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Shaolin attacks, samurai swords leavin ya neck partially attached
Had no chance to react, Blood ends up spillin all over ya custom fitted cap
Lyrically unmatched, MC's get ripped apart by my lyrical darts
Silenced weaponry, no time for you to scream in the dark
What you should know is that I'm really hear just to impart
But those that can't learn are straight losin they heart
Your spine starts shakin, when you hear my Pitbull bark
Forced to depart, then I'm quick to sink your ark
Ya last vision of me is a spark, cuz I'm fast to pack the pipe
As well as fast to light, cuz the lighter is attached to the mic
I'm also fast with the swipe, that'll leave ya face with a stripe
Every blow I throw is a strike, and on the end of my fist is a spike
Shit, With the words that I type, I could kill you, your children, as well as your wife
My Words of Advice, don't entice the Precise, thats concise with the vice
That dont think twice to excise, with that surgical splice
And re-pack with dry ice, to keep discreet in the heat
Can't compete, you retreat, when you greet my fleet
An act of deciet, after the concrete, the back of ya head meets the cleat
And thats on repeat, to any of those that try to rhyme over beats
You'll just get added to the heap, of those with the weak physique
When I reap, I seem to seep, into the chambers in which you sleep
Ya dreams become bleak, Unsheath, then I tweak ya oblique
A sleek sneak, as I speak over meek, I wreak
Unique Mystique, reek a poisonous fog, right over your creek
When I reach the peak, I take you out with a sweep
And to test how my mountain is steep, I listen all the way till the end of your leap.....
....splash!