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"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
yo kid you best to respect my higher rank
i served nycer niggaz then you back when i was supplien crank
make you walk the plank.....cause kid you half steppin
and if you get more votes than me in this batlle i know its rigged like the election
you bet i got a weapon ........it concists of gums and teeth
ya whole styles a joke kid call you tongue n cheek
your amongst the weak ......like a wednesday afternoon
how u gonna be a emcee wearin ya momz perfume
son you spoke to soon......answering my challenge
my rhymes are deff like foxy brown but your the one thats off ballance
watch me sharpen my talons......before i attack
sons got it twisted like a spinobiphida kids back
your the epidimy of wack......like the motion of hammer to nail
imma skool this punk cap like i was professon at yale
with a rhyme style so advanced i sip from the grail
im shinin so bright in this battle caps gonna have to read it in brail
nigga you already failed.......theres no point for a rebuttle
your a weak minded simpleton and im nyce like cliff huckstible
bust ya little fantasy like a bubble.....cause your soft like shooting CAP guns
your whole styles kiddie play like baseball cards and chewing gum
real rap son......thats tha god concepts moddo
caps more NARROW minded than an ANEREXIC model
go drown ya tears in a bottle......before i break it over ya head
caps such a snake mutha fucka he was hatched from an egg
"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
COMING THROUGH WITH THE TYSON BLUFFILLUMINATE MICS LIKE LIGHTNING STRUCKTWISTING WORDS THAT WOULD HAVE YOUR TONGUE SLICED AND STUFFCHEW YOUR ARM OFF WHILE YOUR SHIT IS MORE LIKE BITES FROM PUPPSTIGHT AS CUFFS,IS THE ONLY WAY TO SPITTHAT'S WHY YOU DANGLE IN THE BACK LIKE PONY TAILS AND SHITLIKE STORMY WHALES I SPITU'LL NEVER FIND THE KID NAPPINGYOU'RE THE ONE M.O.P.WAS TALKING ABOUT KIDNAPPINGAT YOUR BIRTH THE DOCTOR PROBABLY SAID "HEY, SHIT HAPPENS"NOW QUIT RAPPINGOR I'LL LEAVE U HARD TO FIND LIKE SPLIT ATOMSTO RELEASE THISS MESS UPON THE WORLDDECREASE THE STRESS REFORMED AS PEARLSIN BATTLES I FEAST ON FLESH TORN AND SERVEDON SILVER PLATTERSFILLED WITH MADNESSFLOW WITH A KILLER'S SADNESSTHAT I CARRY LIKE LUGGAGEI USE IT AS AN EXCUSE WHEN BERRYING OTHERSSO DON'T FLIP,KEEP IT SAFE LIKE U MARRYING RUBBERSTHE FLOW IS LIKE A POTION MIXTUREYOU'RE LIKE THE INTERMISSION I'M MORE LIKE THE MOTION PICTUREI SPIT LIKE DAFFY DUCKTHE TYPE 2 STICK Y'ALL 4 YOUR FLASHY BUCKSOR LET MY FISTS DO THE TALKING LIKE MY TONGUE WAS IN THESE ASHY KNUCKS (knuckles)SO PROCEED WITH CAUTIONAS I SPEAK WITH BOMBS WHENYOU RECEIVE THESE THOUGHTS INTHE PAST AND FOLLOWING SECONDSTHE TASK IS SWALLOWING RECORDSAND WAIT FOR DOPE SHITAIM 4 THROATS QUICKAT INTERNET RAPPERS SUCKA WEAR IT IF THE CHAIN OR ROPE FITSKANOUK RAPPERS MY TEETH ABSORBAFTER THIS VERSE U MIGHT WANNA LEAVE THE CORPI KILL RAPPERS AS OFTEN AS U U GETTING A PEDICUREYOU'RE PROBABLY FEELING SORRY U EVER BOTHERED TO REGISTER....
nyce battle
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"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
Votes Please....
i will vote i have to let this sink in a bit...
