beats to critque

[fatdan]

yo been making beats looking for feedback on my beats . so feel free to say what ever on your mind. negative or positive don't give me no soft stuff tell me what you really feel. if you like it tell me why you like.if you did tell me why you did.did you like the way i programed the drums or did you like the sample did you like the feel of the track.if you did'nt like it tell me why. was the sample wack the drums are of beat tell me why you did'nt like it so i know what got to do to get better belive it or not when make beats the feedback is usuals whats in my mind so it always makes me better so be harsh be kind but tell me what your hearts says .



http://artoflife.bandcamp.com/track/life-sucks

http://artoflife.bandcamp.com/track/perfectly

http://artoflife.bandcamp.com/track/crackin-glass

[M.O.D.]

u on tha right track my dude , But u gotta lot to learn

[GRANDMASSIVE.]

The 1st beat sounds really off beat unless the mc has intentions of rhyming that way. Overall samples are used pretty well.
The 2nd beat is ok, not really feelin the use of the samples, drums,kicks, and snares sound good and where they need to be.
The 3rd tracks sample intro seems too long, its about a lil over 2mins. The sequencing on your drums on this track is the best of the 3 including bass line. Pretty smooth andf jazzy joint.
Again this is just ny opinion. It takes time to learn ya style and master your craft. Ive been doin this for 7yrs now and Im still learning. Hope this helps. Peace.

[fatdan]

all i'm looking for is an honest opion no soft stuff! i might hurt his feelin. no hurt my feelins if neccessary.but lookin for people to tell the truth

[pRoTeChTyAnEcK]

I'd say shorten you instrumentals to 1-4 minutes, maybe 5 tops.