Xtadas vs. Ronin-1st Round Tournament

Look, this cat Ronin should know by now that I don't play games
So fly, I don't need a stage, I rock astral planes

Strangle the air from ya lungs, you'll never feel the noose loosen
Set up Ronin to collapse worse than Retief Goosen
I spend time spittin' tighter than the space between Fifty Cent’s molars
You prob'ly stay home, watch Michael Jackson videos and get a boner
Leave ya holed up in a church, with nothin’ but a Catholic priest
And have him bury ya body and comfort ya family when you’re deceased
Style of speech, you don't preach smilies and metaphors
Pimpin’ ya words, you spit pussylies and meta-whores
Xtadas will never stop like OJ in '94
Biggie-type, fuck ya bitch raw, kickin' in your fucking door
You heard of me? Then you ain’t even got half the story
Denzel Washington couldn’t come close to shining with X’s glory
Ronin ain't hard, no jail time, you'd get raped in penitentiaries
Only way you'd get READ RIGHTS is if you penned ya rhymes in BURGUNDY INK
Fuck swiss cheese, you getting torn down like the Berlin Wall
With no advance warning of ya fall/Xtadas is the BLUEPRINT for spitting a verse
So if you wanted to defeat me, you'd have to KILL ME FIRST
You gettin' stuck in my lyrical quagmire
Ain't my fault, Ronin's bout to lose like the Chicago Children's Choir (http://www.allhiphop.com/hiphopnews/?ID=4522)
And whose fault is that?/I'll hyperextend my raps
And you still couldn't reach out and touch that...

nothing personal, just something quick as i only just saw this

ill slay this young fag like anakin in jedi temples
censor his rhymes, hes lacking parential consensional
im a legendary resident, the cousin will of this ish
x writes rhymes like mf doom cus he aint sick with it
i slaughter for kicks and smash with snares and hi hats
you punch wack, its like u fucking mime jabs
your verse bored me, u quoting bible pages?
word is, only the deaf got your shit on their playlist
fantisising about michael jackson gets you knowhere
step down son, your balls aint got no hair
15 and u wanna spit at an adult?
5 years time, your rhymes will still be in wack vaults
im sick of text kids takin this shit seriously
your scat fetish gets slept on, im a fetish'ist with narcolepsy
and your more played out than tennis during wimbledon
i put no effort in, you try and still come off simpleton

ronins was understandable

^^^^What does that mean? YOU be understandable (no animosity, just clarity)...

x got him but ronins coo anotha round peace

that shit's close...444 said it, can u guys go 1 more?...im prolly not voting but that shit was close"word is only deaf cats have u on their playlist" that was tight

an that pimp your rhyme's was ill as fuck...you guys throwdown entertainment, shits pimp, go ahead an get your votes or go 1 more. peace

How about first to three votes, we're tied 1-1...it's hard, I know, so less votes would mean a quicker verdict...we're also tied, so I'm not trying to catch a quick advantage...

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Originally Posted by Xtadas

^^^^What does that mean? YOU be understandable (no animosity, just clarity)...

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i couldnt understand ur verse i mean, no vote..

xtadas won^^^^^i already explaidn

xtadas verse was stronger i admit this, shit just came out the blue and i wrote it in like 10 minutes so the advantage wasnt unfair with him dropping miles before me

no excuses though

Ronin's takin tha piss....I can see him jus sittin in front of tha screen....sayin 'aah fuck it let me jus type sum lazy ass no effort verse an jet....'

I have to say tha shit did make me lagh tho.....

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'word is, only the deaf got your shit on their playlist
fantisising about michael jackson gets you knowhere
step down son, your balls aint got no hair - Ronin'

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sum-times you jus can't be bothered....lol


any-way X put work an effort in coz he know Ronin got Ill potential....obviously no one cares so my vote goes to.....


MYSELF

For accurate feed back....and tha multi's in my explanations......you see em right lol


j/k

vote EXTADAS

So that's Sicka, Blak Furyan, and 44 Trumpets...that cool, Ronin?

Style of speech, you don't preach smilies and metaphors
Pimpin’ ya words, you spit pussylies and meta-whores
Xtadas will never stop like OJ in '94
Biggie-type, fuck ya bitch raw, kickin' in your fucking door
You heard of me? Then you ain’t even got half the story
Denzel Washington couldn’t come close to shining with X’s glory

shit was shit

the young homie X got my vote, his was better (but it didn't absolutely kill) ronin's verse

Why you keep callin' me a young'n? I ain't that much younger than you, or you woulda changed your name to kell17 by now...

Ro's shit was good but just didnt cut it, X's stuff sounded better, but since Ro didnt try i think he would have gotten my vote if he did

my vote is for Xtadas

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Originally Posted by Xtadas

Why you keep callin' me a young'n? I ain't that much younger than you, or you woulda changed your name to kell17 by now...

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just cause 16 is at the end of the name, don't mean that it stands for my age

so get that idea out ya head

We All Agree Xtadas Took It

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Originally Posted by Ronin

xtadas verse was stronger i admit this, shit just came out the blue and i wrote it in like 10 minutes so the advantage wasnt unfair with him dropping miles before me

no excuses though

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IM GONNA LUV WHAT U WRITE TO MAKE UP FOR YOUR QUICK BATTLE.....PROLLY HITTIN THE BOOKS NOW.....URRBODY'S TIGHT IN THIS COMP CUZ WE AINT WHINERS.
PEACE

Xtadas was aiight...some of that shit was mad corny like explanation of his punch line
otherwise it was on point...it had to be with all the research he put into it

Ronin came off sounden like a real emcee though...not soundn like a dissertation

vote: Ronin

good shit, but i'd have to go with ronin, he countered pretty much everything that was on point in you rhyme, with an added hit, like "fantisising about michael jackson gets you knowhere" < true
"step down son, your balls aint got no hair" oUch
15 and u wanna spit at an adult?
5 years time, your rhymes will still be in wack vaults< topped it all
both were good but ronin's made more sense.

vote : Ronin

shit, keep goin with the voting if you guys think its cool, 1st to 4 is a small number of opinions......so do what ya gotta....holla in the update thread if u think we should do this up differently, peace one,1

5-2 to xtadas

from my count anyway

to explain punches, the mf doom line is cus he wrote a verse in the style of doom a while back and the deaf playlist shit is cus he has audio but people diddnt download

PUT IT ON SOUNDCLICK SO I CAN HERE

i think we should go again, give us more time for verses

^^^^^^I tried uploading the songs to Soundclick, but it didn't work...

1 more round!!!!

yo x wins this, i dont want it to go another

we can just battle for nothing son u reckon?

x goes to next but well sort something for next week ok?

Both were nice