Doc_Death v.s. Dusk ( VOTES NEEDED )

[oDoUoSoKo]

yo apokalips changed his name son, borykua

[Eddy]

g zuss, who the hell are u, can u pick 1 who u thought sucked less?

[MASTER PAI MEI]

This is no proof VOTES NEEDED

[oDoUoSoKo]

plz vote

[oDoUoSoKo]

guidelines

[J-Man]

yo that guy earlier saying y'all suck i disagree hes probs jelous n ill have to say dat dusk had the upper hand in the battle

Vote = Dusk

USE THE GUIDELINES PLZ - bigben

[Classic]

rappin it crazy, beatin u easy like smackin a baby
actin like u hardcore cuz ermac on ur avy
(Good opener.)
i dont think this kid is anything remotely close to urban
if u was really ermac u wouldnt be recievin this hurtin
(Good punch.)
breath in cuz zeed's in the place and ur career's briefer than case
now ur life is based on seeds in ur face
(Decent punch.)
so take heed, cuz my warinig is all ull recieve
u think u good ill blow ya mind out before the thought is concieved
(Good punch here. Nice wordplay.)
its good ur dawn cuz u gon need to wake up at the crack of it
to rap wit this kid, cut ya head off and carve my name out on the back of it
(Good punch here.)
rap wit ridikulus flow, convert nickles to gold
tear ya chest up, rip out ya heart wit the sickle u hold
(Decent punch, wasn't feelin' first line.)
u challenge ya own crew member, wasnt to smart of a move
ill tear u apart dude, make u a part of my food
(Good punch here.)
i roll thru like herbs and paper, there aint no person greater
is there a doctor in the house for this doctor impersonator?
(Not too good of a closer. Wasn't feelin' first line. )



i dont know wat u been rappin bout latelly,
cause we both know that i could be slappin ur baby,
(You feed here. Wasn't really feelin' it. In text battles, feedin' and flippin' really aren't impressive to me.)
but wouldn't be slappin ur lady,
cause i wouldn't like it if u talked about mine hatefully,
(....It's the 'BATTLEFIELD' for a reason.)
talkin about me impersonating a doctor,
me impersonating gets me all the hallas,
(Feedin', and talk of yourself.)
talk about ermac as my avy,
but ermacs the one that got u goin crazy,
(Feed again. Not to good of a punch.)
lets not get into spawn as ur avy,
and thats the last time i hear u talkin bout my baby,
(Not too good of a punch.)
i'll punch a hole in ur face forfor tryn to sound like mase,
nigga at least i was not the one giving head to an ace,
(Good punch ere.)
talk bout doc like u is somebody zeedy,
hay i got a question mans do u see deez,
(Half-decent.)
nutz in ur mouth now thats true,
by the end of this battle u aint gonna wanna battle me in the booth.
(Not a good closer. True and Booth don't rhyme. Maybe should've tried "Truth" and "Booth".)

My vote goes for Dusk.
Dusk was more consistent, some minor flaws, and even some wordplay in there.
Red, just cause your opponent throws a personal into the battle doesn't mean you should actually take it personal. Respondin to it like that on your verse really spoils it man.
Overall, could've seen a better verse on Red's side.
I liked it.
Keep it up, make your battles "Classic".

[oDoUoSoKo]

vote

[oDoUoSoKo]

pleez motherfucking vote

[Luther Large]

vote=doclocashoxin free

boat cars

[oDoUoSoKo]

damn this site is so ass now

[Luther Large]

damn this site is so ass now

especially the battlefield

[oDoUoSoKo]

vote

[Luther Large]

multi's=tie
punches=dusk
vocab=dusk
creativity=dusk
wordplay=dusk


no i aint hatin on u redskull ur's wasnt that bad i just thot dusk was better in this 1 this battle wasnt very good but dusk took it


peace....

[Sirkulayshun]

punches-dusk
vocab-dusk
wordplay-dusk
flow-dusk

good battle tho...redskull did good but my vote goes to dusk