The Dusk Dungeon

[oDoUoSoKo]

The Real battle thread come drop 16 4 me

[PJ FlemFlam]

probe'n the outskirtz of my brain wave , a wift of this rave, i work my way around the spark thatz spectacular , a mirage ponders me vernacular , a bee bounce'n roun to yo flower i bumble ,breath control deflect'z edible responses humble, receive meritz fo conduct, the funnel of this hurricane abductz,cabbage in the sink,icee color pink,treasures signal a dare,reflect to my stare,ridin the "L",create'n a spell,biochemical equation,set the stage in,spit the invasion,learn'd adaption,far from distraction,propell out the contraction,in the midst of rapture,prepair for capture,bust'd head fracture,try'n to latch on,don't start cha flap on,overthrow'n time at it'z brink,blow a kiss back & wink,PJ sayz he's nyce,i'm not roll'n with yo rig'd dice,take your time or pay the price,not with your lyfe,just strife,i didn't mean to turn you on,let'z be fair so long,out the blue gadget,out of this world magic,a pattern release tactic,hit the pool splash'n,warriorz clash'n,can't wait ask em,don't try to be deep fashioned,they come & go,perception eruptz start the flow,becareful though,of a radiant glow,storm getz cold try'n ta see through rain,sleet,snow,shake my hand ,be my friend you've been digg'n 'n the garbage can

[oDoUoSoKo]

flem flam spittin writtins, which aint even that nice
dart boards for rappin dude not for cat fights
gotham local, sharp experimental vocals
with venomous heads swallow them as they go down ya throatle
sir nikolas time bomb, taste my little nikki
i fucka beat wit my werd meat when i get a little kinky
ya wiz sippin the potion, out the boat lubed wit lotion
diggin in the garbage? i aint been in yo crib
beat yo so kwick, off the top of the dome piece
takin killah priest lyric book while he go sleep
talkin bout splash n warriors, u need to get ya swords sharpened
beg my pardon while i have u up in heaven playin a harp bitch
takin cabeza's whos bountied, like paper towel
u spitten bullshit like a cows ass movin a bowel
im not a gangsta actin like i got a gutter life
but i got samurai shitz u messin wit butterknives

[PJ FlemFlam]

sucka punk ya azz,talk'n lame azz ,aah dag,what a blast,i leave a slash,fo suckaz dat wanna clash,say i ain't got know class,i leave ya slow 'n a dash,while you crash,brack em off sumthin,yo lips numb'n, slow runnin,skitzo hummin,throw'd to the bushes with blood runnin,deal'n with a speed racer,chase down ya weak chaser,zap'd by my fazer,see you later,reality T.V.dater,where some make -up,cheap watch jacob,bad relation breakup,ol candy paint flake up,comin in the house too late,you weren't nothin but a timely slate,f'd up mindstate,tryin to catch my brake,too sweet cake,pop'd in the face wake,you at stake,instant jaw brake,hype azz tryin ta skate,flat on azz bait,straight to the floe,pissed on joe,dat'z his name'oh,a lost child in a stow,what he don't know,he only four,wear'n sista clothes show'n,they been know'n,rape'n toys hoe'n,neighbahood weak water, ask'n fo a quarter,head fo the border,naw get ya zhit in order,you ain't know 4 leaf clover,come here rover,i'll brake ya shoulder,straight fold'ya,fart'n in the bed,hair shed,not sharp pencil lead,show'n butt chickz spread,you insist instead,read your bedtime story,put yo azz too bed 'n a hurry,you're out of inventory,caught on maury,try'n ta call cory,ya'll know ya'll had dat orgy,end of story,i getz glory,goofy feel'n moody,in public try'n ta touch somebody boody,best part of wake'n up ooh wee,what a pity,diaperz shity,down to da nity,don't say you pretty,talk'n grity smity,head noddy,can't use the potty,sourz on body,clothes stank,try'n ta wave ya shank,fake pirate walkz the plank,you need a drank,i leave a ya spank,yhin ain't got d'z,you got fleas,now freeze,musik pleez

