VOTES NEEDED--->::ArcherPriest VS. Maximus da Mantis::

Fuck it... I'll just go first cuz i doubt ill have time tomorrow..... I'll check back after work.... jus one round... spit however many lines you want... jus dont feed


Ayo

You're like tryin' to fuck a Slut, Couz....not Even a Challenge
The Weakest of Talents... this battle's mad Unevenly Ballanced
Shouldn't Even Allow it... cuz now ya chokin' throwin' the Towel In
Im wiser than Owls n' got this Mantis trapped in the Tallons
Blood spillin' in Gallons... this 'Prayin' mantis 'Kneels' to the Priest
While I Drill in his Teeth... 'n Stomp his Fuckin' Grill in the Street
Make a Meal of ya Weak... Rappin... but then I'd be Eatin' Shit
Must be smokin rock while jerkin off, Son... cuz ya Beatin' Quick
Ya Can't fuck wit this Word Play... you just Suck in the Worst Way
I'll be leavin' ya Verse Raped.... like Jon Benet's First Date
Had us Laughin' when Maximus thought he was 'Gifted with Sickness'
Cuz he got him some Syphillis from his bitches for Christmas !!!!
You made da King's Shyt List... Hear me Speakin' in Def Tone?
He never Seen his End Comin'...Like Stevie on Death Row
So no Wonder his Text Blows... Frontin' like he's a Gladiator
But its '06 Yo! ...Ditch ya Fanny Pack and the Pager
Rockin' Mad Faggy Flavor... Nobody's Feelin' ya Shit
Sunburnin' ya Dome's the only way you Peelin' some Wigs
Im Bein' Real witcha Kid... you stupid n' foolish to Try 'n Step
Came Runnin ya Mouth n' got Bludgeoned Down to ya Dyin' Breath
Twenty One line Stretch... you're Set up for the Final Shock
Cuz when the Duece Duece Pops... I'll kill Twenty with Two Shots!

da king is in da buildin!!!,..okay nobody else post

before 6 pm central as promised



Welcome To The Max




I'll Stomp Ya Face Flatter Than A Fat Dudes Doormate
Fist'll Leave Ya Split Down The Middle Like Ya Text Format!!!!
Yo Pardon Speech As I Mark Your Teeth I Should Call Police
This Gay "Father Cupid" Touched His Pupils Than Don Him Self "Archer Priest"(get It)
This Revrend Aint "DMC" But I Got Him "Running" Like A "Sucka Emcee"
Imma A Monsta Wit Speech "Church Billards" Im Dartin This Priest
I've Killed So many Emcees This Fools Just A Shot-ie Clown
Like Ice-t Bands Deaths In High Numbers I "Lose Body Counts"
This Archers Arrows Is Broken ...So He's "Misleading His Points"
Like Arthritic Patients Wit Cataracts We Aint "Seeing His Joints"(WHAT)
Im Packin All The Heat And This "Dude Fears"
I'll Leave Ya "Dragon" In The Street Like Chinese "New Years"
Watch Me "Blast This Feeble" Max Is Evil You Drop Small Shit Like "Rabbit Fecal"
Ask His People Dude's "Cheesy On The Mic" Cant wRAP Or "Kraft A Single"
This Iz Ya "Last Jingle" Leave The Spot Misty
Like "Santa Wit STD's" I Deliver The BURN When KRIS-pee(get It)
You Aint Strong Nigga You Better Head "Back To The Gym"
This Cat Beatin Max Is Like Waitn For The "1990's To Happen Again"
Im "Tappin His Chin" Till His Face Is "Gashed On My Limbs"
Till They Gotta "Gather His Skin" Latched In My Teeth In The "Back Of My Grin"
Face It You Lost Dont Fred Savage And "Wonder Years"
I Lift My Kicks To Ya Face So-Knees(SONY) Crush Under Ears !!!!!!!!!




My Punches Are Deep :spin:










please no talkin from either emcee to help sway votes........

also explained votes would be nice......:satisfy:

hmmmmmm....






















eloels.....nnniiiiccceeeee

k i think that this battle was fairly close but archer took the first heat for sure his word play n punches were much more effective..

best lines for archer:::
Ya Can't fuck wit this Word Play... you just Suck in the Worst Way
I'll be leavin' ya Verse Raped.... like Jon Benet's First Date 8.5/10

Had us Laughin' when Maximus thought he was 'Gifted with Sickness'
Cuz he got him some Syphillis from his bitches for Christmas !!!! 7/10


Rockin' Mad Faggy Flavor... Nobody's Feelin' ya Shit
Sunburnin' ya Dome's the only way you Peelin' some Wigs7.5/10


max mantis:::::
This Archers Arrows Is Broken ...So He's "Misleading His Points"
Like Arthritic Patients Wit Cataracts We Aint "Seeing His Joints"(7/10
...........i wanted to see this worded better......................


