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    Lightbulb andrem thread: Divine Thoughts ( Official thread )

    The necromancer lancer throws darts of sharp grass
    That ruptures your molecular structure like an atomic blast
    Infected with cancer that erases your neurotransmitters
    Fast, he sifts through your life like the sands of an hour glass
    Like victims of Nagasaki, your flesh peels from your frame
    Wielding double Wakisashis I lacerate your cell membranes
    My words cause thermal flash; severe burns put you to shame
    Quintuple spinning kicks with heavenly force mash your brain
    My thought capacity defies gravity tactically
    Maliciously, breaking your back disguised chiropractically
    Vapidly rapping competitors fall rapidly
    Wrapped in plastic, cast in caskets casually
    Eventually, all will grasp my intentions
    Divine intervention from hidden dimensions
    Mentions wrathful henchmen, who entice your apprehension
    So pay attention, as I slice right through your tendons
    With mic cords, I bring jews to exodus
    Crippling opponents with back kicks from pegasus
    The microphone whips that slits through your esophagus
    strangle ya and mangle ya jugular ya oblivious



    Yo I spit rattlesnake venom, the battles already won
    When I splatter your matter atop a platinum platter with a Gatling gun
    Your life’s done, if you lack a lyrical tongue you left hung
    Then awake in the body of a chicken with your neck wrung
    Your plan is foiled coiled in a boa constrictor’s toils
    Foolish mortal you spit shit like a child that’s spoiled
    I’m stone cold, like artic subsoil
    But my spit boils like gargoyles gargling hot oil
    My inner ki, summons valkyries,
    That cast thou from high balconies,
    Foreign galaxies, receive casualties,
    Sending warriors to earth who try and abolish me,
    My mind and soul in a state of peace and harmony,
    I remove aliens’ knees from they gi’s in this theomachy
    And those who have not ran from me
    Will witness the horrific vision of a theranthropy
    Through Zen meditation, my mind is ataraxic
    Commence suffocation as you bind my skin with elastic plastic
    Intense concentration as I call on Kuan Yin the measures are drastic
    Hence my formation has shifted to sanchin combining your limbs with mastics
    I’ve transformed you with verbal antics; your atomic makeup is now plasmic
    Last edited by andrem; 03-07-2006 at 09:23 PM.

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    Phew!! Ill everything man, you really got Text on LOCK :P

    fa real flawless drop

    good read
    My skills punish, you untill ya grills rubbish, make ya cry like peeled onions More electrifying. Then a eels touch is, got a girl thats real luscious Eat these rappers for real like sealed lunches More bad ass than a navy seals gun is
    More fly then everybody that wields luggage
    Im the beer clutchin career crushin fear nothin fierce one with...sheers cuttin blood spills gushin no need to worry bout the wounds cuz u wont heal from it

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    let me get some more feedback from all of you
    ratings too

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    anyone else?

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    Causing my defeat is an impossible feat/
    I’m from the streets all offensive attempts are obsolete/
    think you top dog, y’all just bitches/
    I spit with the heat of apocalypse
    leaving time without stitches
    divine forces/ maintaining planetary orbit/
    souls trapped in corpses/ paralyzed with Rigor mortis/
    I take flight like Horus, impale evil with horns of Taurus/
    winged horses burning through demons with gods torches/
    The Orphic Greek choruses enacting an anamorphosis
    The immortal sorceress/ who battles tyrannosauruses/
    If you too feeble/ he makes ya skin poreless
    Snitches struck down by tails of Stegosauruses/

    The Zen swordsman/ I see the light without distortion/
    Holy spirits contortion your fortune like an abortion/
    My mind flows/ with lyrical swords that chop through porcelain/
    Enter my circle, you get cut up into several portions
    Warriors of Odin/ show you death with sublime motions/
    The god of poets/ twisting reality with narcotic potions/
    Norse horsemen/ bury the wicked in seven oceans/
    My words are potent/ with precision I devastate all opponents/
    My style is mythological/ I make the illogical possible/
    Prodigal thinkers dwell in the realm of the psychological/
    Those born philosophical/ combine the spiritual and neurological/
    The wise man truly knows that materials are merely obstacles/
    Most humans/ stay blinded by life’s illusions/
    Choosin’ the gold road that beholds a false conclusion/
    The blind phantasm/ sees light through his third eye
    Harnessing ki/ with the way of kenshikai/
    A drifting apparition/ envisions the world’s dishonor/
    His position in existence/ is detached from samsara/
    not even the Bible/ the Torah/ nor the koran could bring nirvana
    he must be freed/ from the trap of attachments like Siddhartha
    Last edited by andrem; 03-27-2006 at 01:04 PM.

