Luther Large Lynguistics ( Official Thread )

battles i bring
with stylistic schemes
in full length
strong and ultimatley skillful to greens strength
mc's styles from gorge i still smoke more
clowned you and yours
i got more head from the state than mount rushmore
yo i leave heads dead and fold'em like bed spreads
kick open doors
i'd say consider the realest mc but that's only droppin dead metaphors
and i dont do that especially with them cracks on the wax
but watch my filanges cuz these fingers way too happy for triggas jack
breakin down forts as i stalk gees
wars i thwart with emcees
my wordplay strate unheard of like a hetrosexual dude sportin caprees
all that i see is gettin green
even if it means puttin a kid in a hearse
and if my mother got money stashed i'm snatchin from her purse
so let me know what you think
everybody in the world gotta eat but green 63 neva settles for chinks

just somethin short i made up real quick let me know what you think
if you need me to explain something i'll try my best

Fuck, I Have Like 1 Years Worth, Wu Corp,methical,ins.net......^thats Cool

check it, the best of the best/ stay strapped with tephlon vests/ protectin the chest/ with this foes can't bet on my death/ i keep a wes in my waist ready to be drawn out/ stash a back up in my ankle plus a razor inside of my mouth b4 i go out i gotta go cleanse my dentals/ but just to be safe i still wear a helmet to save my mentals/ i'm neva jello or gelatin garmets/ titanium steels equiped exo skelotons armors/this be the droppers drama/ hiroshima of nuclear bombers/livin life on the street corner sellin drugs to pirahnas/

just a quick sumthin i made up on the spot tell me what you think and if i should finish????

it should be noted that i was listening to last dayz by onyx while typing....peace and feedback please

aint that great but i feel like doin it

anybody?????????

that shits cool man...dope

thanx man....i prolly edit it and maybe add more

check it, the best of the best/ stay strapped with tephlon vests/ protectin the chest/ with this foes can't bet on my death/ i keep a wes in my waist ready to be drawn out/



Cool ^ transition from rhyming vest,best to drwn out mouth, the flow is cool

cleanse my dentals/ but just to be safe i still wear a helmet to protect my mentals/ i'm neva jello or gelatin garmets/ titanium steels equiped exo skelotons armors/

^ that would sound dope on a track
peace

i added about 2 bars at the end

any1 else????????

feedback?????



i dont want this goin to the back yet

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titanium steels equiped exo skelotons armors/this be the droppers drama/ hiroshima of nuclear bombers/livin life on the street corner sellin drugs to pirahnas/

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Hot closing shit is real ill

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/ i'm neva jello or gelatin garmets/ titanium steels equiped exo skelotons armors/

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I didnt notice the multis in this till i spit it, you got that off.

thanx man i might add another verse or 2 to the same beat....i wanna get a damn mic for audio

any1 else

i was feelin that for sure. it felt so easy for me to rap. like the flow was so easy to find without even hearin you do it. i liked your transition like sicka said before. i like to do that in my raps too, but you did it better then i have.

appreciate it holmes...any1 else

good stuff. u got skillz

good replies krazi....anybody else?????

i need ya'll to read this and tell me your thoughts on it.......its short as hell......but i'll only finish and post it if ya'll think i should




analyze under the street lights blood penatrates deep/the dead getter was armed b4 his guts hit the street/it was 45 degrees but the heaters werent siezed/evils deceased/diseased thieves/spark up the heat/ the irony be cracked out peaceful crooked police/character searchin frantically still stalkin the streets/5 dollar look outs for officers walkin the beat/witnesses yellin claimin that they talked to the beast/now it's 200 pounds of cadavers the coroners facin/murder cases/and the physical basis is shell cases/labratory's tryna put crooks inside of there places/plastic bagged faces with they whole torsos laced up/

ayo beef in red attracts pork in blue/







arite i finished a ruff draft of my 1st verse.......and i am starting my next with the beef and pork line.........what ya'll think about the verse and it's additions......

feed appreciated........

nice start make it longer good punches LL good stuff work on it


go check out mine called,

"tha visionarie part1"

thanx g.....any else can give me input?????

yo that was sum fresh shit luther

i was feelin that shit

big ups son , u did ya thing on that verse


peep my shit in temple of darts gimme sum feed back

peace god ~1~

aight i'll check it out later god.......any1 else?

any1 else..........should i finish???????

feed?????

