UNdissPUTED vs. Hollow Dartz ( UNdissPUTED WINS )

[UNdissPUTED]

1 verse each
8 bars (16 lines) max.
House voting rules (short explanation)
No dickriding votes

You know the deal,

Set it off Hollow

[Hollow Dartz]

I don't need no gun to split ya wig, watch these dartz I got I bust em' Hollow to ya head/
You ran out of luck steppin' to me, decapitate ya head , now u lookin like a chopped wilderbeast/
you can't see me but this ain't wrestling , blow ya thinking cap off nigga have u guessing/
you should've learned ya lesson after the first line, fuckin with mine is like tryna stop the sunshine/
if u want war bring it we can put it on wax like candles, ya crew get dismantled, have ya ashes sittin on the mantle/
u can't handle the kid im wild like a loose cannon, my rhymes will have u stranded, u feel like u on another planet/
u at a disadvantage, nigga this ain't spanish , i'm speaking clear, like leftovers u can have it/
fell like u had a crash landing, after im landing, these dartz over brain ya scattered, u shouldve followed ya manners, now u a target for the cannon/

Hey what up I didn't get to introduce my self to you. My name is Hollow Dartz......

[MASTER PAI MEI]

I'm checking in...Lets Get tHIS SHIT gOING!!

[UNdissPUTED]

With a lyrical scalpel in hand I begin this kid’s dissection,
I’ve seen tighter rhymes than his in a newspaper’s business section.
Hollow shouldn’t be textin, cuz if he had skill he’s now lost it,
That tangled ass verse flowed like an outdoor Arctic faucet.
I rewound played and paused it, but your rhymes didn’t make sense to me,
I’ve got such a “leg up” on Dartz you can call me a centipede.
That verse you sent to me was primitive like a clay pot,
You couldn’t “split a wig” with a knife in a toupee shop.
This gay’s got battle wit like bareback riders have saddle fit,
He can’t handle diss’ with his style as boring as soil analysts.
This man is just, not gonna get votes like John Kerry,
With grammar taken straight from a Made In Compton dictionary.
Like Pictionary, this battle has been “drawn out”,
You set yourself up for ridicule like an Asian with his dong out.
Dartz didn’t have a strong bout so I’ma keep my clean slate,
I just ate this Philadelphian like a Philly cheese steak.

[UNdissPUTED]

------------votes Please-------------

[Hollow Dartz]

lol, u got me....votes please

[CREEPY FOLLOWS]

Quit talking shit about overseas mc's and come to T.O. if you got heart to say that shit bitch!! I'll eat your food on a verse anytime anyplace. Then I'll get a bunch of homies to breakdance on your fuckin head! Tell me when you wanna battle faggot.

[Liquid Lines]

Shit...this was pretty close.
flow - closest one giving it too....UNdissPUTED
wordplay -Hollow Darts
creativity - Hollow Darts "fuckin with mine is like tryna stop the sunshine"
vocabulary - UNdissputed used words wit more syllables
punches - gotta go to UNdissPUTED


UNdissPUTED for my vote

[CREEPY FOLLOWS]

------------votes Please-------------

UNdissPUTED gets my vote top to bottom, word. Up-north rippin shit for sho, but I wanna get at dude for that weak comment about overseas rappers.

[hollywoodrealty]

ok here is my vote, i hate to do this to hollow darts, but even he admitted that undisputed got him, but for voting sake here is the breakdown

undisputed:

flow 8
wordplay 8
creativity 8.5
vocabulary 8
punches 8.5


hollow dartz:

flow 6
wordplay 7
creativity 7
vocabulary 7
punches 7


i feel hollow forced this rhyme a lil bit, but that happens to the best of us, so undissputed gets my vote, peace ya'll

[UNdissPUTED]

So I guess that's 3 votes to 0 for me

Seriously good battle Hollow Dartz, and nice verse (the sunshine line was ill)

THANKS for the votes yall -> Liquid Lines, CREEPY FOLLOWS, and hollywoodrealty

Peace

[CREEPY FOLLOWS]

I'll watch your whole world fall apart/
that shitty verse from HOLLOW DARTZ/
ain't equivalent to one of CREEPY FOLLOW's farts/
so fuck your combos and punchlines, you ain't shit/
you probably convo with wontime, a true plain snitch/
I'll backsmack ya till you catch asthma/
this fuckin backpack rapper 'll get stabbed in his bladder with a black dagger/
sliced with a boxcutter/
this cocksucker/
'll get placed in a box like a dvd from Blockbuster/
you stupid ignoramus, son of a bitch/
sperm in your anus is the only way you comin with shit/
dissin overseas mc's, don't get me mad/
'cause I'll make you feel more unwanted than your deadbeat dad/
so quit biting all that WU-TANG slang/
go and call the ku klux klan 'cause over here you can't hang/
so holla back at me and respond to the fight/
but if I'm not back it means I'm with your mom for the night!

[oDoUoSoKo]

lol ur good^^^

but i dont think theyll count ur vote creepy, cuz u didnt use the guidelines, so since thats the case..i got u un

flow - un
wordplay -un
creativity - un
vocabulary - un
punches - un

u got this 1 dude, mos def better structured and thought out

[oDoUoSoKo]

plus ur post count

[UNdissPUTED]

thanks Dusk, I didn't even realize that...peace