Dusk vs Sabinnchung ( DUSK WINS )

[oDoUoSoKo]

this time im good for it, 16 lines/bars

[oDoUoSoKo]

diggidy dusk kickin biggidy butt straight up and down the corpsite
ill poke out ya 3rd eye and blind ya foresight
this whores rite, im first to rhyme, to burst the words that work ya mind
stealin shine, or lying on your sig, whats a worster crime?
3rd could find u if camoflouged, army brat sabin
im a phat rappin fat bastard who camps in a black cabbin
rat stabbin, speaking of rat hows ya moms throat chung
soar when i stabbed it, we fucked like rabbits, left the choch stung
ur rhymes are dung far as i can tell, cuz i dont kno ya well
but ur not part of my crew, so fuck you and go to hell
rhymesayer, lyrical saber hung like horse, kung fu force
ull get blasted like your sig until i make u a wu corpse
ofcourse, u strut like a veteran but u just joined
meat me toe to toe, u a fruit and ill leave u wit crushed loins
get flipped like a- something that flips, u get the picture sabin
except the one that im the illest ny spigga rappin

[sabinnchung]

i'm your Final Destination, put you through a rocky ride
bear with me, shave ya chest n dip it, like a titty ride
i got you screaming Christopher Rios's name, "punish me"
"i rode bigger cocks and all the kids make fun of me"
you a disgrace to the rap game, at you, thugs clap they thangs
you wanna change? make you over like movie acts, damne
you one ugly fuck like an elephant man, define that
you got a deficiency thats why you act thug in school, find your cock

i rip it like Shredder, got more soldiers then the Chinese badlands
poor fuck, i'm your hero, find me cash in man, blind your 1 n only fan
got her on my cock faster then kids seeing Chicken Little
i know your jealous, bitter when i'm shitten, bicker when i'm spitten
leave ya head peice hangin, you soft, i left you for dead, peace, i'm hangin
ya girl disses you like your the last man on earth, ugly, i leave ya hangin
none of us get your purpose, you ain't KRS either, bitch scream Roxanne
you a punk on a the boards, Nerd's stick together, prick, dreams bout cocks man

something quick for Dusk

edit bye. votes plz

[Philosophe]

I liked some of dusk's punches ("blind ya foresight" "wu corpse") and you maintained the flow nicely.
Chung, I thought you showed some promise but the flow kept falling off to me plus there were really any standout punchlines/personals

I'mma vote for Dusk on this one. Nice battle.

NOT ENOUGH POSTS TO VOTE- bigben

[the funky drunk]

yeah yeah not a bad battle ...

dusk got this tho .. punch's .. was more of em and they were more creative

both had flow , but dusk was more consistent widdit ...

peace and props

PLEASE USE THE GUIDELINES TO VOTE -bigben

[Verbatim]

Dusk gets my vote on the strength of the wordplay with sabins own name...

army brat sabin
im a phat rappin fat bastard who camps in a black cabbin
rat stabbin, speaking of rat hows ya moms throat chung
soar when i stabbed it, we fucked like rabbits

vote = dusk

[Wallabee_God]

Good shit from the both of ya, My vote is wit Dusk
The rhymes went together slightly better, jus sounded a little more battle style than sabinnchung's

Vote = Dusk

PLEASE USE THE GUIDELINES TO VOTE -bigben

[MASTER PAI MEI]

Most of them votes don't count nothing was explained Verbatim's vote counts only

[Treazon]

it seemed to me like both of these verses were pretty on-the-spot so i wont take credit off for that... either way Dusk flowed much better, lots of rhyming syllables to keep it going and he had more punches, and was more personal (quote:section Verbatim put)... sabin's first verse was better than his second and alot of his stuff didnt rhyme all that well even tho what he was saying was good, probably coming from rushing...

im not gonna do a whole checklist because Dusk covers mostly all of them..

vote: Dusk.

peace

[MASTER PAI MEI]

2-0 Dusk

[oDoUoSoKo]

this seems a bit ridikulus, u didnt count all of those victorys cuz of that?

listen, we went a very long time wit out all this crap man, if they give a least a reason, ex: nice wordplay, stronger punches, then i think thats good enuff

wucorp seems like its changin for the werst

[oDoUoSoKo]

btw u have the biggest sig on the site man, thats bs

[Treazon]

i kinda agree..i mean the more explained the votes have to be, the less votes we'll be able to count.. i think a few sentences is enough, unless none of it makes sense and its clearly a dickrider vote..

peace

[cap]

flow -dusk
wordplay -dusk
creativity -dusk
vocabulary -dusk
punches -dusk

dusk got this man,plain and simple.
better in all ways.
dude is nice,and always comes hard.
keep it up.

[hollywoodrealty]

once again this wasnt one of my favorite dusk votes, but he still beat his challenger, sabin's rhyme was a bit all over the place, one day he shows his lyrical talent, and other days he drops something that is below average, which sabin will show up next, who knows, but for now i say dusk took this one bcuz he had structure atleast, but here is the breakdown.....


sabinchungs:

flow 5
wordplay 5
creativity 5
vocabulary 5
punches 5


dusk:

flow 7
wordplay 7
creativity 6.5
vocabulary 7
punches 7


dusk did enough to win, but i wanna see better rhymes, even if the person who challenged u doesnt drop something that great, i wanna read a verse from dusk and be blown away, but once again dusk took this one