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Originally Posted by Luther Large

i need ya'll to read this and tell me your thoughts on it.......its short as hell......but i'll only finish and post it if ya'll think i should




analyze under the street lights blood penatrates deep/the dead getter was armed b4 his guts hit the street/it was 45 degrees but the heaters werent siezed/evils deceased/diseased thieves/spark up the heat/ the irony be cracked up currupt peaceful crooked police/purp searchin frantically stalkin the streets/5 dollar look outs for officers walkin the beat/witnesses yellin claimin that they talked to the beast/




just sumthin i started writin about.......a shoot out on my old block a while back.....


i aint done.....i just started it right now........should i continue or scrap the idea?????

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I'm lovin' it so far ... the multies are off the hook ... stop teasing us though ... hurry up and drop the rest. Luv your style.

Peace

much luv dae....i'm tryna get it done i just added to finish a ruff draft of my 1st verse...and i only have 1 line starting my second........



hope ya'll still like it though?

Uppin on feed ya'll

...you need me to read this -- and there fore i need you to pause, delete the thread, and stop writing altogether...

calm down chief if you wanna say you dont like it do so...............but dont try and start a homo ass e-beef

???????

supreme challanges hittin, extortin foes/, heavy dosage of blows/goin to war sportin our court clothes/and us pros we still get managed and hold/i eat souls and be feedin off bodies grabbin on they gold/cattle catchin second hand cancer from gunsmoke/battles stay gung-ho/never 1 dumb joke/illegal carriers smash and bust the sound barriers open/fightin in projects my streets bound but only 1 areas chosen/frozen faces is tasteless/catalysts harassed like an A-list/you better be smart enuff to put the umbrella up when it's rainin/battles'll start sprayin and that's all that i'm sayin/


this is a verse i'm ghost writing for my boy.........the track is called "The mentality of warfare"

tell me what you think so far........leave strong feedback...........i know it aint that long but it's not supposed to be we r tryna fit 4 people in.....

(I'm writing it to the gravediggaz-unexplained beat)

feedback please.........

http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2THN8UXMTXS7A316P2XDUTKAGW..........

when reading this verse.......do it out loud over this beat.....it sounds much better that way....

uppin for feedback


(wish i had the instrumentals all i got is the song)

yeah you can write this shit but you can't fucking respond to our fucking freestyle battle motherfucker type your shit quick you've already lost ne wayz stop wastin my time!

uppin for feedback ya'll???????

yo man that shits ILL homie.....nyce werdplay

ur killin it son

yo peep my thread and gimme sum feed back 2 homie

and merk that undead ninja herb

its good but i think you can work on it and it could be better

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Originally Posted by Luther Large

http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2THN8UXMTXS7A316P2XDUTKAGW..........

when reading this verse.......do it out loud over this beat.....it sounds much better that way....

uppin for feedback


(wish i had the instrumentals all i got is the song)

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no homo

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Originally Posted by Luther Large

supreme challanges hittin, extortin foes/, heavy dosage of blows/goin to war sportin our court clothes/and us pros we still get managed and hold/i eat souls and be feedin off bodies grabbin on they gold/cattle catchin second hand cancer from gunsmoke/battles stay gung-ho/never 1 dumb joke/illegal carriers smash and bust the sound barriers open/fightin in projects my streets bound but only 1 areas chosen/frozen faces is tasteless/catalysts harassed like an A-list/you better be smart enuff to put the umbrella up when it's rainin/battles'll start sprayin and that's all that i'm sayin/


this is a verse i'm ghost writing for my boy.........the track is called "The mentality of warfare"

tell me what you think so far........leave strong feedback...........i know it aint that long but it's not supposed to be we r tryna fit 4 people in.....

(I'm writing it to the gravediggaz-unexplained beat)

feedback please.........

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NO HOMO!

^^^shit man even tho i'm kinda ticked.......that shit was mad funny.......

uppin

(it'll be different soon once i edit it)

hahahaha no doubt man
im not at ALL hating on ya shit dude......just whenever im bored i like to read shit and point out "pause" lines
its fun :D