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    Default lyrics for my up and coming song called reanimated axe fight

    i may at any time add more lyrics or make changes but these are the lyrics to pretty much the whole entire song enjoy :-P

    I’m trying to understand life as a better man
    I’m flying so fast and executing plans in a blue dodge ram
    the world’s in my hands like I have a hundred grand
    I sift through the sand like a girl with no pants that’s sitting on my lap
    first glance better chance I do it God damn
    I stimulate minds andI put them in a trance
    There’s more to this life than just random chance
    I will never finish last and I finally understand
    How to live the good life I’m such a good man
    Im beyond normal thoughts like I’m dancing really fast
    When my niggas need a chance I always lend a hand
    I snap really fast like a tan rubber band

    I’m always down to jam like a man with a flask
    I’m building up my band like I’m taking out the trash
    I’m spreading all this love girls don’t need to ask

    I come really fast then I’m gone in a flash
    Like the blast from a gun when the shit hits the fan
    There’s no where you can run when I run and bust caps
    I’m gonna die young your ass is grass I’m in command

    In the end I blow shit up that’s how I expand
    There’s no zen in growing up if you don’t take a chance
    I’m always in luck as I rush this dangerous path
    I don’t give a fuck I just laugh another laugh
    All the haters really suck they can kiss my fucking ass

    My shotties gonna bust nothing can withstand
    The bust of my slugs that I bust on demand
    I really have fun when I bust this to my fans
    I will kick your fucking ass then i open up a can
    Of woop ass for lunch then I paint it all black

    I never make a fuss I wash the sludge off my hands
    You know I’m really tough when I get smashed and pass exams
    I’m just a young buck that found my dad’s stash
    I’m really fucked up when I smoke all the grass
    When I’m stuck in a rut I just get some more cash
    I like to bust nuts on your rug and on your girl God damn
    I bust nuts on some drugs / my brain frys in a pan

    This songs so deluxe I’m the man Jackie chan

    I’m fast with my hands I land attacks on the man
    I smoke a lots of the glass and my birth wasn’t unplanned
    When I rap in the clubs it’s the law of the land /
    you know I like to stun and I’m loved by fans
    you know it’s true love when I’m about to be a dad
    Your just a sitting duck when I come to kick your ass
    I’m always on the run I don’t give a fuck or a damn
    Im such a fucking spazz when you trespass on my land
    You know you’ve been had when someone makes you sad

    You know I’d be there but my tanks out of gas
    I don’t need an affair it’s my girl I like to smash
    I’ve been gone for so long but I’m coming right back
    I’m a sweet puppy dog till I’m stabbed in the back
    Then its the wrath of Holy God if you ever make me mad
    Then it’s the blast of a bomb then your skulls busts in half
    I will drop this awesome song as fast as I can
    I like to mingle it’s so fun andwe always have a blast
    I like to giggle at the sun when the moon makes it black
    When I can’t see the sun and the winds at my back

    There’s little that I want I just need my girl bad
    she’s needed in the sack when i can’t breath
    Make her see she’s all that I need
    and imand stuck with my old hand makes me wanna weep
    We make a team from the old land
    It all turns to dust then it combusts with a match
    I think cops are really dumb I hope they don’t find my stash
    I’d rather take a walk than to run unless I need to make a dash
    I always stick with my blood family is all that I have
    I’ve never been mugged but I’ve lost all I’ve had
    I’m the man when I’m drunk and I can’t even stand

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    since i had posted this i started making minor changes i will let you all know when i update the lyrics the changes shouldn't take very much longer to complete. my phone just died so im gonna have a ciggarette and it should turn back on when i get back from my smoke then i can make these lyrics complete nigga peace
    Last edited by project tillogic; 11-14-2016 at 11:10 PM.

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    Well the structure is good its not complex or nothing tho vocab is also pretty simple stuff.not saying thats a bad thing i think on audio it will soind alright. Always try to expand
    My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
    More fly then everybody that wields luggage
    Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it

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    sorry guys i didnt realize how much more work i had to put into this song but atleast the first half is pretty much flawless but i swear to you all 4 pages will eventually be flawless for me writing lyrics is like programming computers and my style of writing music is like figuring out mathamatical equation i never learned bars or any thing like that i use a style of my own creation but im 31 and started writing lyrics when i was twelve and i didn't start rapping till 15 im a better lyricist than a rapper and im in a race playing fucking catch up doggies peace

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    this song is really evolving, ive been tweaking this bitch non stop since i released the first draft/ what i posted is not the final version not by a long shot/ the finshed product will be much more superior than what ive posted so far ive put so many hours of work into it since then ive made more changes and added more stuff more than i can count

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    “Where the Jedi courted power, the Sith lusted after it; where the Jedi believed they knew the truth, the Sith possessed it. Owned by the dark side, they ultimately became their knowledge.” -Darth Plagous

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    “To understand the dark side you must suffer through hardship and struggle.”
    ~Darth Bane

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    im controlled by the dark side but i live in the light side
    -projectillogic

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    I've been working on these lyrics a month and probably got 70 hours into them already now that's over double the hours than what I got in the posted version but I am getting close to the end of writing it exactly how it will be recorded over the beat it's a 3:30 second master verse finely designed specifically to the beat that's how long it's taking to do the whole song

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    if it takes that long, hang up the mic, you aint fit for the game

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    Quote Originally Posted by Brolic Child View Post
    if it takes that long, hang up the mic, you aint fit for the game
    The reason it's taking so long is because it's a 4 and a half minute verse it only takes 30 hours to do 3 30 second verses but that's only a minute and a half but 4 and half minutes is 3 times the length of what I have to normally write for a song so 30 hours times three is 90 hours and I'm at 100 and it takes a lot longer to make one long verse vs a bunch of little ones and the song is close to complete

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    This is song 31 and I lost a full cds worth and it has always taken me this long that's just how it works there's a reason rappers don't put out more than an album a year

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