace
Postures
" Prostitutes taught alot, things that a mother would not tell or inact, even though did not practice sex with them, other thoughts put in perspective, slow with remorse the phase continued, how many folds returned after its worth, plus those that heard, got captivated turning simple tasks, the normal sequences chanced for its revenge, while descriptions differed to where most gave, lonely methods which detached from those among, and tributes cared for their existence, waited measures to achieve what was left, forgotten myths and dusts fates great timed design, skills maintained their effectiveness, as conditions prepared its focus, the two walked away toward the plains as if a couple, female and male during the night, with love in mind, yet the man just hired her physical service, whilst they just left the local bar, and after would part then lead to his own house, she only needed the charged amounts worth, which is to be paid upon completion, when possible could capture another customer, as long the conditions are acceptable, they recalled on the street that passed one".
Props bro! Guardian this piece really struck me...Props bro!
By chance I was listening to one of your audio samples "onwards" and the flow of the piece and the perspective instantly came clear to me
ONE LOVE
northern cali the dormant rats rally scrambling like eggs swallowed whole by snakes sadly digested those who oppose tight budded like a rose clipped thorns pierced the gardeners hand upon contact the shears fall to the sand the callousness of man strategizes the upper-hand movements made calculated and planned to divide the lands supply and demand trade sanctions that slam the economic strength but wait lets start from our plate served with hate like a side dish plate quickly we consume these marketed traits enemies struggle under low economic states the gardener holds the rake collecting leaves the have fallen through the changing seasons and storms ya'll been warned I'm cooking heads till straightened or curled like a perm ya'll asexual worms just eat dirt and squirm!
catch the unofficial clues of societies foolish fueding views blistered index fingers misused gun powder residue the dreaded mules carry the cues the weight is pulled with various tools measured precisely ruled miniscule imperfections amplify misdirection correct those connecting words reflecting mirrored contention supported by unproven suspension nowadays tongues are lynching powered by executive decisions negative thoughts only poison like emissions nothing is contested heads full of ignorance and envy become cemented sculpted sluggish thoughts demented blocked logic and lack of common sense!!!!
that shit is dope...^^^^^^
Hey Thanx Elusive-Fugitive!
I have not seen much of your posts recently. Keep writing and reciting. Keep posting.
Take Care
Peace.
abstract concrete when relief like a pep show about whoa
for go out like the fall clout the nuclear bomb spout
turning the earth into the moon can't breathe to bloom
need the suits from chem class to stay active on this base
touching down in space on zero ground the snow globe effect
surrounds to square like a t crossed every way which it
shift from winds that wind like twisting serpentines of
the mind in brain ingesting rain when damn breaks cram
from plug protracted compass directing compromised ass
into instinct away intuition presinct shelter where siren
alarms when calm too quiet before riot of carnage as relative
to general perspective into special dynamics blowing back
drafts as vacums suck out breath from life reducing by half
the multiplyer zone of death quarantined damage and control
savage as post apocalypse of winter after burn from active summer
radio controlled thunder to against conscious like concussions
rushing hammers to drum ears splitting hear from listen causing
dissension from apprehension incomprehension no descion long
from living no mention of tension thicken with friction got
wacked to static forming stasis geling to basis home of hiatus
late rush to mush from contact leaving mapped like day after the
seal repealed sun from shine froze the time between to and fro
where only glow is neon from charged ions atomic like neutrons
in nucleus mutate to jump start a date with nature somewhere fate
provided inference from enter fear rinse nurture akin murder kill
essence from pressence reverse blessing and curse carriage to hearse
can't hurt now numb from torque central to fuse petals to not love
convorting inner workings to anti-matter plaster ante towards master
sense to tense stiff stuck from lift up like ash thrash to dust down
with the rain coating stain the hot flash of cold fire under skin akin
to desire that don't aspire shocked from shells to retire like oblivion
rocked the zeal to obliterate living blasting dom nowhere near king coming
in a war where less blood list hoods like good or bad ball black chalk white
minor notes to casualities ties bind bond coexist to perish thoughts to
unwrought iron make lead to weight crush from brow beat like plow quick
to swords unseen words costing dollars of two cent of five don't vie in
block of chips where egg heads scramble fry and poach to dedevil uncredible
Resolutions
" What thinked before not done, proving to be essential, as the actions had their images to be gazed upon, and recognized what type trully is, with that could not properlly be relieved and continued to get mingled within the vast system, how soon was to come blame when experienced a point of mistrust, now others had thought they found the chance as was only once, left what was behind but no sympathy at all, for the centuries had been in pattern one after the other, with many that faced what they saw, other things seemed scarey had to go on and be consulted, yes everyone where in their own process from the beginning of birth, to the end of death, thus got consumed within anothers potential, all had to continue with minimal disturbance, though had tried getting further attention, almost had different things going, yet was the same process again and repeated, each with their unique method only to be displaced with what had to take place, function had its cause showing how led astray, many don't mention only watch, as the positions take their moment".
