the reckoning day

[Frank Drebin]

Rappers these days polluting your brain like the devil but im bringing wisdom thats on another level. what the fuck is going on in the world today where us brothers are still slaves, people still dieing of aids and God's children are still going astray, from the plan that He created, the world has deviated, the devil has invaded the common man, fucking homos like man loving man, in the beginning God created Adam and Eve now this devils wanna be more like Adam and Steve, Ill bury you with my mental, Ive been given the power to battle with sublimal thoughts, you devils wanna battle me it'll be a first round knockout like 1 2 3. Theres no fight I cant win whether its great or small cause with the power of the Lord ill make mountains fall, the Lord of All will judge your soul on the day of reckoning, the wicked will pay, and the holy, will forever live in God's glory

This is from my little brother he wants to know if its any good. I think hes alright

[GuardianOne]

Nice verse, and was with the point, but needs to be a bit more explicit, the rhymes are a bit formal, but was working on the world stage topics. Want to see more posts from him and you.

Why can't he is invited to the temple here (why can't he join)?

Peace

[Frank Drebin]

Nice verse, and was with the point, but needs to be a bit more explicit, the rhymes are a bit formal, but was working on the world stage topics. Want to see more posts from him and you.

Why can't he is invited to the temple here (why can't he join)?

Peace

Because he starts running his mouth. Plus I want him to study hard at school first. He doing school and rhyming so he doin alright. He really pleased with that feedback. I post some of my shit and some more of his up here soon peace

[GuardianOne]

Because he starts running his mouth. Plus I want him to study hard at school first. He doing school and rhyming so he doin alright. He really pleased with that feedback. I post some of my shit and some more of his up here soon peace

True, in this world education is important, and exceling in it-with decent grades. But also rhymes assist the personal being. But much respect for your stance, he needs to be directed in the proper thing required for a decent lifestyle (at least).
We expect more of your posts and his!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Like KRS One (Knowledge Reigns Supreme)

Peace