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^ nice , pretty good rhymes in there
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yo man, good job, i'm realy feelin ur style! and don't the that cunt scab Tuco get u down!
Keep doin ur thing dun! and later tonight i'll open a thread with my shit(ur feedbak would be much appriciated)
PEACE
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much luv to funky and krypt for the feed on my new piece and thnxs for the feed everyone
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^^ well im glad you put your thoughts down....
2nd Math Class Fast Rap (For Eternity)
White be the one ~Forever exsisting~/
Others biological clock i ~severe the ticking~/
Been on ~earth~ since the ~sworn pharoh~/
since my ~birth~ i was takin' ~bone marrow~/
sunsets singing sweetly but silently/
gun bets ringing discretly and violently/
Witnessed my ~foes passaway~/
Thoughts ~arose~ was i a ~castaway~/
~Wars came~ vicously to ~deepen the quake~/
~Whores slain~ no more ~seamen to take~/
~Inject~ deadly ~insects~ in ya ~bloodstream~/
~flood screams~ with numbness like ~morphene~/
~present day~ comes with such ~anticapation~/
~peasants pray~ for a more righteous ~nation~/
i'll proablly add more later but tell me what you think HOLLA
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...cluttered, flow was still there, but seemed like you rushed some of those bars....good work nonetheless.....1ne.
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fa sho, thanks for the feed everyone, if anybody else cares to drop sum feed, im all ears, untill then im going to drop something later tonight so be on the lookout.
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yay finally sum new shit to put in my thread :D
Thoughts on Drugs
beat up ~short dudes~/
with ~corkscrews~/
killed once but ~reborn twice~/
known to ~deform mic's~/
lyrics colder then ~sea storm nights~/
~mind bitten~ with ~tainted visions~/
~rhymes written~ for ~satans prision~/
~older phines~ like to ~mold your teens~/
Time to ~translate~ you and your ~mans fate~/
got you in ~check mate~/
my mic ~injects hate~/
into your ~template~/
thats all for now lmfao peace all and give sum feed?
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no feed but thats to be expected...
Expressing my mind
ya'll rappers don't want no ~part of me~/
i'll replace your eyes with your ~arteries~/
you mc's know you can't ~beat me~/
if you don't, you'll know when you ~meet me~/
ya know for my boy's im quick to ~report moves~/
going through ~crews~ as i ~sort dudes~/
style be da ~corkscrew~ fuck a ~court room~/
watch out my lyrical ~4'4's in~/
leavin crews ~frozen~/
I just found out i lost my fucking ~girlfriend~/
im bout to do sumthing big like make the ~world end~/
if i die you know i'll be ~born again~/
cuz on the mic im always ~sworn to win~/
call me Big L cuz i be that smooth ~fly guy~/
always fucked up so i stay seeing ~tie die~/
bitches ~cry~, im quick to wonder ~why~/
we all gonna ~die, its just a matter of ~when~/
you could get killed by your moms, or your best ~friend~/
my rhyme scheme is the ~craziest~/
lyrically im ~blazin clips~/
im white N ~dangeorus~/
call me rob or be quick to think of a ~alias~/
rhyme structure something like its ~tailor made~/
stabbin any m'c with this lyrical ~razor blade~/
i hope to get SUM feed on dis. good lookin wu, i'll be poppin up lata PEACE
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Peace
Im most impressed by the content of your flows. I think you saying some deep shit matter of fact its starting to piss me off...
So, if you can accomplish that , then I guess White can write.
But, black is still the best.
Watch out!!
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check my shit out and give me some feedback to
keep writein rhymes man your style is your style its all in how you spit it anyways right
pretty good though
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Master Thief
Chorus: Master Thief is the ~one~ to fill ya wit' ~lead friend~/
my enemys ~blood~ keep ink in my ~red pen~/
I ~tend~ to ~bend ends~ and get other mc's stuck like ~dead ends~/
My arsenal is big like ~assault ships~/
makin the hardest thugs ~halt clips~/
laughin cuz u roll wit' ~small cliques~/
blamein everyone else when its your ~fault dick~/
your lyrics constantly in a ~wack state~/
around me you'll learn to ~act straight~/
or your bitch ass i'll ~castrate~/
my mic is known to ~cast hate~/
and please dont ~ask jakes~/
cuz then i'll hafta' ~blast and harass fates~/
at a motha fuckin ~fast rate~/
Master Thief is the ~one~ to fill ya wit' ~lead friend~/
my enemys ~blood~ keep ink in my ~red pen~/
I ~tend~ to ~bend ends~ and get other mc's stuck like ~dead ends~/
Above all other mc's so you can say im ~lifted~/
I'm known to drop that ~sick shit~/
cuz my mind is ~twisted~ and my tounge is ~gifted~/
Only sixteen so call me the lyrical ~misfit~/
like imma giant and otha mc's be ~lingustic midgets~/
im that mc you hate to ~dislike~/
my lyrics comes with ~swift might~/
~admit whites~ lyrics are the ~shit right~/