cold realness

[2L8Lit da croatianMC]

i was bored, so i recorded one track i plan to do in the studio, but untill i get the cheddar im doing at home.. so the quality is kinda messed up..

anyway, drop sum feedback yall..

http://www.zshare.net/audio/903010251a576775/

[2L8Lit da croatianMC]

here's the lyrics.. dont bite !


the dark side is tearing me apart from my heart
dont fight it, embrace it and finish ya blunt
sometimes i see all the bad thing comes at once
my head wanna explode cuz it seems like too much
to handle for a silly funky vandal
i creep thru the town like a thief blowin in the candles
i cant keep runin from the shadows, cuz I am one
as a kid, didnt loose my site from starin in the sun
but i drank many energyes from our gallaxy
stressed out depressed, just wanna feel mellow g
but i cant, cuz imma turn inna plant
fightin so many demons, but i need to slay the champ
tenacious D type of style, why should I ignore the evil
either be corrupt or good, fuck the mic witta fever
make a sperm bank of her ass, on a cold day on the grass
so much seemen she get splashed with fast
the devil made me do that disquistin stuff
dat dont work, nah, i did it cuz im ruff
kill healthy ppl and let injured die alone
uplugg their phones so they cant get help or a clone
get a good lough in the face and a knife in the waist
few bitch slaps while you scream for help in haste
level of chemistry shiftin down and up
its too high in this psycho mode, will it drop
if i continue to rock imma summon odb
dont wanna get my ass fucked cuz imma catch an std
wanna do a drive by, on every drive in..
house or firm, fucc the news papers and the hidin
juggle with ppl headz, and couse mad dreadz
later on rape and snuff my bed neither happy or sad
but how i feel now, yo my soul is dead
or mad twisted, maybe just not enuff fed


town full of rapists, molesters, cheatin sluts
bullies, armed robbers, bein corrupt's a must
scopin out trucks of loot, airbourne like flu
i watch the fuccin crimes unfold dats the truth
pedophiles lurkin the innocent seeds
they the most hated pll in the big house of greed
word up, seen cats livin double fuccin lives
we just human worse than animals so truble neva hides
pll always lie, backstabbin, enjoyin the fuccin ride
bad parents dont care, always send the kids outside
later cant belive why my son joined inna gang
dont use english no more, only the mysterious slangs
the other peeps r shady as a closed back pack
actin cool and direct, but gossipin round the back
when you in trouble alone, the flee like the wind
so its all up to you, thats what reality brings

feel my sharp blade inside and look into my cold eyez
bleed da fucc out, fold ya cards no suprise
im restless like the predator, i gosta claim my kill
i use to smoke the senators, for a few dollar bills
tranformed my raw talent in a serious skill
imma knife maniac, i love them blades of steel
started out as young one, when i found my hun
killin herself dead with pills, that was no fun
the old me vanished, a new persona came up
stopped drinkin liquor, now sober but fucked up
i lost my emotions, couldnt lough or cry
i choose villains for victims when the sun is high
its a new day, its a new dawn, i plugged of the alarm
slipped inside the house and stabb you with charm
never smoked out like chong or cheech on the bong
on the real i use stealth, i prep on the farmz
in the hills with binacolurz, scopin ya out
put a bandana, took my katana n' a knife for a fight
6 a.m. at ya window, stunn ya brain lik white widdow
you molest ya girl, now imma test you kiddo
bitch you also a snitch, rattin out on ya crew
no more wake and bake for a former fake ass fool
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Cmon ppl.. some feedback needed..

Peace!

[SKAMPOE]

im diggin this yo
ill writtenz

[2L8Lit da croatianMC]

thank you!

[2L8Lit da croatianMC]

can someone else please drop some feedback about this track ?