More votes....
More votes....
Protp had some sick multi's going, but I liked the rawness that CS was droppin. To me you could tell he was pissed when he was writin, Proto was the more technical sound of the verse but couldn't match the engery of CS which is what wins my vote here.
I agree.........Originally Posted by SpOk3N
Pro-Type won. He put more thought and better word play. However, I felt Charging Soldiers flow more. Only problem with Charging, was he kept with one subject matter (bash the fag! bash the fag!"
Walking in Stealth, I kept my eyes to myself
Evading looks from crooked crooks eyeing my wealth
Besides, I only had but some Nickles and Dimes
And a Folded News Clip with a depressing headline
Entitled Hip Hop is Lost in Dead Times
crossed out viciously with countless pen lines
--Ayatollah Prolific
I never sleep, yet I yearn greatly to dream
Beware the demon creeps, my fragile senses must be keen
I didn't like Pro-Type WP explainations (you didn't need to do that) but the fact is that he was better than Charging who, like Ayatollah Prolific said stuck to one subject.
F.L.I.N.T.
Can't be mad at the voters but what can you expect with a 12 line battle? Either stay consistant or rap a little bit about nothing? Oh well I lost this one quick! I just want to point out that this kid called me Faggot first, and that's why I blasted back with the same subject matter- I mean c'mon how's he gonna call me a fag he don't know me? Where was he drawing his material from? Nothing- he ran out of things quick and had to resort to - ha ha your gay----ok you want to call mother fuckers faggots? here's how it's done cock sucker- I will admit though that ghost face line was Hot!
The other thing I want to point out is I had waited two weeks for this kid to drop, what was you doing writing a line a night? I droped my verse in like five minutes. did it take that long to think of somthing to rhyme matter is with batteries? wait a sec that don't rhyme- I mean did take that long to rhyme tracks with..........tracks? Nah i'm just being sore now but what's this line mean? I don't get it condoms in head?
Cuz u wont get the *protection* even if u wear *condoms in head* /
or
Ur false illness?? Thats plain gossip like a blunder press /
only time u get ur *hands on a jaw* when *under stress* /
does this line have something to do with a newspaper press what's the false illness? Maybe it's over my head because I just don't get it.
Props on the win though,
peace
Im afraid 12 lines were enough to decide a winner. And yes I could also go through your verse and find as many weaknesses. But it was evident... my multies, wordplay, punches were much better. Anyways.. Good Battle though. Peace...
Swing'n in from the left, most def. You never saw me comin' till I hit you in you clef. Cause I kick the tales that peek your intreast, so damn hard I knock you off your mistress, So dig this. I'll take you back in time to 19, 7, 9. To witness a birth, yes the is mine. Nobaly born but mentaly torn, my life was desten to be hectic eclectic I had to accept it. the 1st few years of life went by without strife but then Reality sunck in like a knife twisted dull blad and all, But did not fall and thats how I say fuck yaw'. Laid on ground I'm still a bigger man. If you don't kill me I'm comming back twice like lice. So you best take my advise, if your not vested then your bound to get bested.
pass the mic
If you can kill to birds with one stone, Then you can rule the world from the top of a pile of ruble.
Just cuz u lost, dont get ideas bout me.. I only had 15 mins to drop that verse, had to work overtime just to get a PC (do not own one) to post my verse. Im sure u have never battled on stage, becuz u get called millions of things, theres no time to cry...
Yo it wasn't your imagination, so don't change the sation. Stay tuned and watch the enialation. The two man duel just turned into a treo with me yo, so putch'ya duck up...
If you can kill to birds with one stone, Then you can rule the world from the top of a pile of ruble.
Do it then- really do it I'd like to see my weakness, this is what I want, some constructive critisism, that's how you grow as an artist. So yeah discecct that shit I wanna see what you have to say.Originally Posted by ProtoTypeMC
Deja Vu.
no doubt- but what can I say? I need the feedback when I lose.- and that dude that dropped a verse in this thread- I don't know that cat- he just jumped in-Originally Posted by SurreaL
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