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I aint your average rhyme spitter, the pussy splitter
always stacking figures its j.r. the mind ripper
the marijuana got me choking, my third eye open
see them dudes through the walls and the nines that they be holding
and i aint even gonna try on the rest
cuz no matter what you write its already second best
so i'm not trying to be relevent, on a site thats so irelevent
carbomb your moms house just to show you my relevance
you take it up the ass like the fat dude from deliverence
I'm eating chicken wraps, trying to figure out my raps
thats right chicken not pork, i watch my trans-fats
dont eat chinese food cuz i heard they cook cats
and dont visit wu tang corp cuz the site is full of rats
i'd rather go to the store and drop twenty on a hat
than sit on this site just to see your garbage rap
shit only sixteen lines, i'm out holla back
^damn you got a few solid lines
kima post sober dukeQuote:
Originally Posted by jR_killa
Murder in the First
damn Nak, you better than that
My vote goes to jr killa
Better overall verse, flow was good too.
Nak's closer was terrible but the rest was ok.
Nak did you leave off a line at the end supposed to rhyme wit challenge?
You should have came harder than that, is the verse not finished or somethin?
oh dsht id idint fuibnish itnim high as fujcik right now fuck 7thqt verse ikk be back
1-0 still 8ima jus5t wit \\ till i cqan see shit
ur ok, nak idk what to say anymore
I nth3in'k sun1 iz fakimg !t ;)
say im gay dudeQuote:
Originally Posted by Dusk
lol eric is cool
-stupider-
nah I guessin im aight now tried to take a nap but w/e i can see better
Keystyle
This kid has problems..spit facts and I solve em
His rhymin's outa place like a day pitch black in august!
Grits facts and then knowledge, My shots'll enlarge your pelvis
Murder you, and put the "spark thru your brain" like "Charger helmets!"
Hard to tell kid, your far from sellin...Release the facts on ya?
He thinks *Suckin E-40*...with ease, "beatin" vernakula!
Speak and I laugh at ya! Feinds even "crack" on ya (make a joke)
Hes so bitchmade, this kid bleeds from when I'm tappin ya (weak bar)
Dude has a slow makin, Gets hyped cuz wack nerds thinks hes nice
This battles won more me, no debatin, like the existance of jesus christ
This kids weak as mice, believe I might give a lesson or two
I'll presently proove, after this verse this kids essence is through!
Obsessin' my mooves...this kid is still testin the truth
Even dirts got more skill, and thats lesser than you!
peace this is mad lazy tho
* E 40 is the self proclaimed "king of slang" slang is aka vernaculars, so jerking off E 40 he still aint beatin vernakula get it?
yo lemme redo my shit, put this to an end
okay homie let me put you on the game
let hecklar and koch rearrange your mindframe
vernakular, that was unspectacular, your lacking experience
when i push the 21, i have you praying for deliverence
but aint no love in the sky
speak my name on your lips is the quickest way to die
but trust me i could show you war visuals
Graduated from the ten only left two jewels
but what's really the risidual, War stories scars and screams
you think that your safe behind a computer screen
Switch my mind to fibre optic travel a light beam
from this perspective whose really going at light speed
escape to a light dream, when i re-up fix my eyes bleed
the chronic persuasion have me feeling what i fiend
get high snatch your moms and stick her with the icepick
tie her up in the trunk and drive the bitch off a bridge
but first i have the bitch yoked up swallowing my kids
she loved the freaky shit, but it wasnt all butter
sneaky bitch used her pussy muscles to pull off the rubber
blew out her back, from the fierce counter attack
said she love to ride dick and give birth to vernak
meh.. not that great, but still better than yours.
kid ur weak as fuck, hit me up if you want me to lay down the business
what up son
my shit was fire compared to yours, If i'm whack... you should retire and thats the truth.
u talkin 2 me or vern?
where'd you come from? nice sig btw.
I thought he said 'I be droppin science like cosby droppin babies...' cuz cosby was an OB-GYN.
haha, ur funny nice play on my name btw, never herd vernakula aint spectacular, ur played and thats the truth
what up vern
took it anyone wanna battle?
