indeed it is good verses throughout this whole thread. from your first drop to your most recent i see elevation. stay up and keep blessin
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indeed it is good verses throughout this whole thread. from your first drop to your most recent i see elevation. stay up and keep blessin
shit's 4 real, i'm tryna keep outta jail question,if crime pays then why continue to steal?
jailed, if crime pays then why continue to steal?
the verbal intercourse is in affect so fuck what u say
and that proves to show
unable to bathe they dirt poor
he wasnt all there you could tell he had half a brain
i pulled his card he tried to play it off by foldin his hands
The man was stone trippin he fell off his rocker
life is nice but luxuries last longer
this persists through my birth and till i'm 1 with the earth
i walk the city streets at night recitin my verse(s)
if practice makes perfect i'd be the best in the world
(hip hop is critical filled with robotics and non visuals
spit a tight syllable to rip the mic right down the middle
we argue with uncle sam his plan unfolds in our hands
to get the best of society)
i be the voice of reason...WHY! mc's run when i break down the track
ryhmes connect like the spine of a book to send a chill down ya back
(step up to get (chin)checked)
Phonin in ya'll bounce along with your checks so hang it up
now that i'm cashin in i'm causin fake mc's to go bankrupt
(.....................................them ryhmes u milkin are wack)
serial killer smackin u up ur ryhmes are wack!
..so bring that amatuers mic back to radio shack
Yo I'm bringin back the essence with the stroke of a pen
then I'm breakin the mold on which the present vocals depend
I rip the mic right down the middle, kick my words 2 the curb
street merchant, lay down my gun and take a puff from the herb
tryna prevent from strikin out in the 3rd, shoutin absurd shit
the verbs hit unfoldin the drama with closed fists
siezed, i trade blows in exchange for the peace
ease up, piece in my chest i feel the shake in my knees
moctezuma wants revenge kid and god got a shitlist
sweat in my palms i grip the pen quick and script what ive witnessed
Dwellin in hell i puffed L's to help my mind clear
graffitti on the bathroom walls scratched down ideas
Ive tatted plenty pages catchin cases in many places
Frowns upon the faces caused to break up the home
I got a grip and a clue to pay the dues that i owe
As i break the code of the streets, peeps decipher the peace sign
losin my mind, i catch my thoughts jack and trap'em on paper
Losin my mind, I catch my thoughts, trace and place'em on paper
Grab ahold of my thoughts
as I break the code of the streets, truth teach what it proves to show
the streets are flooded with crime and I feel under the weather
truth breaks the code of the streets and teach
speak the truth and break the code
Born in the cold world freezin i'm forced to hold heat
gun bless my son stress run my mind til i rise on my feet
life is dull i slice the pie while i'm fallin asleep
smokin herbal then spit the verbals that apply to the streets
gainin clout shoutin absurd, our father said there's a god
be concerned when his pants burn off ya'll mouthin words to the stars
my mentality leaves my dome and roams free thru the room
grab ahold of my throne at home and patch up previous wounds
able to shit on all mc's as i eat with a silver spoon
these swords'll cease u like medieval son these people doomed
it got amigos holdin deagles for weasles who roll with goons
it's feeble what evils done sone these people are rebels
chest a bulletproof vest blessed with luck from the devil
diggin up underground mc's with my left on the shovel
yo I opened up the books in hope I'd untape the smile
it's been a while (crooks) lifestyle touched the heart of a child
Seekin freedom from these heathens and demons I walk the path chosen
i'm tryna breathe, seekin freedom from heathens i walk the path chosen
with hold the (_______) of solid gold
i fought the devil he heard the bells ring
this is a VERY ruff draft but can i still get some feed please?
Yeah really likeing wat i read!! the high-lighted parts are the lines that stood out ta me, the whole drop was good though no real topic but honestly you don't need one anyway keep doing you. stay up keep blessinQuote:
Originally Posted by Luther Large
^^aight thanks yo i'll hit up your thread 2morrow probly
here's sumthin else i just started last night:
Lay in the cut I claim my throne , re-open previous wounds
I bless the womb avoid disease and plant a seed in the tomb
I'm tryna breathe seekin freedom, heathens live on the run
I steal the show and sell my soul for solid gold and a gun
Sleep with the heat , until the beast'll see me deceased
Sieze the peace and reach my peek to ink the code of the streets
Rise to my feet where the evils wish to see us deceased
Told to break the mold, re-write the code of the streets
I wont be caught needin (some) stitches
rock phienin, bleedin, or cleanin dishes
siezed by heavy breathin, and dreams of sleepin with fishes
(these) premenition's insane, game'll visciously reign
best express it thru compisition on visions of who gets slained
for a while we had pholosophies, now a walkin hipocricsy
lost in the odyssey were alotta empty beer (cans and) bottles be
all yall soundin the same all the followin otta quit
we spit,to disprove prove these artist's knowledge of all of it
move with swiftness stay bottled up until part of me spit this
art affects the best part of you like ghonerea and syphilis
on an odyssey these heathens'll leav'em screamin 2 nobody
on an odyssey this philosophy leav'em screamin 2 nobody
not even devils and demons'll touch the gods body
.......................................