Persued
" Getting worsened when knew the better, and was a moment not expressed, yet now had become actions, those forgotten with their death having been early, where they to deserve the title hero, did not know even though had to not try, as having to replace but was the same, many accepting the pattern, yet was not the type, realizing what had done, and persue only in ones path, each that determined the difference, how activities had become used of, those going to what they expected and the methods continued to separate, all bearing this in mind, not having to rush trying to explain but now all is within ones procedings, with each revealing all its secrets that where too much, what got wanted obstructing the proper flow, exerted with a better centre at its own strength, cultivating the natural purpose of the cause, questions that seemed to need to ask, just leaving them going by loss, and had taken a human stance and fell out, for there was no effort anymore, the beings upon all the activities, whilst humanity delapidated".
just dotes to note
i say intellectuals are factualnot ones to speak of status quofor not about the haves and notsjust the smarts to enliven ones lot
once upon a plane called brainthere was an outpouring of raindestined to refresh at best the mindthe happenstance of conscience in time
to heed the workings of ghostthe inner speaking playing hosta choice its not much aboutstilled in silence need not to shout
there was a step off the earthwhere one should go to perchneither above nor below as it gojust much to consider about so and so
its proven that really need one womana ladyesque feminine in the bloomingwhere head and heart are always persuantfor wisdom's work is never consummate
its deep as the questions of lifeand as shallow as political strifewhere mirrors are emminent quicksilverintro and extro convorted define the sliver
their ago in time is common sensedesicive in the split of mice and menthough for are want to gut instinctfar removed from ones wanting to think
:eggy: me stepping off the face is a fall into space, trying to follow is their drop from grace:eggy:
Just dotes to notes - that was a good verse, nut_end.
Peace
Final
Retaining the effect once thought, other times sensed with that always effect, yet there is that one of the opposite, taking different talents now noticing that all was a procession of what was to occur, for started upon their own, all was not mentioned, but did not have to show change, as the average actions only possessed, what many soon compared, suppose encouraged by anothers purpose, just for all to know, how the reactions showed trying to define ones patterns, but there are to reflect on other moments, those given paths to their own flourishment, so must progress, many would only notice, returning remembered that of past, yet can be recalled , types in tempretures rate tell of a similar cycle, did not want to attempt such proceedings, and should not lead to a destructive pattern, most lost for had participated, with not much to be told, though could only understand that had been done, departures had no meaning to anyone, they did not try but had to be brought to mind of all that lived accross the surface, while was within its domain, with others that thrieve together, seeming as though was intense, yet later would be thought of, past notions that could not be reversed, all must continue in its cultivation towards new deciplines, yes and it was grand with its vast challenges, that each one could develop in".
thank you.