[PJ FlemFlam]

you ain't da bat from gotham,this one gone cost'em,drain you out like da fosset,i'm already nascent,you've lost it,slap da taste out'cha,hold ya chest,think'n you da best,take a rest,cheap azz soap zest,handicap vest,you want last with this test,wait'n fo yo next step,allday done slept,tyr'n crept,time fo my belt,azz on fire melt,unplug ya mike,lil tike,ride ya bike,take a hike,throw ya down a flight of stairs,musical chairs,left out home care,know tire to spare,fuk your stare,too much to bare,blew up ya lair,ain't nothin fair,broke ya snair,prepare,cash'n ya stampz,out the dryer stiil damp,blew ya own amp,go back to fat camp,watch this sneeze,you sleeze,better move at ease,down to your kneez,beg me pleez,you study degreez,pimp pleez,got ya own disease,you mix yo leaves,drink'n erk & jerk,watch him burp,greedy azz slurp,come to my turf,leave you 'n da earth,crawl back to church,sick sound'n smurf,predictions,cause'n inflictions,toolz for my incision,left you bit'z & pieces by precision,yo car got towed from the collision,

[oDoUoSoKo]

causin seisures leavin people parapledgic,
u know the wu language well jus dont know how to speak it
u reek of shit, plus i guess u cant count
cuz i tol u 16 u gave me a bigger amount
all u doin iz gatherin a whole buncha werds that rhyme
i bring the off the noggin chaos, wit the murder rhymes
u'd probably win this shit if the judge was stevey wonder
he cant see the thunder my swords stuck in the ground wit u under
whoever really wrote your rhymes got jacked like lumber
they got cheated like jim jones got played by the summer
u must be wasted copied and pasted from a lyric site
u tried recitin from shadowboxin but u didnt hear it rite
u aint foolin no one, "slurp, burp, cherp,twerp"
u aint from scotland but i bet u be wearin skirtz
ya im from gotham bruce wayne apprentice
good battle, i win maybe next time ill be less relentless

[PJ FlemFlam]

hit you head with a brick,i'm the sideline vick,quit talk'n shit
put you in a pit,look'n all sick, release my clip,hold ya lip,now watch ya slip
take a cat nip,you ain't cold,try'n ta act bold,behind the counter behold
roundz hittin ya from ev'ry angle,dance bo jangles,my wordz do strangle,
wanna tango,i use my fangz yo,stank'n azz,suffer'n sucka tazz
hit my lines duplicate,need to recuperate,i know plenty of wordz,you just on the verge,
now you're serv'd,try'n ta splurg,ran into the curve
this time i'ma spit fire line fo line
yo decisions cost you the crime
talk'n bout i can't rhyme
on credit you need someone ta co-sign
you probably blind to these dayz & times
poet that can show then know it
grasp'n the mike ta flow it
stunt'd hair growth you know you can't grow it,
pick'n influences from not so deep artist
think'n you've gain'd info from the wu ta spark this
late night creep i leave you in da park bitch
it might sound so deep put'n together
fever now your under the weather
catch up i'm too clever
pull down ya lever
you got the clapz can't give you a hand clap
seen on the sidewalk i gave you a slap
all you do iz flap all that jap
skinz you cant' even tap
fly'n across the room
you're a buffoon with a bunch tunes
you'll retreat soon
fed with a silver spoon
think'n your a silver back
i can't cut know slack
beat ya mini me ta jack
won't catch the aroma of contact
my thoughtz are intact
try'n ta play ball in the court
i play you as a sport
a alien of some sort,
burn ya with the torch
get back on the porch this fire might leave ya scorch'd