pict(ure)s of traps and prisons on big (mad) editions of hard copy
more than gifted whenever present
einstien couldnt teach the way that I preach this
Bombarded with foriegn objects, a german suplex
If the beat aint got "soul" (then) they neva took 2 steps
supposedly sharp, on point ,yet it seem to be dull
droppin bars with the structure of a newborns skull
pressin fastforward as i play those who perform slow
show up (surface), outta the blue wit sound waves to disrupt the flow
Luther you aight, I still don't think you can fuck with me in a battle, but your verses are always consistent, keep doing your thing, but anytime you wanna battle and get ate up, holla! C R E E P Y F O L L O W S
Revealed the essence and felt the pressures through lifes presence
Destined to count but question my so-called blessins since adolesence
.....to be continued
Destined to count but question my so-called blessins since adolesence
Reveal the essence and feel the pressures through lifes present tense
for what its worth im holdin onto my dollar(s), its evident
we stand a better chance with no common sense
when I begin bleedin, it dont matter what u believe in (kid)
heart beatin, see me still breathin if i'm sleepin u dreamin (shit)
i'm
(you'll)(see me) (im) siezin (inner) demons with (vocals) (scriptures) upon the mic preachin
destined to be the greatest designin these ryhmes on bible papers
evolve for all who desolved inpart of lost cases
graciously move makin (other) rappers improve
but switch moves if there's room 4 improvement
dope, u droppin audio LL? Hit me up if you do homie, i remember we was gonna lay some shit down a while back
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good looks on the feedQuote:
Originally Posted by VernakuLa
but nah i aint recordin no audio truthfully im computer illiterate and dont know how the hell to record on a computer im workin on gettin a home studio though i just dont know what the hell i need i can spit and write ryhmes but i aint no producer
but anyways yeah i do remember that track we was gonna do maybe we should try somethin like that again sum day
peace..
Yo, wit precison lacin pages with visions about the dark ages
capers, 10's to bens we all tend to depend on paper, but fuck it
(so)where the safe is?, u seek whats sacred to take it
makin money out the ass hidin crack in ya anus
motivations the basis son legal hustles are basic but
fuck the chump change i'm out to make big bucks
insane shit'll drain away the pain but bangins still aimless
cops hatin now probation got us payin for piss
swing, its either you hit or you miss
ya can make money out the ass hidin crack in ya anus
where the safe is?, u see whats sacred to take it
dangerous its clear fear's a stranger 2 us
if u wind up doin time thats studio time wasted
profit off it
no secret, dont need xray vison to see shit
jakes a snake tryna eat us alive inside his precint
yo, L, get up in a studio and ryme on an industry beat just so I can hear how you sound vocally, if I dig, then maybe I'll produce some heat for you, let me know if it sounds good!
yo i been tryna find somewhere to record believe me but shits hard i aint really got too much dough so i'm waitin for my boy to get a job cuz im stuck in jobcorps and they dont pay shitQuote:
Originally Posted by Da Dishonourable Don
but when i finally do get sumthin recorded i'll get ou you though no doubt
New track im doin to Afu Ra's "Equality" beat
Destined to count but question my so called blessins since adolesence
reveal the essence then feel the pressure through lifes present tense
for what its worth i'm holdin onto my dollars its evident
we stand a better chance with no common sense
Legends like pegasaus spitten when written scriptures of exodus
exit us, blessed with genesis gettin us dead presidents
evidence kill my nemesis derilicten irrelevance
never droppin dime pretty pennies in every element
Ive resorted to crime, now born again through a ryhme
Ive seen man come out on top to get shut down in his prime
When I'm deceased my seed'll seek to trifle on beats
disciple of streets, go out with rifle shots to police
This knowledge im manifestin turn grammar sessions to green
I procede to lead attacks on any bastard who scheme
When i begin bleedin it dont matter what you believe in
heart beatin see me still breathin if i'm sleepin you dreamin
these peoples is seein demons slay there team without reason
and fiends phienin with treason makes a hell of a season