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    Got the chorus and first two verses done for my newest song "on my way"

    I decided to post what i have finished cuz finishing the rest is not my top priority right now son

    intro - :0-:20


    verse - :20.645-1:01.935


    hook - 1:01.935-1:22.581p


    bridge - 1:22.581-1:32.903


    verse - 1:32.903-2:14.194


    hook - 2:14.194-2:34.839


    verse - 2:34.839-3:16.129
    Q
    hook - 3:16.129-3:36.774


    outro - 3:36.774-3
    Zero
    Yeah Yeah This is projectillogic 2017 here we come Baby Yeah
    Just give me some love cuz I do this like crack
    I'm back I'm back Baby I'm back


    Look i’ve Accomplished all this sick atomic astonishing shit
    Handle The Comic Strip with a flick I once gave a kiss to a fish
    I Light A Candle to the strip I don’t care about no bitch

    Sippin on some scizzor sip sipping on some sip
    Sippin on some scizzor I don't give a shit Just Look at the print

    I’m suppose to be the winner why would you flip
    Here's a tip why lie And don’t be a bitch

    Here we come once again straight from my mind I don’t try to pretend
    Why not be my friend for all Of time my rhymes won’t lie or relent.



    What you said is screwed in the head here’s the news why try I'm signEd IN revenge

    You have my pledge this will never happen again no more threats
    I will rise and Climb and speak from the dead I don't rhyme for pretend

    MeditationS made me wise I'm So fly I Don't cry from The heavenS I was sent
    It's great to be alivE And Don't be supriseD I was given aLl These giftS
    I be a pimp / I'm so slick


    __________________________

    Chorus

    I'm on my way playing thElse games
    my rhymes So insane im on a crazy train
    I'm on my way never going away
    fuck the breaks I'm coming On stage
    I'm on my way whatever you say
    I love All the fame It puts a smile on Myface
    I'm well on my Way superman in a caPe
    I'm becoming a great with my hands on the gate
    —--------------------------------


    we ride in Ferraris / I'm old school like atariS
    I've been writing sick rhymes since thE 90s On safaris
    I fight All Gnarly like I'm the army/ IMy no longer starving like IM Doing the farming
    Plus i'm better and charming ,/I'm slick like the rims On a Tricked out harly
    The rate at which I open my 3rd eye to some can be very alarming/I really like kate and she knows im a darling
    My dreams are more than half baked like desert cake frostin/bitch I'm the star of the party
    Im fast past the 5th grade hate /Compared to me yall Niggas Are still playing with your barbies
    I make rap great thats my fate/I'm not afraid to make mistakes on a date with the starving
    Writing me off would be a great big mistake/I'm expanding my army/ you can't disarm me

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    I like the 2nd verse better than the first its not bad for a audio tho
    My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
    More fly then everybody that wields luggage
    Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it

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