<<::Da Problem Child's Thread::>>

ryhmes designed to spit fiction none of it's reality
cats is real sweet and i eat mc's with a cavity
come out the mindstate with a perfect strategy
got dynamite preasents for all these ryhme peasents
smif and wessuns have them fake cats undressin
hip hop cops feminine mad cause i'm hurtin the truth
reciting lines out my head got me murken the booth
make niggas top flip back like a convertible roof
stacking spanish payso's diamonds size of leggos
the rythm leave ya blind.....
have ya waving ya hand across ya face like tony yayo
come straight off the top unlike rappers in the basement
dreams are what i'm chasen ya position a replacement
time freezes when lyrics are part of my statement
unpause the time and my goons resume like cobras
looney boasters that run up on ya with rude odors
and stack more paper than a math school folder
only 14,but do gangsta shit with shanks and grips
wankstas trip see ya boy in tangerine whips
hotter than 4 cettels hotter than mo devils
lyrical content leave thugs softer than rose petals

I'm OUt

yeah , feelin this for real

flow was consistant and on point till the end , vocab was nice

solid drop man , was feelin this , i can really hear this one over a beat

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Originally Posted by the funky drunk

yeah , feelin this for real

flow was consistant and on point till the end , vocab was nice

solid drop man , was feelin this , i can really hear this one over a beat

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Thanks homie.Appreciate the positive feed

Bump for folks who aint see it,and if ya already read it leave some feed.Don't sleep

It was nice, I liked the style it had a rhythm to it except a few lines but overall the verse was sweet.

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Originally Posted by Dirty Knowledge

It was nice, I liked the style it had a rhythm to it except a few lines but overall the verse was sweet.

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Thanks for the feedback dawg.I appreciate it

yes you got nice RHYMES, but, can you flip the structure of your verse so it aint so basic like one line, then the next ryhming the last word, the the next etc. It just gets repetitve. You gotta shake the shit up a little, you HAVE got the words in your vocab.

Hope you find that constuctive, props on the verse, solid.

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Originally Posted by Ghostlaced

yes you got nice RHYMES, but, can you flip the structure of your verse so it aint so basic like one line, then the next ryhming the last word, the the next etc. It just gets repetitve. You gotta shake the shit up a little, you HAVE got the words in your vocab.

Hope you find that constuctive, props on the verse, solid.

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I feel what you saying homie.thanks for the advice

nice verse:thumbup: like the flo, structure and the vocab.....nuthin really 2 criticize
keep it up
peace

^^^^Thanks for the feedback dawg

Yes sir i was feelin this. nice vocab, rhyme structure (however i'd like to see more multis) and flow.
I'm glad that your down south and not just a crunk+)
LOL, your avtually a Good emcee.
if u have time peep my lyric thread @
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=18338

aight hope to see more of this stuff SOON!!!!!!

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Originally Posted by White_Mouse

Yes sir i was feelin this. nice vocab, rhyme structure (however i'd like to see more multis) and flow.
I'm glad that your down south and not just a crunk+)
LOL, your avtually a Good emcee.
if u have time peep my lyric thread @
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=18338

aight hope to see more of this stuff SOON!!!!!!

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I'm just trying to let peeps know on the net and in real life that the hold south aint on that Crunk,and laffy taffy shit.Some of us can spit fareal come off the top of the head fareal.

Yes sirrrr and u just proved that lol

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Originally Posted by White_Mouse

Yes sirrrr and u just proved that lol

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hahaha thanks homie,but i think Chamillionaire let niggas know first.lol

Aight Bump for more feedback

Mc's takes bits and pieces of my songs and the cyphers
copying my lyrical status,guess i'm the hidden gho$twriter
listening to my style then picturing your early fate
that will only lead you to a first class trip to the pearly gates

Just trace my style don't even paint ya own pictures
get up in 'em when i spit venom in lyrical scriptures
just enter the lyrical dojo and try and press ya luck
i never stop Problem spit more than daffy duck
fuck a battle cash is the topic,watch the weight flip
you a gurilla i erase chimps get the big face chips
try and buy bomb weed to get higher than space ships
Are you surprised? a southern artist with a very thin hex
very big chest want beef dog best to come with ya best
cause Problem eat more Pussy than porno lesbian sex
yes!! the young boy stacken P getting fed chicks
head with good shampayne and fyne red chicks
disrespect the paper dog and let that bread mix
my goons come pop shells longer than bread stix
The Gho$t Writer there is no other mc hiya
only thing ya spit hot was ya morning breath saliva
hahah children of all these other fellow ages
Problem rhyme book is thicker than yellow pages
so take patients all puerto rican and hatients
not racis just covering the immigrant basis(Thats all)

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Originally Posted by SpOk3N

Nice Nice...not Bad...props...havent seen u drop...so this is a good first for me...

you stay in Lauderdale, huh? I'm in miami...

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I' born and raised in Lauderdale.You in the M.I.A.Ever seen that nigga Kimbo??

aight bump for more feedback.

ya that fuck kimbo is raw tho, seen him punch out madd kids.
also like the post keep droppen.
peace
eversick666

Yea Kimbo be knocking niggas the fuck out.And thinks for the props dawg

anytime mang keep up..
peace
eversick666

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Originally Posted by Eversick666

anytime mang keep up..
peace
eversick666

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Aight homie

Bump

aight bump

Umm real nigga shit who started my thread shit up man

i associate with better G's to upgrade my military weaponary
all this jealousy will just lead me to more filthy cheddar cheese
especially if my dudes slang shells through the weather breeze
got a legacy that better be one of a kind in this music industry
in the streets it's hetic just trust me cause stupid i know G
the flow be very swift and sharp like the sword of Shinobi
hang with niggas that roll up the Haze by the pound and o.z
10 carats in the rolly but thats only in a nigga like me dream
so i plot and scheme with street team to get more cream
it doesn't seem that rap cats are hard they need to be calm
i drop bombs they only gangsta when a mic in they palm
so see ya fag ass nigga and i defintely wouldn't want to be ya
i don't flow know more at 100% cause i catch peeps with a leana
see i flowed at 100% and caled it a freestyle the world called it hurricane katrina

Done just a plain keystyle