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    Chameleon coded, blend with surroundings/
    Energy's noted, every time a sound rings/
    Stored in mental banks ears absorb information/
    Walls hear what you think with no warned indication/
    Your greatest fear or your worst enemy/
    Make a statement clear, and the word’s sent to me/
    Observing for centuries, data learned is pent in me/
    Til eventually I'm dismembered and a memory/
    Grown with age, spirits accumulate/
    A past experience that assumes a shape/
    And through it states a portion of history/
    That's microscopic to the stories equipped to me/
    A sheepish betrayal, or death of a lover/
    I hone secrets and details that are never uncovered/
    Clinging to my confines is the drawn line/
    A walls lips never speak what a wall finds/

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    I like it. the beat & the way you flow on this track make it seem mechanical (I mean that in a good way, it pulls me into the song)

    btw I'm a bit confused as to your identity, I think you changed your name like two months ago but I don't remember who you were before sorry lol

    anyways good track
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    Quote Originally Posted by 5th state View Post
    I like it. the beat & the way you flow on this track make it seem mechanical (I mean that in a good way, it pulls me into the song)

    btw I'm a bit confused as to your identity, I think you changed your name like two months ago but I don't remember who you were before sorry lol

    anyways good track

    Thanks, man! That is one of my more experimental works. The mechanical perspective shapes it in a whole new light for me, I'd never thought of it that way; ah the joy of interpretation, haha.

    This one is a recent collab over one of my more traditional boom-bap productions, I close out the track with my verse: https://soundcloud.com/whiterymo/theartofzen

    I am formerly known as "Young Gun", haha. I'd been meaning to change my identity for years, but never realized it had to be done by request until recently.

    Thanks again for the support though, man. I put my heart into my work, and I'm glad the vibes transmitted are felt.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dark Matter View Post
    Chameleon coded, blend with surroundings/
    Energy's noted, every time a sound rings/
    Stored in mental banks ears absorb information/
    Walls hear what you think with no warned indication/
    Your greatest fear or your worst enemy/
    Make a statement clear, and the word’s sent to me/
    Observing for centuries, data learned is pent in me/
    Til eventually I'm dismembered and a memory/
    Grown with age, spirits accumulate/
    A past experience that assumes a shape/
    And through it states a portion of history/
    That's microscopic to the stories equipped to me/
    A sheepish betrayal, or death of a lover/
    I hone secrets and details that are never uncovered/
    Clinging to my confines is the drawn line/
    A walls lips never speak what a wall finds/
    dopeness and great wordplay, etc.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dark Matter View Post
    liking it
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    Quote Originally Posted by 5th state View Post
    liking it
    Quote Originally Posted by SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS View Post
    dopeness and great wordplay, etc.

    Peace to you both! Much respect and appreciation for the feedback.

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    And through it states a portion of history/
    That's microscopic to the stories equipped to me/ ft guff
    A sheepish betrayal, or death of a lover/
    I hone secrets and details that are never uncovered/
    Clinging to my confines is the drawn line/
    A walls lips never speak what a wall finds/[/QUOTE

    My favorite bars!



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Quote Originally Posted by J.T.S. View Post
    And through it states a portion of history/
    That's microscopic to the stories equipped to me/ ft guff
    A sheepish betrayal, or death of a lover/
    I hone secrets and details that are never uncovered/
    Clinging to my confines is the drawn line/
    A walls lips never speak what a wall finds/[/QUOTE

    My favorite bars!

    Thank you! I try my best to be sharp with the captivating detail.

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