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Originally Posted by tha god concept
SUP NIKKAH!
KILL THAT CRAB ASS ^^^get on msn homie
jr blowin ya head up isnt gonna get u far here, ur first verse was barely better than his and second verse wasnt so take it easy, not defendin his chump ass but take it easy
Dusk you be makin your own sigs?^
eric ur shit is the dopest that ive seen on the corp...get ur bro 2 draw me up a hand droppin an encyclopedia or science text book offf a cliff wit my name involved....plz peace fam
jr has adope flow.
as far as i vote i dunno, where is verns 1st verse?
yo sumtimes concept gets dirty like las vegas vagrants
russian roulette wit a mic and sum pacience 007 agent
yall sum hollywood gay kids waitin for a Revlon placement
i spit amazing ask my agent
super bowl wordrobe malfunction from the bullets grazin
loppin off bras like hack-saws down in the basement
do what i say kids
like my names simon
lyrically rape ya american idol until the life signs be vital
and still contredict the bible
every time concept spits raw all mc's vitals be sucicidal
bloods n crips bear huggin each-other like you and i do
killin with pens and pencils and dot ya eyes to
leavin ya sokets black from the blues
so hot when the alarms go off you cant touch the snooze
shit i can tell that you a kurupt nigga
if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up nigga
like fuck your life nigga, i put that on my knife nigga
i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife nigga
okay we in the back nigga, four dudes four gats nigga
Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack niggas
wouldnt make the track nigga, dont make me pull the black trigga
have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
you a wack nigga, get sent up, tell niggas you was framed
see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
but you just a lazy nigga, cock eyed and crazy nigga
and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies nigga
pussy nigga, you all pussy and no nigga
c im the type of person that wuld try to help someone out before talkin shit, but u realllyyy need to work on ur skills b. all around.
damn, I ain't heard the word 'nigga' used so many times in a paragraph since the KKK was on Jerry Springer, step your game up kid, that shit's played out, git original with your words, that ain't even a verse right there, that's some kid shit!Quote:
Originally Posted by jR_killa
what yall talking about, i thought it was great, just take the nigga out if you dont like it and put in any word, still flows, i bolded the words i'd stress if i was rappin so you can catch the flow.
shit i can tell that you a kurupt kid
if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up kid
like fuck your life kid, i put that on my knife kid
i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife kid
okay we in the back kid, four dudes four gats kid
Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack kids
wouldnt make the track kid, dont make me pull the black trigga
have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
you a wack kid, get sent up, tell kids you was framed
see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
but you just a lazy kid, cock eyed and crazy kid
and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies kid
pussy kid, you all pussy and no kid
the problem isnt the word u used but to put it after ever fuckin line is just pointless, i understand you tryin to b creative and do somethin different but that doesnt neccesarily mean that its gonna b better.
try somethin else and ill get back at u.
Quote:
Originally Posted by jR_killa
The problem is the content, rhyming the same word at the end of EVERY bar isnt impressive, hate to break it to you
umm yeah if you look at the word before the last word of every bar... you know what nevermind... did you even read my verse?
vermin exterminator, juniour terminator, both mothers lover smoother the condoms flavour when they tongue savour the suav3 scraper
(damn tame her)
see the world through designer lenses, and look at the world as production sections, move way and blaze up sessions, carefree, then tension, plastic matics graspin, bang bang in you nd your thang thang, mlb scoring, with home runs with bagged funds, while running through bases, for base solely on buisness basis so now you know get to shaking :D
2O lines of raw for you to snort
All kinds of drugs and sort
I do this for sport
Take these shots on the basketball court
Hold down the fort
Take you up North and so forth
Get your money's worth
Taste the purest on the earth
That shit they got over there is dirt
Only your pockets get hurt
Come to me to get it corrected non-infected
Dis-infected
Clowns merchandise get rejected
Pheenes injected with what I got get respected
Personally selected for your preference check my reference
Supreme exellence no fakes allowed to show their presence
My spot stays mega intense
What they got over there makes no sense
Anyone who says otherwise is dense
And better stay on the otherside of the fence
:mexico: