UNdissPUTED vs. Verbatim (UNdissPUTED WINS)

[UNdissPUTED]

Back in da WuCorp game

anyone wanna step up?
1 round
16 lines (8 bars) max
no bitin, etc...
first to 3 votes wins

CHALLENGER SETS IT OFF

[Verbatim]

got some free time, so i'll step up to the challenge, whats good?

[UNdissPUTED]

Set it off Verbatim, let's do this

[Verbatim]

aite i'll set it off...


They call me Verb, short for Verbatim
When I battle you, the crowd yells "D@MN! VERB ATE HIM"
you call yourself undisputed?
homey, i say prove it
change your name to alicia silverstone dog you clueless
I dis anybody, dont even know who this dude is
i'm the sh!t, you might call me the dung
but your girl calls me an idol reject, she says i'm "WELL Hung"
dont even know why you thought you could step in my direction
your whole style disfunctional like CANADIAN elections
don't ever try to try me in the rap game
cuz on the real you givin your country a bad name
i'm so FLY, i need a passport when i walk
verb's not afraid to leave an mc outlined in chalk
your styles are garbage, and i'm charles S. Dutton
you couldnt ROC with me if you were stacey dash's cousin!

[Verbatim]

dude dips out after i drop the verse...convenient. all good, still patiently waiting

[PHENIX]

DAAAAAAAMN!!!!!! Verbatim dont do him like that.lol

[Verbatim]

lol, its my first battle on here, so i had to come with a lil somethin. he may have somethin for me tho...thats the problem with spittin first, but its all good.

[MASTER PAI MEI]

UNdissPuted your up

[UNdissPUTED]

It's called school bros...I go there during the day...

AIGHT

This guy reps no country yet he tries to diss my residence,
With as many quality punches as there's been US female presidents.
I'm setting precedents, without the need for self-praise,
This guy loves himself so much he could give himself AIDS.
Like street cops in LA, I leave you’re head a bloody brain pool,
Cuz your rhyme scheme is complex like a poem from grade school.
You’re much like a wave pool with a flow so artificial,
And you’re just about as FLY as a Cold War missile.
Ref blow the whistle! Verb’s in need of a nurse,
He’s “the shit” and he proved it with that shit stain of a verse.
Meanwhile I reign in the verse, lyrics shining like Osiris,
Blinding Verb and infecting him with this venereal verbal virus.
You should never have tried ‘diss cuz you’re not on my radar,
This is how to own a punk without an 8th bar.

[UNdissPUTED]

VOTES PLEASE

Please include reasoning

[SlightlySlightedFan]

Those punches were sick! Cold war missile? Oh my god. Undissputed is maniacal.

[D-dub]

Nice battle motherfukez Verbatim brought the heat but UNdissPUTED set the shit on fire with his word play,flow and punches.P.S" i'm so FLY, i need a passport when i walk" i still thought that was ill .keep up da good battles.

[Robert]

Undissputed easy, the wordplay was good with some quality multi's in there, and the punches? On another level compared to Verbatim.....
Vote=Undissputed
peace

[UNdissPUTED]

Good battle Verbatim...

3 votes to 0 = K.O.

Thanks for the voting and comments Jamel The Prophet, D-dub, and SlightlySlightedFan...appreciated

Keep comments and votes coming anyways all

[Verbatim]

thats the trouble with goin first...

good battle anyway.


for those who are wonderin:

"your styles are garbage and I'm charles s. dutton
you couldn't ROC wit me if you were stacey dash's cousin!"

Charles S. Dutton is the actor who played a garbageman on the TV show "ROC", and Damon Dash is Stacey Dash's cousin.

savor it

peace and one love