open challenge from a amatuer battler

[Visionz]

if that was in response to Blu, ya just murdered him....and Blu I know ur young so just take it as advice to leave jokes u heard on the street outta battles, if you heard 'em so has everyone else. Originallty goes a long way. Yo, Suicide nice verse especially when considerin age...
endure the addiction, probably could metion,
hardcore gangstas, spend time in penitations,(tight cause its the truth, and nice how u changed the word up to fit the rhyme scheme)

my shit is all up in yo face like a criminal case,
like a jury judging you sad to see the long face,(nice imagery, but watch urself to avoid being redundant w/ your vocab, endure, endure, face, face) just some pointers homie, ya got talent and a good sense of flow so keep it up. peace

[hollywoodrealty]

ya this is hard, knock had good flow, but it just seemed like he used a line or 2 that i might of heard ina rap song, so didnt seem so original, on the other hand, infiniti had a rough 1st 4 lines, but the last 6 were very ill, so ima go with infiniti on this one, vote infiniti