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    You got origional style and a real unpredictable flow... not to mention a vast vocabulary... Some lines are a bit long tho,,,, I found myself rushing them to stay on beat... but your shits interesting to read and real visual... keep droppin the heat homie

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    vocabulary is DOPE!!! ....mad skillz... 1 of the best ive seen so far

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    The Zen swordsman/ I see the light without distortion/
    Holy spirits contortion your fortune like an abortion/
    My mind flows/ with lyrical swords that chop through porcelain/
    Enter my circle, you get cut up into several portions
    Warriors of Odin/ show you death with sublime motions/
    The god of poets/ twisting reality with narcotic potions/
    Norse horsemen/ bury the wicked in seven oceans/
    My words are potent/ with precision I devastate all opponents/
    My style is mythological/ I make the illogical possible/
    Prodigal thinkers dwell in the realm of the psychological/
    Those born philosophical/ combine the spiritual and neurological/
    The wise man truly knows that materials are merely obstacles/
    Most humans/ stay blinded by life’s illusions/
    Choosin’ the gold road that beholds a false conclusion
    The blind phantasm sees light through his third eye
    Harnessing ki with the way of kenshikai
    A drifting apparition who envisions the world’s dishonor
    His position in existence is detached from samsara
    I like your style Andrem, this is my favourite verse so far. The zen buddhist and budo imagery with your unorthodox flow really caught my eye...will definitely check out more of your verses...Keep the ink flowin'

    ONE LOVE

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    Foolish men who attack in combat with the force of destructive energy/
    Spill blood on they own gi, cause I redirect the Ki/
    Electromagnetic entities that have haunted for several centuries/
    Lack existence/ like the numeric systems of Aborigines/
    None can picture me /
    Cause I don’t have a physical frame/
    You can barely cause me pain/ cause I’m constructed of flames/
    Unobstructed by baneful actions wrought from plague/
    Lost in thought subtracted from subconscious fragments
    Of demonic accents originating from shame/

    Reflected in the Koran as evil deities called jinni/
    Anger/ infects all souls like Mussolini/
    Watch for serpents/ but welcome the cobra of Kundalini/
    I free the mind of shackles and straitjackets like Houdini/
    The escape artist/ flees from egotistical entrapment/
    By accident/ signed the tax contract and lost traction/
    On reality/ the specifics of your existence is a fallacy
    In actuality/ consciousness is interplanetary like gravity/
    Throughout the galaxy/ majesty sees harmony in human anatomy/
    I’d have to be/ the visionary mc who finds universal chastity/
    Sittin’ on Mt. Olympus writin’ scriptures with divine faculty/

    Transform bone to paper/
    rip ya with ease to pieces/ later/
    ya heart ceases/ exhale dark matter vapor/
    skeletal structure ruptured from darth vader saber/
    That punctured exhausted lungs of a tapered creator/
    Don’t be a hater/ sinful suasion is needed to balance life’s equations/
    Dagon’s creations/ deteriorated from spiritual abrasions/
    Have patience/ conquer haste/ virtuous in the eyes of sages
    Ancient mages/ that witnessed earth’s first stages to the middle ages/
    Prophets claim god’s word/ scriptin holy scrolls and pages/
    Crusade of the fallen angels/ souls splintered from shrapnel left mangled/
    I’m untangled from Mara’s web/ mind serene and tranquil/
    Last edited by andrem; 04-10-2006 at 11:14 PM.

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    feedback anyone?

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    yo, could yall read this and give some feedback please

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    !!!!das sum dope rhymes!! ya vocabulary is amazin....an u hav 1 of the best flows ive seen on here so far....keep it up
    Battle-scarred shogun, explosion when my pen hits
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    I'm about to swich up my style and content for this one

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    The white man covers face with charcoal paste/
    Attempts to erase black culture like vultures devour waste/
    A foolish man with no pride meets death with haste/
    The black panthers paw claws/ some crows are defaced
    But replaced with the skin of ravens/
    Claiming innocence like the façade of maidens/
    The cousin of craven seeks shelter in caves and havens/
    Some sayin’/ segregation is as ancient as Dagan/
    So how come society’s still laden/
    With separated housing/ mad issues arousing/
    Hurricane Katrina left hearts pounding by the thousands
    It’s confounding/ how the voices of racism keep rebounding/
    Reverberating through the streets, police sirens is sounding/

    Rappers like Big L, Jay-Z, Nas, and Sean Price/
    Speak against concepts propelled by actions of Daddy Rice/
    Which deprived African Americans of they civil rights
    And essentially defined blacks as inferior to whites/
    From the Bed Stuy projects to Brownsville to Crown Heights/
    Brooklyn’s clearly divided like a cookie that’s Black and White/
    The beautiful sights/ stained with blood from pastry fights/
    This ain’t a bakery rap; it’s a metaphor for racial war/
    Corruption’s fundamental core/ starts with Columbian drug lords/
    America supplies narcotic products to projects/ Coke cut up with legal swords
    In the quarters of Bush’s daughters/ and legislative boards could care less/
    The systems’ designed so the white man fares best/
    Explain how the country sees the human species as equal/
    Gowanus projects/ surrounded by a river of feces and sunken people/
    Howard Beach/ battalions of Italians/ un- stable like wild stallions
    The talons of crows and ravens spill black blood by the gallons/
    While falcons allied with lions protect medallions of valiance/
    New York lets raise the chalice we’ve overcome the hardest challenge/

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    anyone felin these lines?
    let me get some feedback on these

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