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    Been a moonracker since moonwalker ran amuck
    Sun soaker folklore bust raw, muscle pinch iron wench
    Soul control puppeteering this is how the strings are played
    Slayed in the buffet of those want more
    Stomach as much I can eat in one sitting
    Spitting without eating, without reaching
    Sucker punch cha way through the gates of hell
    Soul retrieve sister sledge behead cha dead
    Mulch cha heads in the graphic orgy
    Only a few cordially invited to be a part of
    Death’s assassination bastard await cha fate
    Lend me the duckets to run to Pawtucket
    Photosynthesis with more theories under a lamp
    Than scientist did in man’s entire life time
    Seen my fate through Hubble telescope lenses
    Pretenses expenses, relations and tensions
    Pressure bust pipes, side swipe the highlights

    [Chorus]
    Before you can turn the bullets to steam or something
    You gotta be a man of tomorrow, a doctor of Manhattan
    A comedian of life, even during the trife times……
    Even in the face of chaotic times, I will not compromise
    Suckers may lie in wait, suns may rises, and moons may fall
    Satellites will always be rocketed in space,
    that’s just a taste of what waits in this time and space

    Shun shame solo blame game halo clip reading fame game
    Lame mane chained to barrels insane in this brain of mine
    Crush through the labors of days of pains
    Flex those muscles, tendons and bones
    Pissed rages pages off the mark of their mockery
    I’m hand puppet taught cha through metaphoric comedy
    Promise me, through the eyes of an hurricane
    Bust through your electronic care plan, take me to the next dimension man

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    Quote Originally Posted by SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS View Post
    Pissed rages pages off the mark of their mockery
    I’m hand puppet taught cha through metaphoric comedy
    Stop That!

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    It was good i rathet enjoyed it good vocabulary i liked the chorus the most some lines could use sum work but thats ok, also i feel like this needed to be longer if u wanted to have a chorus with it but all in all enjoyable
    My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
    More fly then everybody that wields luggage
    Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it

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    Quote Originally Posted by White N Dangerous View Post
    It was good i rathet enjoyed it good vocabulary i liked the chorus the most some lines could use sum work but thats ok, also i feel like this needed to be longer if u wanted to have a chorus with it but all in all enjoyable
    i'm a prolly expand on this concept

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