MIND SEX
QOP
With no penetration
Just mental relations
Seductively sexing your mind
Your body temperature rises in no time
With steamy verbal intercourse
The sex has greater worth
Making your knees go weak
From these words I speak
Intellectual talks
While we walk
In the aura of your mentality
Is your true sexuality
Not how your physique is viewed
But how your mind is used
That’s what turns me on
And I have desired for so long
I’m feeling your vibe
And want to take the time
To get to know what’s on your mind
Your passions and desires
What it takes to set your heart on fire
Verbal foreplay
In the words we say
Subliminal injections
Of melodic erections
Light some incense
This could get intense
Blackwisdom
We mentally kiss
our verbals destroy the need for defense
as the walls come down we get a glimps of each other's eyes
it's your mind not just your titties and thighs
are you surprised that we can bond on this level
other's intentions mirror that of the devil
a thief in the night trying to rob your treadures
but we're as natural as weather
feel the breeze as I talk to you with silent words
i'm on my knees to lower myself to be heard
i stroak your hand feeling it's warm
i want to kiss you and I'm caught in your storm
eyes are like magnets with opposite ends
irresistable there's no need to pretend
lets touch and allow our wild side to show
but first lets earn respect before i walk through your do'
I love you and with love comes respect
I think I'm calm now but what can we really do next
Thanks for bringing some goodness out of me Queen. A real beautiful mind.
Peace
U made it what it is.......I am honored for u to add on to my pieces anytime.......
dope shiiit from the both of you.. QOP u got that banner working yet....
PEACE
I’m in the room with demons
And what makes it worse is the season
My eyes are bleeding
Thinking that this alliance is treason
Against everything I’m fighting for
But I’ve opened the door
And my hands are tied
Oh God knows I’ve tried
But I just can’t escape
If so they’ll seal my fate
And that of those around me
I almost feel as if God’s not around me
Cause I’ve deceived my family
And everyone that can stand me
But the secret’s too deep
I can’t sleep
Cause there’s just one picture in my brain
I have one thought in my frame
One shame
And one name
But I will die with it
You think I’m gifted
But I’m more so tormented and cold
But that story will never be told
Because it dies with the ones involved
I sit still and watch the world continue to revolve
Just some stray thoughts.
Peace
Hey is that part of the verse or just an explanation?Quote:
Originally Posted by blackwisdom
Anyway nice verse, and also Mind Sex was good from the noth of you. But i think its was mischievous , Queen Of Poetry and Blackwisdom nice verses.
Peace
Passage
" That has upon, now chased what should have been doing, matters had their own equivalent, with the nature of all things given their choice, how had come to not notice what was within, manifested with each ones own things, is wanted most, as those that chose what they passed, with many having their naughty actions which they rather to tell another, but if wanted did fully know the procedures to attempt, with the surroundings placed its own, many tried to obtain yet the originals had taken root, watched with daunted eyes, for their process had begun long before, was just communicated between in that state of mind, knowing what has to be done, a sort of protection reveals all that perpetrate the covered zones, a form of boundaries and is only left to those authorized, yes and can attain much within its vast source, still get drawn towards its works, would not need to get entangled, all must know their proper part, as can be sustained with the gradual change that time brings, most survived just for the sake, thought had been, not at all with only its construction being distroyed naturally, for was distructed whilst humans inhabited, now back to its simple purpose".
the world as the tripof a lifetime in blipseach step a day rippedthe page tells to answerpast future winner loserthe turn like the screwin and up to over and outa journey take end to mindeach place in sight to findwith end encompass all suchfrom the one square to whereknow no where by now herethe end and in of by for allthe macro micro eye balls
:yes: embrace each day like the first but grace each day like the last:yes:
how i be what are amwhen as is was to willwhere in ex id formed egomine of self know a elsemy facet me about super seequint the sense loft relentfiber airs aura in vibe moralwith aesthetic mind's ethicsow forged gold a thread's moldfiber needle's silver line eyeknit waxed wits of hay stick wicksstringing pearls the mother unfurli conscious of d conscience makes full of id the it
:learning: life inter sex course rest in u al:learning:being held down by lovewhile raised up from passionfor set straight by rapturewhen pushed ahead from ecstasyknowing backed up by blisswhere at ease from understandingknow how engage with peace
Blue Thought Process (One Love)
Sunshine on my mind to light to the insight i write to recite this poem to you.
