Tournament verse never dropped

[Visionz]

This was gonna be the tournament verse I was about to drop on KingShyt but he's been MIA for a while and we're movin on. I thought everyone in here might still want to peep it and I don't want it to go to total waste. Feedback is always welcome. peace

The ATX assassin, my mindset is methodical/
No outlastin me, the motivation is psychological/
A Leatherface encased in pressurized chambers/
I break out the chainsaw to standardize danger/
Cliffhangin w/ the votes?Nope, I grip mics the same way I grab throats/
Orangutangin chokes that yoke, windpipe's chance of survial remote
Challenger here claims to be King,but the shitty crown's covered in rust/
Amatuer ass remains 'Queen', cuz 'another one bites the dust',
I'm a Royal Flush, couldn't be touched if you had 4 kings
More evil on the mic than Sauron w/ the One Ring
I swing swords to dismember body parts, impale hearts
Causin havoc like September, it's my art to spit the deadliest darts
Injected venomous incisions, murdered compeition so there's no decision
Respected laser-optic percision,deadly rendentions with Cyclops's vision/
Projected pictures on mental movie screens,call in Spoken, you're gonna need the tag-team/
Your rejected scriptures don't make no scenes, only provoken props come from a fag team
Wanted to be King but it you just 'had a dream'
The silent killer puntcures your lung so no ones hears u scream
I'm the murderous mentality lurking in the shadows,
Come out the darkness to turn comps red like Colorado
I suspend fools in their living rooms wrapped in piano wire
Slowing dripping blood into a puddle till your life stream exipires
I decide when you retire and I'm taking that crown
Put it on the back of my toilet to remind myself of how I throw shit down

[ilzPotent]

omega...



this place is starting to look like its old self again.

[UNdissPUTED]

it's a shame it kinda went to waste...nice verse, ending was strong

[Luther Large]

It's a very solid verse this brings back memories of the ill battles i was used to doing b4 the crash it was long but you managed to not play it out
overall everything from your vocab to punchlines was pretty solid your ending bar "Put it on the back of my toilet to remind myself of how I throw shit down" was ill too

[Visionz]

thanks to everyone for the feedback

[oDoUoSoKo]

omega...



this place is starting to look like its old self again.

i wish i cood agree, either way nice verse pa

[ilzPotent]

hey it's getting there slowly but surely.



hey we all started somewhere rye?


check your pms dude.

[$inista]

nice! indeed a strong ending

[WU-GC]

good verse indeed

[CREEPY FOLLOWS]

Yeah, verse was tight homie keep doin your thing

[CREEPY FOLLOWS]

Just a verse, no battling unless someone wants to go

CREEPY FOLLOWS, too hardcore for funny style/
down in the basement with two sharp swords and bloody bowels/
click da chainsaw and dismember your groin/
sever your spinal cord and leave you with the tenderset loin/
leave your tongue numb if I slap your face/
even Roberto Alomar couldn't "catch the taste"/
so like contortionists, don't get shit twisted/
I'll have you stuck in an orphanage with your kid sister/
machetes turn your guts to shreddies, when I slash ya spleen/
the bloodsquirts 'll turn your T.V. into a plasma screen/
so just fall back and lay down 'cause y'all ain't crazy/
most of y'all cats be gay clowns like John Wayne Gacy/
I'll kidnap a stripper, call me Jack the Ripper/
using pantyhose to strangle hoes, and stab with scissors/
get thrashed with each jook, teeth smashed and weed took/
beef cooked, weak rappers get hung from my meathooks!!