Graveyard shifter-the inventor (new track)

[RADIOACTIVE MAN]

enjoy
https://soundcloud.com/graveyardshif...r-the-inventor

[UNCLE RUCKUS]

Dope beat and lyrics.

[RADIOACTIVE MAN]

Many thanks bro

[GRANDMASSIVE.]

Im really feeling this beat fam. Real madlibish..& fonky. Real lyrical shit bro.

[mrstraightfire]

Beat - I didn't really like the beat. I understand the type of beat it is, but it felt a little too disorganized (could be the intend purpose).

Hook - Hook was basic, but I felt it was effective for the whole song's gritty vibe. But I feel that the verses ending were a little too abrupt.

Rapping - The rapping is what I liked the most on this track. Good flow and good voice too. Your voice kinda remind me of Cappadonna. I like the rhyming patterns too.

[RADIOACTIVE MAN]

Im really feeling this beat fam. Real madlibish..& fonky. Real lyrical shit bro.

Peace fam,thanks

[RADIOACTIVE MAN]

Beat - I didn't really like the beat. I understand the type of beat it is, but it felt a little too disorganized (could be the intend purpose).

Hook - Hook was basic, but I felt it was effective for the whole song's gritty vibe. But I feel that the verses ending were a little too abrupt.

Rapping - The rapping is what I liked the most on this track. Good flow and good voice too. Your voice kinda remind me of Cappadonna. I like the rhyming patterns too.

Thanks a million ma,apreciate u taking the time out

[Ozmosis]

I agree about the hook, maybe if you scratch it in or screw it to give it different sound. Dope track tho.

[SKAMPOE]

dope dope dope

[LORD_BEATJITZU]

Ill shit as always fam....

[Killa BB]

Dope... but the hook was kind of a disruption. I wouldn'nt mind if you just flowed over the whole time instead of that. - peace

[RADIOACTIVE MAN]

I agree about the hook, maybe if you scratch it in or screw it to give it different sound. Dope track tho.

Thanks g,preciate the feedback

[RADIOACTIVE MAN]

dope dope dope

Skampoe!! Good looking my g

[RADIOACTIVE MAN]

Ill shit as always fam....

P.e.a.c.e, thanks brotha

[RADIOACTIVE MAN]

Dope... but the hook was kind of a disruption. I wouldn'nt mind if you just flowed over the whole time instead of that. - peace

The feedback is always appreciated my dear. Ill keep in mind. Thank u