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[JahroamDaGod]

Marked by appearances and stiff lines
Audiences are targeted
Park benches twisted by arsenic and stricnine
Shift formations
Name defensive ordinances to perform on the fly
Protect the truth with beautiful lies,
Brutal disguises for booted giants
Crews and rivals collide to exchange huge appliances
Crimson dye rinses,
Commit to life sentences on some do or die shit
Conmen and dark Killahs willin to deny their bars and lines exist
Dead men reckoned by lead pens
Well-read prints share Sith elements
Propel shells at past precedents with shreds of black evidence
Labeled combative and rebellious, I just tell just it as it's happenin

[JahroamDaGod]

Connected by expensive dreams and inexperienced Kings
fear is a living thing, breathing and seething at carefully hidden seams
suspicious at being lifted by non-physical wings,
Babylonian regimes require we all bow to crowned criminals and their chemical decrees
cry me a river (af)forded by the Rock of Gibraltar and her Priests,
the cost never decreases, the law of Offices and the Streets
Watchmen falter in the face of becoming the Fallen or simply men of peace
when the real menace is behind the mirror's streaks
my kind has disappeared like ghosts, rolled bones rattling stones and sheets
shatter roads, knotted ropes swing heavy with bodies in the breeze
measure the topography in macrological degrees,
Chrono Trigger heat,
volcanic drifting heat distributed digitally through operational streams
raw blood feeds my consumption of beats,
knotted and blunted speech,
led by muddied feet to an unwanted destiny....

[Drunken Monk]

[Obey]

the cost never decreases, the law of Offices and the Streets
Watchmen falter in the face of becoming the Fallen or simply men of peace
when the real menace is behind the mirror's streaks



Best part imo. Honestly for feed back though i thought it was a little too much adjective then noun or adverb then verb, with no solid story behind the piece. With that said you had some good ideas and a broad vocab


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[JahroamDaGod]

Judged by killers with chisels,
World-enders, the sculptors of men
Stand tall in tunnels of wind,
Lands overrun with rivers and no fish
Pillars survive with columns of scripts,
Pagan priests call for us to breathe through filters of sin
Wild animals in the press,
They walk among us as if mirrors don't exist
Inhuman vocals claiming my soul as kin, I won't deny them
My heritage has been proclaimed by blind pens,
Confide in the liars of today's times and trends,
Only by hiding the truth can u guide fools

[JahroamDaGod]

Throw back most cats can’t purely out sport my javelin options to win are minimal to anything incidental trying trump me out my hotel,
without anything in rear well/

upgraded from Section 8, my peers excel
spreadin thick legs on egyptian sheets, exhale fumes on Microsoft screens
propel caustic speech,
college professors robbin re-tah-ded geez for their odd futures and dodgin deez
stomp streets against hives of bees,
maintain high achieves as the higher chief, the god of grief
burning lime trees trace the shorelines,
Lake Michigan is at war tonight, the poor can't afford to buy peace
hold court with iron pieces against the fiendish hordes,
wired,
fired swords riding winged beasts through the sky in the morning
mothers cry in mourning, their eyes-a-bleed crimson
hovering on the brink of death, you won't die without my permission...

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

upgraded from Section 8, my peers excel
spreadin thick legs on egyptian sheets, exhale fumes on Microsoft screens
propel caustic speech,
college professors robbin re-tah-ded geez for their odd futures and dodgin deez
stomp streets against hives of bees,
maintain high achieves as the higher chief, the god of grief
burning lime trees trace the shorelines,
Lake Michigan is at war tonight, the poor can't afford to buy peace
hold court with iron pieces against the fiendish hordes,
wired,
fired swords riding winged beasts through the sky in the morning
mothers cry in mourning, their eyes-a-bleed crimson
hovering on the brink of death, you won't die without my permission...

damnnnnnnnnnnnnnn that was dope

[JahroamDaGod]

Pick up the chisel and build again
black face and silver-skinned,
I am a bewildering blend of civilization and sin
spit glistening webs of evil dread,
blistered and eaten flesh stitched together with venomous thread
exaggerated features of the reaching dead,
stagger the streets blind, eager to be fed
intravenous deceit,
blunt needles breathing poisonous smoke
high tolerance treatment invoked,
each demon that spoke became the voices of ghosts
I don't sleep, walk the halls in silence
walls collide, each out of alignment
my shadow twitches in the darkness, I start firin'
close my open irises,
this close to the lion's den I came to know I am Osirus
born in the village of Midas, I am brother to Orion
the blood of Titans, the son of tyrants
at birth I touched the horizon,
I am the burned among white men
spark sticks and cough thick clouds of flies like phlegm,
my kin are now a dying breed
the identifying markers are five genes,
traced in triangular shapes in our DNA sequentially...

[Father N Dangerous]

nice scripts solid vocab, and u have good structure so keep that shit up

this was my fav line in the last verse

high tolerance treatment invoked,
each demon that spoke became the voices of ghosts

thougth that this bar was cool i liked it good read

[JahroamDaGod]

some see me as old and withered,
a crippled criminal,
a crazy Seminole wizard from a Windy City
chisel permanent entries on shifting seas,
blaze University furniture and inhale the degrees
despite stutterin speech
blunt reasoning becomes salty seasoning
son of unliving things,
burned and blacked by my own hands to gain nativity
hoodlums in hoods hooked by the hood's possibilities,
we in the basement farmin for clouds, lost in the crowd...

[JahroamDaGod]

there is no tomorrow, the bombs will fall today

let my closed eyes watch the leaves curl brown, drop, and fade

I've never had a heart, I lost it when I was locked away,

bled dry, my chest cried at the organs left at the bottom of crates

welcome to the department of waste,

do you like the fruit from our gardens of decay?

fight for food among starving plates,

downtown Chicago, startin wars with Martians on State

I've always been a cheater despite the cards I've played,

don't spit darts to hit charts or get paid,

I'm just mad that I've passed my radio daze

hit the studio and blaze, fall asleep and give my opportunities away

smart mouth but I'm gettin them stupid grades

commit to ugly scars with beautiful blades,

everything I've viewed isn't usually on display

tired of hearing, "You can't do that! What will people think of you in this age?"

who gives a fuck,

I'm just happy you pay attention to what I say...

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

verses hearts battle bots bats in starts mats get played like card sharks
taken like liam neison versus any emcee deadly chaos when cats like steven segal get fat and still display odds/
fagon reganomics get economical stablized ionized trivalized dime size fireflys get eves driven in leads i've been bleeding on your carpet nigga clean that shit up/
dutch roll fluster cold shoulder bold bastard get cha statement's out there
you ain't ever dead levars like burtons on star trek
i'm high like kanye get out my envoy or get deployed like pacific rim/

[JahroamDaGod]

I am emotionally spent and I have no gold to spend,
this does not make me broken.
I use spoken words to provoke verses,
an overture of my vices and sin played over my intents.
righteous men tempted by violence and violins,
I can't tell when I'm right or wrong when I vent.
so I hold it in,
my voice fades to background noises, the walls close in
there's nothing to sing about,
i'm surrounded by boys that don't know how to be men
my sheets drip over an ocean,
falling in, i don't sink or swim
you might think it's nice,
but I need heat or ice to feel alive again
ride the western winds past the horizon,
born to wise men in divine crypts,
I was one of the worlds premier scientists
first line of defense against seemingly lifeless men,
a single bite infects the mind,
it's not quite dying but you'll never shine again
governed by a collective hive,
there's no protection and nowhere to hide
the only cure is to fight

[Mantra]

Dope thread!