HOW MANY SOULTRAINS LEFT IN THIS MENTAL PRISON
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"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
Cap copped my vote. That verse was pretty nice man. Props. G-Concept wasnt bad, jst that Cap came out swingin n jst caught you with more punches.
Vote=Cap
^mmmmm, I'd be amused to see what punches u talking about there.
Concept brought really witty lines time and time again...some of my favorites
you bet i got a weapon ........it concists of gums and teeth
ya whole styles a joke kid call you tongue n cheek----(nice play on words here)
your amongst the weak ......like a wednesday afternoon
how u gonna be a emcee wearin ya momz perfume(lol...more nice wordplay)
your a weak minded simpleton and im nyce like cliff huckstible
bust ya little fantasy like a bubble.....cause your soft like shooting CAP guns
your whole styles kiddie play like baseball cards and chewing gum (nice build up to these lines)
Cap your verse wasn't all bad by no means but it's bad form to stick cussing at the end of the line to get'em to rhyme (and shit) Not to be an asshole, just to help you in the future, I'll focus on why you didn't get my vote,
TIGHT AS CUFFS,IS THE ONLY WAY TO SPIT
THAT'S WHY YOU DANGLE IN THE BACK LIKE PONY TAILS AND SHIT
LIKE STORMY WHALES I SPIT----back rhyme scheme here, spit,shit,spit....and the last line needs more elaboration....I get what you're saying but it's way too short to have any impact
SO DON'T FLIP,KEEP IT SAFE LIKE U MARRYING RUBBERS(this one is just not a good punch, maybe if u replaced it w/ sex w/ rubbers-would make it more effective)
THE TASK IS SWALLOWING RECORDS
AND WAIT FOR DOPE SHIT---thought this was your best lines in the verse, nice play on words
keep it up, and just work to perfect the craft, Concept has been at this a lot longer and it shows in the verse.....vote=Concept
God Concept:
yo kid you best to respect my higher rank
i served nycer niggaz then you back when i was supplien crank
(LOL this is nice wordplay)
make you walk the plank.....cause kid you half steppin
and if you get more votes than me in this batlle i know its rigged like the election
You came out swinging
You bet i got a weapon ........it concists of gums and teeth
ya whole styles a joke kid call you tongue n cheek
your amongst the weak
Nice wordplay mang
All around hot verse, you had mad wordplay in here(I've been noticing that alot from you lately, it's something you're good at). And a adequate amount of punches.
Cap:
U'LL NEVER FIND THE KID NAPPINGYOU'RE THE ONE M.O.P.WAS TALKING ABOUT KIDNAPPINGAT YOUR BIRTH THE DOCTOR PROBABLY SAID "HEY, SHIT HAPPENS"NOW QUIT RAPPING
HA nice multi's.
YOU'RE LIKE THE INTERMISSION I'M MORE LIKE THE MOTION PICTURE
I SPIT LIKE DAFFY DUCKTHE TYPE 2 STICK Y'ALL 4 YOUR FLASHY BUCKSOR LET MY FISTS DO THE TALKING LIKE MY TONGUE WAS IN THESE ASHY KNUCKS
More multi's more wordplay, thats whats up.
Cap had a real nice flow and hot style, I'd like to see more from you in the future, unfortunately like Eric said, some of your punches didn't work out quite like they should of. And in some areas your flow was off point and some words didn't connect quite well. I commend you for your use of multi's though, you had alot in there thats whats up.
Vote = Concept
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I reckon concept got this, unlike meta4 I thought he had more punches and they were better then Caps. Every line was pretty much straight out relentless and I like the rhyme scheme and the wordplay of the verse was ill.
Cap's verse was decent, like Tek said the multi's in there were good, but I felt that the verse started off real flat (the first 6 lines there wasnt one solid punch although the wordplay was good) and this cost you overall, you ended up with less punches........
Vote=Concept
peace
FAIR ENUFF
3-1 for the god concept
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thanx 4 takin the time out 2 vote yo ......
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"When I die bury me with the LO on...Official to the death for all eternity and so on"Lo Down & Dirty" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL""MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface
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