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Best of 5- 3-0 KO.
no h8 votes.
drop your verse by 26th April.
cheers.
stick my pen through your iris- ur a funky drunk but never the osirus
Leave you as skull and bones like pirates- no tone, when i slit your throat with the pain of death's silence
warlord of poetry against a novis- see you searchin for the ring like a fucking hobbit
leave u dead in a forest- hidden by darkness- get chopped down by my axe like wood to loggers
leave your head impailed on my pencil- lead in your bloodstream, as you cough up your brains, soul and mental
Make living essential, starve you of food and water, play snooker with your bollocks hit them my sharpened que
massacre, slaughter, drown your body, cut off your blood short, kill myself and still haunt-ya
feel my pen haunting, leave your mind dark like thorntons- have your body left velvet like steve staunton
let my flow crash your system- you dont have to listen, this will have you chopped and stocked into hellz kitchen
ripping your heart to pieces- start kicking you to death, till you crumble on the floor a-la feaces
force feed deadly dieases- inject the wrong anatadote and have your insides suck you blood like leaches
introduce you to the reaper- give you a last dinner, steal your food and have you die for not eatin
have you cased up in black, so ur lookin like johnny cash- tie down by my wrath, befriend you, then stab you in the bak
snap your bones till they poke out of your skin- put your life on a reel show, and decide when it's 'fin'
fuck it, i cant b assed lol thatll do................!
btw
steve staunton used 2 play football for aston villa fc hu wear claret.
johnny cash was nicknamed the man in black
serachin for the ring i meant for him as a gay term and every1 knwz the hobbit looked for the ring in the lord of the rings!
cheers. and gud luck m8.
prince poetik? u pathetic i set it leave brains infected /
watch ya spasm like orgasm when the lines have been injected /
ill grab the lead from ya pencil... and shove it up yo asscrack! /
no time to blast back your heads sittin in ma napsack /
im severin heavily my minds tell me eventually /
Poetiks life will be steadily endin left with no energy /
i tear ya legs from ya body - beat ya 2 death with ya own limbs /
my mobile number is 666 bitch ... you wanna phone in?? /
ya punchs are weak your a punk and a freak /
you so ugly that u ride in the trunk fuck a seat! /
the features eat ya like pizza watch the blood spill in litres /
i feed it to the creatures ... yeah that oughta teach ya /
actin nice?? let me tell ya ull get slapped 2nyt /
ill throw u on a burnin stick - make u a sacrafice /
damn i came mad week .... sorry i busy and shit , but i didnt wanna keep ya wait , ahh its all good
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thanks for takin time to read and vote , much appreciated fam
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stick my pen through your iris- ur a funky drunk but never the osirus
Leave you as skull and bones like pirates- no tone, when i slit your throat with the pain of death's silence
(Good opener here, a bit stretched though.)
warlord of poetry against a novis- see you searchin for the ring like a fucking hobbit
leave u dead in a forest- hidden by darkness- get chopped down by my axe like wood to loggers
(Decent here, the wordplay of him bein' gay by searchin' for a ring though by the movie LOTR wasn't well worded. Didn't like it.)
leave your head impailed on my pencil- lead in your bloodstream, as you cough up your brains, soul and mental
Make living essential, starve you of food and water, play snooker with your bollocks hit them my sharpened que
(No end rhyme here, at least to me. Some nice multis though. Decent punch here.)
massacre, slaughter, drown your body, cut off your blood short, kill myself and still haunt-ya
feel my pen haunting, leave your mind dark like thorntons- have your body left velvet like steve staunton
(Okay,first line had a lot of FILLERS. Not really required. Decent punch here.)
let my flow crash your system- you dont have to listen, this will have you chopped and stocked into hellz kitchen
ripping your heart to pieces- start kicking you to death, till you crumble on the floor a-la feaces
(Good punch here.)
force feed deadly dieases- inject the wrong anatadote and have your insides suck you blood like leaches
introduce you to the reaper- give you a last dinner, steal your food and have you die for not eatin
(Good punch here.)
have you cased up in black, so ur lookin like johnny cash- tie down by my wrath, befriend you, then stab you in the bak
snap your bones till they poke out of your skin- put your life on a reel show, and decide when it's 'fin'
(Good closer.)
prince poetik? u pathetic i set it leave brains infected /
watch ya spasm like orgasm when the lines have been injected /
(Decent opener, could've been worded better.)
ill grab the lead from ya pencil... and shove it up yo asscrack! /
no time to blast back your heads sittin in ma napsack /
(Played concept to me, I've heard 'em before. Decent punch here.)
im severin heavily my minds tell me eventually /
Poetiks life will be steadily endin left with no energy /
(1st line = talk of yourself, make stuff like that REAL BRIEF in battles, if any at all. Finished it up with second line, decent punch.)
i tear ya legs from ya body - beat ya 2 death with ya own limbs /
my mobile number is 666 bitch ... you wanna phone in?? /
(Great punch here.)
ya punchs are weak your a punk and a freak /
you so ugly that u ride in the trunk fuck a seat! /
(This was nice, reminded me of MTV's "YO MOMMA" for some reason. Good punch here.)
the features eat ya like pizza watch the blood spill in litres /
i feed it to the creatures ... yeah that oughta teach ya /
(Okay, end lind sucked here. Should've came with somethin' else. But good punch nontheless.)
actin nice?? let me tell ya ull get slapped 2nyt /
ill throw u on a burnin stick - make u a sacrafice /
(Could've been worded better. Decent closer.)
Vote - Funky Drunk.
To me, Funky Drunk had better structure and flow, as well as some harder punches then Poetik. Poetik had fillers, and stretched lines. Kinda messed his flow up some.
So overall, Funky gets my vote.
thanks for the detailed vote man , much appreciated , its good to see you took the time to go through it all , thanks
aiight thats 2-0
Would you remind returning the favor and voting in Classic Vs J-Man thread?Quote:
Originally Posted by the funky drunk
done it man , peaceQuote:
Originally Posted by Classic
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funky gets my vote on this one, but good battle overall, now if you guys can only return the favour in voting on the 8 man elimination process battles
aiight 3-0
thats a knockout right thur
nice battle man , props . im'a vote on some battles
peace :b
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