So you may have a clue when you due what to do when they come for you.
Who?
The ones with the power searchin for the money to gain the respect of the people who care....about what they ware
about people who care... to whom they pair
about people who care... not to share
thoughts and cloud out your theories.
The beginning of top hat conspiracies.
Stay leary. Hold on to your thoughts
and remember your soul cannot be bought.
Stay true always look back
cause one day you may wanna come back.
Thats a fact youngin and i ain't tryin to tell you. I'm tryin to guide you
to think for you and DO what you should do.
Add it up 2 and 2 get 4
think about who this is really better for.
cause once you walk out that door you may just wanna come back through that door.
Take your time...think alittle more.
Thats WHAT THE FUCK your brain is for.
Don't be caught as a corporate whore.
Cause they will fuck you till your ass is sore.
And then your back at the door except there ain't no "welcome mat" here no more.
Cause what they want they try to force
but youngin as people we gotta stay on course and feed the soure
of our city which is us the people
who gotta rise above the evil
just to stay equal...One love ya'll, One Love
Further
" How had come to its position, and knew that done nothing during this while, for only was the other, trying to comprehend taking place, experienced the effects now shown weakness, yet must proceed within, only getting the desired feeling, as is supposed soon would be departed and did not need to mention, only communicated with the neccessary, this signified the failure to inact upon actions planned, with the earths force changing in gradual momentum, yes all was placed with the heavens watch, drawn towards the source, wanted to be able to always give at will, but is the type that has taken, now to a new part, that others render inconceiveable, each known and have to be given the signal, to consider others as actions tend to become impulsive, always to cheerish ones presence, only need to see the real, giving off reflex actions that have been patterned, kept as have to accomplish things, the vast planets own ventures, not for others to later believe in but the process of all things that are natural, why reasons had to be named to be given acceptance, waiting until all is set, having to get the proper type of certification, and know from the personal choiced voice, which was the original that those watched, the connection always being there, that now notice most that wanted to know even in depth, but could only take the amount".
Summer Rain…
Never thought i'd see the smiles again, the light again,
never thought i'd see the summer rain... like
a, breath of fresh air after sufforcating all throught the midnight
hour. like a hundred acre would with passion in disguise!
Summer rain, tell me, will you fall again...
and again and again, oh so easily its rhythm flows gently like
the Nile meets the Jordan, an unexplainable reality forbidden
by fantasy realistically formed to open to new ideas -> ideas
harboured by minds that oh so, easily flow gently again and
again and again and we laughed and we sighed as we smiled
and we stared over and over...
and over and over this pitter patter pitifully pattering
over the plains of passion and all we can do is play and play
and play...
play like the young minds of an unconstructed playground,
swinging on the branches of... innocence,
copywritten smile on the lovechild's playful
face, as he plays and he laughs and he sighs as he smiles
and we stare over and over and again and again...
summer rain triggered a rainbow of hopes and dreams that
leads into a stream that seems that my heart is being
captured by your being...
feeling this... imagery is amazing, and so is the language...Quote:
Originally Posted by Legato
i just had to say that.
peace.
Magnitude
" Though seemed as revealed, all that could have been spoken, with only reflecting what they are, a procession of actions depth and belief was bleak, traced that what went back, how did they expect to be taken, after all had collapsed with no intensions, others that had experienced whilst leading towards, yet accepted each moment for what it was, continued the tasks set before as the heavens forbid what was out of cycle, there was no blame yet that one had done it all, for within the time that had ticked to many dieing, repeated matters that needed no questions, and survival was still amongst with this earth, that they thought once they were alone, days having past from vast proclamations such as those, that led many how others set what they had become used to, still persued and enjoyed the normal combat, many things left to be maintained, some did not fully mean, just thinking for put towards that occasion, needing not to take rapid actions for are not in harmony, how those that had come to know more of that placed, given the chance to their own centre, all to find its proper position as the distant amongst".