The Sun

[Dark Matter]

Overseer in orbit, central star body enormous/
My power generated, children below absorb it/
Sustaining all life with simple energy emitted/
All powerful father, sight even resists to glimpse this/
Sole controller of the system, egocentric as ever/
Attempt to get close to me, I commence as a shredder/
Clever with any endeavor deadly defense calculated/
The propensity of my intensity is non debated/
Bully foremen inflicts torment on servants of Mother Nature/
Laugh at comedic tries to water the surface while I all day burn/
When will they learn I destroy plant matter at midday/
Yet few nourish prior to my arrival and assist in the slay/
Witness dismay as the frail Mother takes a lengthy beating/
And tries to use less of my energy just aren't succeeding/
With interweaving of gadgets held vital to civilization/
My micro selves managing the screens that they gaze in/
Perpetuating a cycle they swore never to continue/
But my genetics multiplied into beings is more than they can attend to/

[Guarded By Martyrs]

Witness dismay as the frail Mother takes a lengthy beating/
And tries to use less of my energy just aren't succeeding/
With interweaving of gadgets held vital to civilization/
My micro selves managing the screens that they gaze in/

Nice

[Dark Matter]

Nice

Thanks Whers! Always good to hear your thoughts on my rhymes. Much appreciated.

[Mantra]

Overseer in orbit, central star body enormous/
My power generated, children below absorb it/

Crazy

[Dark Matter]

Overseer in orbit, central star body enormous/
My power generated, children below absorb it/

Crazy

Thanks! Much appreciated. I try to get very intricate when painting a picture.

[Dark Matter]

The complete dart:


Overseer in orbit, central star body enormous/
My power generated, children below absorb it/
Sustaining all life, with simple energy emitted/
All powerful father, sight even resists to glimpse this/
Sole controller of systems, egocentric as ever/
Attempt to get close, I commence as a shredder/
Clever with any endeavor, deadly defense calculated/
The propensity of my intensity is non debated/
Bully foremen inflicts torment on servants of Mother Nature/
Laugh at comedic tries to water surface while I all day burn/
When will they learn I destroy plant matter midday?/
Few nourish prior my arrival assisting the slay/
Witness dismay, the frail Mother takes a lengthy beating/
Tries to use less of my energy just aren’t succeeding/
With interweaving of gadgets vital to civilization/
My micro selves managing the screens they gaze in/
Perpetuating a cycle swore never to continue/
Genetics multiplied to beings, is more than they can attend to/
Masculinity secured, I desert visually/
Pursue the enemy emerged, lurking to shadow my divinity/

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

very fucking dope

[Rev Jones]

The complete dart:


Overseer in orbit, central star body enormous/
My power generated, children below absorb it/
Sustaining all life, with simple energy emitted/
All powerful father, sight even resists to glimpse this/
Sole controller of systems, egocentric as ever/
Attempt to get close, I commence as a shredder/
Clever with any endeavor, deadly defense calculated/
The propensity of my intensity is non debated/
Bully foremen inflicts torment on servants of Mother Nature/
Laugh at comedic tries to water surface while I all day burn/
When will they learn I destroy plant matter midday?/
Few nourish prior my arrival assisting the slay/
Witness dismay, the frail Mother takes a lengthy beating/
Tries to use less of my energy just aren’t succeeding/
With interweaving of gadgets vital to civilization/
My micro selves managing the screens they gaze in/
Perpetuating a cycle swore never to continue/
Genetics multiplied to beings, is more than they can attend to/
Masculinity secured, I desert visually/
Pursue the enemy emerged, lurking to shadow my divinity/

ill as fuck, both on a technical and on a content level

[Dark Matter]

very fucking dope

ill as fuck, both on a technical and on a content level

Thank you both, the props are very much appreciated. It's feedback like this, that strengthens my trust in my intuition.