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Originally Posted by SKAMPOE
werd, good lookin ninja, i use 2 have a mic, heh...currently i don't tho...
unfortunately however...i can record..on my mp3 playa, then put it on tha comp, just not a comp mic heh,
if u wanna hear a song or w/e
www.soundclick.com/wnd
check out colateral im tha first ta spit, otha then that it is wat it is :Y
Werd Werd Chekin Now..
yo whiteboy good shit, cool to see you keeping the writing stuff up
I noticed skampoe has'nt replied,lol.... well to keep shyt real, you have the same problem as me and most other rappers (White & Black) and that it ya have to work on your vocal delivery.
You can tell the differance between someone who spits really well and someone who does'nt. This usually comes about from where you place words, what part of the words you emphasize when you spit and when you take yer breaths.
I'd say you and me both need to work on this shit cos we got the ill flow..we just need the ill voice.It would be cool to work on some material with ya chief :dududu:
...Keep workin on those rhymes WnD and peace ^O^
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Originally Posted by FERMI PARADOX
werd very much appreciated critisism from ya homie, much gratitude im sending in ur direction.
Edited: Fermi Paradox i'd love 2 work with u on something wheneva i get a mic again. one luv 2 fingaz
wat up locust it has been a minute since i seen u grace my thread, much props on checxkin up on ya boi. holla
I Try to Manage a Way, ta Channel my Pain
but the Challenge Remains, as my Rage Unravels A-gain
I Can't Complain as i Calibrate my Shattered Strength
that Scatters Ranks, at a Faster Rate then Hand Grenades
Living Rough has got me Thinking Of Giving Up
Stingy Fucks, Just Strictly Business But...
they Risking Much when fucking With my Bucks...
ill add mo lata
I don't know you at ALL, but I have an extra MIC if you need one, all you'll need is the cord, and that aint much for one either, so if you want it just let me know, I didn't listen to your music yet, but from what i see in this post your pretty dope , so it wouldn't hurt to give up the extra mic!!!!!! jus let me know!Quote:
Originally Posted by White N Dangerous
werd good lookin holmez however i don't even have a comp right now and only am able to get on occasionaly but when i get my shyt together i'll def. be hittin ya up for that . and thanks by the way
5 star thread, man i slept on this
Yo when you get your mic back, get at me im sure we could work something out, check my sig for soundlclick if you feelin my crew or not
Peace
no problem!!!! your welc. just let me know when your ready, and I'll send it, but i Hope it aint to far! lol I'm In new jersey, I don't mind as long as your not wayyyyyy far from jersey , it's all good, if you are, you can still have it , you'll just haft to pay shipping and handling if it's too far, other then that it's yours!Quote:
Originally Posted by White N Dangerous
p.e.a.c.e
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Originally Posted by Bronze Feet
ayo werd i'mma check out ur soundclick right afta this, n yea def. would like 2 work with u 2 on a track.
and ClifbangA i live in las vegas neveda heh so if its to far then don't sweat it.
wow whattup kid? havent seen u in a while.
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Originally Posted by Dusk
werd not much just livin' life, i suppose' much gratitude 2 u dusk 4 wondeirng my whereabouts hehe, anyway dusk when we gonna do a scripture together, via aim or pm me :clap:
It's Been a While, Since i've Felt Betta Now
Whether Doubt is the Reason i Never Smile
or is it the Season n the Weather's Cloud's
Wateva, my Team Is a Legion that've Pledged they Allegiance
ta always Stack Bread and Act Gen-erous
Pass Benjamin's, ta ya Best Friend's n Shit
Don't Pretend a Bit, for Your Condemned ta It
can't Comprehend ya Wit's..when ya Slit da Wrist of the Helping Hand that Gives..