[oDoUoSoKo]

yo the first verse u left me i saw in another forum
u bored be and the people in the other thread u bored them
u cant battle a champ wit amature writtens
i chef up spicy nice 16 up in the kitchen
for some reason u gave me like 48 bars of trash
u r on crack, my rhymes give u heart attacks
i ambarresed u pa, maybe i should apologize
but u didnt follow the rules so ur disqualified
but since ur ghost writer obviously put thought into ur raps
ima let it slide for once and answer u back
i cant believe u tried the same shit in two different boards
so ima do u like u in a circus make u swallow a sword
y did i go to ya girls crib to get my balls licked
now my mom gotta see me on maury paulvich
so dont reply no more go steel whoever rhymes u gon steal
plus im dunkin my balls in ya wiz mouf like shaq oneal

[PJ FlemFlam]

kid try'n ta sing,catch you in da bing,
he was fling,left a head rush ding,act'n all
mean try'n ta call ya team,what it seemz,just saw
a gleam,get ya pressure up fo da steam,sit bak & sip some leen,
fuk ya intervine,i got the machine,comin all clean,
you try'n ta make the match,something will hatch,i have a good batch,you pull'd down the wrong latch,kick ya weak factz,they already wack,know time fo' lack,pull out ya stack make the jack,lay'd on the ground flat, peep my stat,how you act,ain't intact,blow a gun get a contact,the lightz go deem, holla at flem,with a nice gem,put out da stem,,got ya puzzle'd,all the other zhit you try'n ta jungle,drink it down guzzle,don't try ta cuddle,beat ya out the tussle,bring ya muscle,put ya in a bag duffle,lame azz on hollywood shuffle,i ain't try'n ta be deep,some ya'll make me weep,yo shit try'n ta seep,strayd away sheep,fail'd the leep,now go ta sleep,body in the jeep,made this quick creep,hole was too steep,stop try'n ta peep,coming to a end,with a good blend,pop'd ya friend,what ya try'n ta send,i'll make ya bend,wanna contend,something hard ta mend,impulse incessant,speak da unexpect'd,accept'd,choose your relic,try'n ta flex it,dam it,gone jam it,watch how i slam it,might even cram it,see what the scam iz,i ain't heard of that,i'm up fo next bat,cut ya chit chat,click clack,hit da board,draw ya sword,i look forward,ta pull'n ya cord,act noy'd,try'n ta void,this coil,make ya blood boil,undaneath the soil,ya milk spoil,your unda the foil,you ain't loyal,i'm royal,flip'n verses,what the curses?,come see the nurses,snatch'n purses,you know i'm lurk'n,get ya burp'n,put a fork'n,you know i'm torch'n,you can't be found,lost track ya sound,i was crown'd,it was bound,now i'm found,scrap you against the ground,clown,wanna astound,blown away cloud,repeat the wedd'n vows,

[oDoUoSoKo]

yo man i won thats enuff,lol but seriously u could stop now its only 2 round man

[oDoUoSoKo]

Yo im still here get at me ONLY 16 PLEEZ!!!!

[oDoUoSoKo]

yo 16 bars 2 rounds lets go

[oDoUoSoKo]

yo my personal canvas, feel free to post feed back

[oDoUoSoKo]

the adventures of the yung'n whos minds older than holders of dentures
boulders of sentences, scold u before death jus to en-sure
that u get the picture, sendin lyrics to quiver ur spinal rope
ur sittin home pissed while ur girls creepin gettin her vaginal poked
the sparks of collidin swords light the tightly rolled cuban
have u confused seeing illusions, while i chill back drinkin a fusion
dismantled my flow to execute a sharper bunch of verbs
jus so it comes across harder, not made to impress u herbs
scream FATHER U C KING police on tapped phones
in the city thats known as the insomniac home
i couldnt give a shit, if i sold mr hanky toys to children
your chances of livin are slimer than paris hilton
when im killin, villian like mf,fills heads in duffle bags
22. makes loud sounds? rubber nipple muffles thats
i will always be one to support us havin war no more
but im keepin grim reaper busy as he goes door to door

[oDoUoSoKo]

any comments? i came up wit it rite after watchin batman begins(doesnt have shit to do wit crap) but i offed the topped it, wuthca think ya?