Yo Pardon Speech As I Mark Your Teeth I Should Call Police
This Gay "Father Cupid" Touched His Pupils Than Don Him Self "Archer Priest" 8/10

I'll Leave Ya "Dragon" In The Street Like Chinese "New Years"
Watch Me "Blast This Feeble" Max Is Evil You Drop Small Shit Like "Rabbit Fecal" 6.5/10


i wanna see another round i feel archer took it by a better flow and use of word n punches,ithought max came nice but not near as smooth.............
i hoping for round 2

vote as is ARCHER PRIEST

peace
evevrsick666

archer for real had flow but to me mantis went at him good but still kept the flow nice.


vote = mantis

real close battle, in truth I'd just like to see a 2nd round just I don't really be seein heated battles up in here anymore, both emcees was droppin molotov cocktails up in this bitch, with that being said I think Max's punches were just a lil' bit sharper

This Archers Arrows Is Broken ...So He's "Misleading His Points"
Like Arthritic Patients Wit Cataracts We Aint "Seeing His Joints"

I'll Leave Ya "Dragon" In The Street Like Chinese "New Years"


probably some of my favorites in there but they were all hittin


King wasn't no slouch either................

You made da King's Shyt List... Hear me Speakin' in Def Tone?
He never Seen his End Comin'...Like Stevie on Death Row
So no Wonder his Text Blows... Frontin' like he's a Gladiator
But its '06 Yo! ...Ditch ya Fanny Pack and the Pager

haha, lmao on that last line

Against almost anybody else in here, I think King woulda had the win droppin on this level, I just think Max took it a lil' bit higher, peace to both emcees

K i'll do the break down........

Archer Priest

You're like tryin' to fuck a Slut, Couz....not Even a Challenge
The Weakest of Talents... this battle's mad Unevenly Ballanced
Solid opener, nice lil' punch on the first line

Shouldn't Even Allow it... cuz now ya chokin' throwin' the Towel In
Im wiser than Owls n' got this Mantis trapped in the Tallons
Average lines, the punch is clever but doesn't really hit for mine

Blood spillin' in Gallons... this 'Prayin' mantis 'Kneels' to the Priest
While I Drill in his Teeth... 'n Stomp his Fuckin' Grill in the Street
Your schemes are sick, i like these bars, the first is a clver punch, i like how the second bar is really agressive

Make a Meal of ya Weak... Rappin... but then I'd be Eatin' Shit
Must be smokin rock while jerkin off, Son... cuz ya Beatin' Quick
Alright lines, nothing special

Ya Can't fuck wit this Word Play... you just Suck in the Worst Way
I'll be leavin' ya Verse Raped.... like Jon Benet's First Date
Aha, good punch on the second line, hits

Had us Laughin' when Maximus thought he was 'Gifted with Sickness'
Cuz he got him some Syphillis from his bitches for Christmas !!!!
AHA, nice, had me laughing

You made da King's Shyt List... Hear me Speakin' in Def Tone?
He never Seen his End Comin'...Like Stevie on Death Row
Dope lines, very good punch on the second line

So no Wonder his Text Blows... Frontin' like he's a Gladiator
But its '06 Yo! ...Ditch ya Fanny Pack and the Pager
Good lines......

Rockin' Mad Faggy Flavor... Nobody's Feelin' ya Shit
Sunburnin' ya Dome's the only way you Peelin' some Wigs
Average lines, second bar seems kinda corny imo

Im Bein' Real witcha Kid... you stupid n' foolish to Try 'n Step
Came Runnin ya Mouth n' got Bludgeoned Down to ya Dyin' Breath
Nice aggressive lines......

Twenty One line Stretch... you're Set up for the Final Shock
Cuz when the Duece Duece Pops... I'll kill Twenty with Two Shots!
Aha, good finish

Tha Mantis

I'll Stomp Ya Face Flatter Than A Fat Dudes Doormate
Fist'll Leave Ya Split Down The Middle Like Ya Text Format!!!!
Dope intro lines.....got me interested

Yo Pardon Speech As I Mark Your Teeth I Should Call Police
This Gay "Father Cupid" Touched His Pupils Than Don Him Self "Archer Priest"
Good lines.....hitting wit the punches from the start

This Revrend Aint "DMC" But I Got Him "Running" Like A "Sucka Emcee"
Imma A Monsta Wit Speech "Church Billards" Im Dartin This Priest
clever wordplay on the first bar but not heavy hitting

I've Killed So many Emcees This Fools Just A Shot-ie Clown
Like Ice-t Bands Deaths In High Numbers I "Lose Body Counts"
nice lines......