Nothing but pain in this life i live, Saigon shitQuote:
Originally Posted by White N Dangerous
Using my brains, and wits
stacking chips, packing clips walking the traps, and strips
you can't benefit in this life without benefits
So i'm fighting stress with harder hits than rihanna, and Chris
Times get out of hand so i'm thinking of a masterplan
Kicking the can still i rise a troubled man
Money doubled as i bubble amongst the rubble
Hardheaded soldiers laying in blood puddles
Youngin's puzzled trying to find the pieces to life's puzzle
Pour out a little liquior for the ones unable to guzzle
aftermath of a gun blast body for a body trouble
Everybody Tumble's when the Shotty Rumbles,Quote:
Originally Posted by J.T.S.
Bloody Clothes on my Foe's, is my new years Goal
Choose There Own, Doom Fasho, when i bury em' in a Dune of Snow
Tune ya Soul ta always Include ya Tone when ya Lose Control
YOu Should Go, n Do as ur Told, or be a Stupid Nuiscance once mo'
get ya Bruises Bruised IN ya Bones, lOOSE LIPS get Two Clips of HOles
Useless is ya New Nick--name, u ill? more like just Sickening..
lol add on jts not one of my betta ones but it is wat it is
Been Two Month's and Already I've Said Too Much
But i Guess Just From the Stress it Fuck's With ya Head Enuff
Much Less don't Strut ya Stuff if ya not wantin ta get Jumped by a Couple a' Thugz
Do tha Ol' Switch a Roo' Pick a Dude, don't give Shyt If It's You
Get Da Clue'? tha Hints are Thru, time ta Spit da Gift n Ripp A New..
its tha Lyrical Disease
they have no Vaccine so u can say it will take a Miracle ta outlast me
Going back to when i was in the Birth Canal
or..Perhaps when i First Heard a Sound
My Life "without looking back" i'd "Turn Around"
Despite the Fact, My Bro-thers Death would be Reversed..
..Somehow Sometime, I Felt Deep Down Inside....
I coun't Allow my Mind..
from thinking it'd happen sumwhere Along tha Line..
A Wasted Demeanor, that makes my Situation Seem Meager
a Deep Sleeper that Never Knew tha Leisure of a DreamWeaver
Choose Wisely cuz the Truth is these Dudes Proved there Two-Timeing
Askewed Writing, Concludes i shoun't of left the Womb Crying..
cause of my mom's Tube Tieing, Soon Sighting da Room's Lighting...
Drained of Hope, eva since my Name was Wrote..
....on the Birth Certificate...
Amerged Un-Sure with my Urge ta Earn a Livin' In..
this Earth that Turn's Grown up'z inta Little Kids..
i'll add mo once i write m o
upppin 4 now
Life is what u Make it, and Tyme has Never Waited..
That's Why I'm High n Hella Dangerous...
Compose a Rhyme..i Suppose that I'm...Obligated
to Indulge my Mind for Those Suprise Situation's
Close Behind my Boney Spine is my Slow Demise
Even when i Chose my Side, and Told who Oppose will Die
my Microphone Delight, make's my Foe's Get Sniped
from a Unkown Device that has a Scope so big call it my MicroScope Ight.
Can't Contain the Way my Flame Scratch ya Brain
Acting Strange will get ya no longa Acting Crazed
Backs i Break, like there sum Candy Canes
Axis Raised, gettin all you Faggots Slain
I am Great like Daynes, ya'll Aint ya Fake
Made a Mistake Grenade ya Face, Vacate Blood-Stains
Shake ya Dumb Gays, with Hundreds of Hurricanes
Thunder it Burns da Faint, get ya Under the Dirt..
never hearin Another Complaint,
get ya Under the Dirt..never hearin Another Complaint,
wats good eversick
get ya Under the Dirt..never hearin Another Complaint,
limbs dislocated,degraded my no emotion restraint,
time that i blank,, can never be the lonlyness felt,
sitting in hell another day we fade away, hopelessly delt,
..a hand of kings and queens,diamonds and hearts,
forgive me for death another gift tossed to the dark,
unwrap the mind and find the answers to self,
the best way to reconfine the spirt and health....
yo god juss gettin nice holla back bro
cool shitQuote:
Originally Posted by White N Dangerous
well well if it isnt WnD blowin threw like a breeze
if I followed white, kites would soar over trees
and slowly look smaller like a handi cap japanese
slowly branding your brain till all ya thoughts seize
black widow with riddles spits faster than sneeze
you know what happens when this here cat raps
his torch trap yap opens and creates backdrafts
and leaves his opponant with a chared up moustache
big ups to u god concept been a minute son...
I gotta Keep Making Moves So i don't Mistake the Smooth..
surface n go Aganist tha Grain n Create Strain n Fricton..
putting it in plain English, as ya Flame Lingers..
Gravediggaz, come and Rearrange Livers
as Straight Thinkers get ta Taste Bitter-ness like Straight Liquor Sipped
In Case Quitters Quit, i got a Way They Will Wish They Never Did
Thinking Back in tha Past i was Listed As..
A Sadistic Lad, for my Quick & Fast Decsion Path
Shyt was Bad, It's a Fact i was Driven Mad..
Any Simple Task was Triple That..
Stricken Illness, got me Risking Millions..
Shifting Pillars was my game like Hitting Billiards
Sumbiting Fillers for tha Really Ill Verse, got me Thrilling Thrillers
My Life's Experiences' have been like a Science Experiment...
Cryed Tears of Red, and Inside my Spirit Bled',
Fierce were the Fears that Pierced my Purest Years
Here's ta the Fearless Ear's that always Appeared Secure
but tha Mirror Reflection, was like a Weird Complexion
i'd Stare for Affection, but only get a Sincere Selection
of my Obscure Obbession, Clear my Head...
of all tha Negative Thought's, Paying the Cost to Stay Aloft..
Of Course i would finally Consult with the one's that i Shoun't Talk With
your flow of words is close to perfect. nice
Why is everybody Pointing They...Finger at Me...
Feels like i'm Keaneu Reeves in tha movie Point Break
It's so Annoying, that at this Point i've gotta Make my Point Made
call me tha Real Mccoy, Or Taste..wats in store For Your Fate
Nor do i need Pin-point Aim, cuz it'll be a shot at Point Blank Range
HOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLA
:chef::mexico:
uppin
shit was sick sonQuote:
Originally Posted by White N Dangerous
Way Before i was Taken For Granted
all the Games Performed and finding my Scores Average
They say when it rains it pours..back then..
i coun't even explain in word'z, wat that meant
but now not even a Trace Remain's, it's Safe to Say i changed my ways
Incase it Strayed from the Gate's of Had-es to the pearly Gates of J.C.
Unfortunately under the Burden of Learning...Seems..
there was the uncertainty of undeserveingly earning the Earnings i Recieved
i Aint Stopping, no Way..Got It!?
so if ya Don't Take Caution it'll be to Late to "play possum"
no Motive Intended, just Impulsive Aggresive..
So Don't Compose a Sentence, i got more Foe's then Friends..it's..
a Constant Balance, between my own Assaliants, Known for Failure
Hold yer' Stale Werd's in ya mouth or Behold tha Pale Horsemen
Impale Corpses Untill tha witness Skin Tone is a Pale Poison
Scales Collapse from the Overabundance,
Shoulder Strap ta make ya soul Detached So Mellow your Ass..
Down or get you and your Fellow Man's Clapped Hand's Down
As i Take a Weed Hit my Weakness Seems ta Shift,
I can't Believe It, my day was Complete Shit, n i Mean It
These Slick Cat's Think That They Can't Get they Ass Kicked Right Quick Fast
They Get Whipped Bad, With Pain that's Exactly like Whiplash
In a Blink of a Eyelash is as Long as It Last's
Been a minute since i stepped in the temple, good to see the vets still holdin it down
Peace WnD, ill darts