niggas is suckas for a pretty face.... fuck it call it tough love, marketing skeam is fraudulent BS, trying to sell me a brand like its nike's & it's coming off like no Frills, if its no frills sell me no frills shit i grew up on no frills
lyrically you still need work, you anit fucken with L boogie, radio, underground, freestyle whateva (not trying to take anything away from you but your just not there yet) when you throw her name (Lauren hill) out there like that, people going to be listening for that type of caliber of skill & talent, and when they don't get it, it's a disappointment and your name/brand is associated wit that disappointment & it takes away from you & your art, keep it 100
you are talented you can sing rap & do spoken word, I gave that country girl another listen it was good I especially like the hook you was singing you kind of remind me of female version of one of the dudes from crucial conflict
http://youtu.be/3Fg2NRCB9Sc
but not as tight, I felt country gurl was the best I heard from you the other joints to me sounds like you not riding the the beat like you supose to
you are a hot mess you are not bad but not awesome either, You want to be awesome! your a bit all over the place for me I dont know if you want to rap, sing or do spoken word,@ times it sounds like you trying to do all three @ the same time, @ times you sound pitchy @ times it sounds like you whining, my point is clean it up who's mixing your vocals it can be compressed a lil & EQed a lil tighter take some of that pitch away
I'm in New York we tuff critics up here bring your act to Amateur night @ the Apollo you'll see
you gonna have haters grow thicker & use that negative energy for fuel when you laying yo shit down & go hard
my dude caper said he was feeling you so what, so here you go
1 well this aint AR this is the internet a cruel cold ruthless world wide playground for assholes like us here at wu corp
2 know who you marketing too; a bunch of wu-tang & hardcore rap fans who most could give a fuck what the radio is playing
3 Step your video game DARKSTARZ records, wow really! you shouldn't talk your video was not the best quality either, was that HD! oh ok!
plus I think skampoe shot that shit with a cell phone pretty good for a cell phone
bottom line you cant please everyone so embrace the haters when they come
just for the record got mad love da dirty south big fan of goodie mob, outkast, UGK, ghetto boys, killer mike, big krit, lil brother & more
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