This Archers Arrows Is Broken ...So He's "Misleading His Points"
Like Arthritic Patients Wit Cataracts We Aint "Seeing His Joints"
first bar....meh, clever but not hitting hard, the second bar is dope as fuck, real good line

Im Packin All The Heat And This "Dude Fears"
I'll Leave Ya "Dragon" In The Street Like Chinese "New Years"
good lines for real

Watch Me "Blast This Feeble" Max Is Evil You Drop Small Shit Like "Rabbit Fecal"
i like

Ask His People Dude's "Cheesy On The Mic" Cant wRAP Or "Kraft A Single"
AHA! dope, good punch

This Iz Ya "Last Jingle" Leave The Spot Misty
Like "Santa Wit STD's" I Deliver The BURN When KRIS-pee
Like Kris Kringle hey......this second line doesnt really come off for me

You Aint Strong Nigga You Better Head "Back To The Gym"
This Cat Beatin Max Is Like Waitn For The "1990's To Happen Again"
alright

Im "Tappin His Chin" Till His Face Is "Gashed On My Limbs"
schemes is ill

Till They Gotta "Gather His Skin" Latched In My Teeth In The "Back Of My Grin"
dope

Face It You Lost Dont Fred Savage And "Wonder Years"
I Lift My Kicks To Ya Face So-Knees(SONY) Crush Under Ears
Nice closer

Hmmmm....this was real hard to decide....both of you guys got some sick schemes and dope punches and it was real close but Archer's verse had me laughing more, Mantis was clever but some of those lines weren't hitting (the santa std line, Misleading his points line) so on that basis rcher Priest gets it but you guys really should of had a second round........rematch?

Vote=Archer Priest

knotted up at 2... word, I knew this one would be close Mantis... respect homie.....
And thanks to er'body for breakin down their votes... (except Knox...'lil Bastad!..lol)

id vote but both yall are so close and cool as hell i dont wanna set no one off. Yo do another round the battlefield wantz it, needz it, cant live without it. I say itz a tie but thatz cuz i wanna go eat something right now. peace

Fuck, I was hoping to close this off, but I don't think I can. After I read Archer's verse I thought he would have had it, but Maximus' drop was tight too. As a whole I think Archer's verse had more consistency, good punches, good rhymes, good structure and flow. But Maximus had more outstanding lines. Problem was that some of Maximus' lines appeared to try to be too complex and ended up being fairly poorly worded. Rhymes and flow were also good though.

I hate to do it, but unless you guys go another round I'm gonna have to say it's a tie right now.

yo I'm not gonna do a whole breakdown and explain word for word, so here it is, Archer came more consistent, Max came on some next shit with hard punches, really close battle but my vote has to go to Archerpriest! Really close battle though, it was one of those battles that I didn't want to vote for!

vote=Archerpriest

ay mantis... how many votes we goin to homie?

well go to five....sound good

wow dope verses from both MC's
but i gotta give it to acrcherpriest cus he came nicer with the multi's.

vote = archerpriest

Alright, I see you both need the votes, and seeing as how KingShyt has always been cool with me, I'll vote on this...

King's verse flowed exceptionally well for text...It seemed for effortless and concise, ripping on his opponent...

"You're like tryin' to fuck a Slut, Couz....not Even a Challenge
The Weakest of Talents... this battle's mad Unevenly Ballanced
Shouldn't Even Allow it... cuz now ya chokin' throwin' the Towel In
Im wiser than Owls n' got this Mantis trapped in the Tallons"

On flow he had Mantis...Mantis I believe that you use a more text-cee style when writing, which makes your flow sound a bit more mechanical

In punches it was hard to decide but, I would give it to King because (and this isn't the first time I've noticed this) you fit your punchlines in a clever way, for example...

"Blood spillin' in Gallons... this 'Prayin' mantis 'Kneels' to the Priest"

Things like that I just notice alot

Mantis had some quality punchlines too, this in paricular caught my eye

"This Gay "Father Cupid" Touched His Pupils Than Don Him Self "Archer Priest""

Clever...

All in all, after looking at each, I've decided to vote for Archerpriest

vote= Archerpriest

aite thats it... 5-3, me.... iLL battle Mantis:beer: .. thx to those that voted