Tribe vs God Concept (VOTES NEEDED)

[T-ribe]

You think thats funny......
yeh I'll give you that round
wit a 4-0 shut out



Next round you set it off

Concept leads 1-0 wit two rounds left

[tha god concept]

the only time t-ribes hard is wit his little 3-inch errection
if he wins this battle the votes be rigged like the election
pull out his skeleton and stomp his dreams into gelitin
concepts never a gentlemen
t-ribe be irrelevant
i be mice to his elephant

he aint fuckin no1 like he selebit...son im wrekkin
wit raps so phat they cant be birthed without c-section
total perfection...when spittin darts
cut of all ya limbs n hang u on my wall to create art

concept spread seas apart....and drowns the weak
over flowing all tribes and streets
your now beneath
below my feet
watch me curb stomp this faggot and expose his meat
t-ribes a trick wit treats...but this aint october

scarin t-ribe like whisky to a alcoholic 1 year sober
nigga i told ya
ill break ya mind down rape it and mold ya

son u aint no battle mc i told ya twice
tribe be smilin when he reads this cause concepts nice
battlin these weak 1,2,3 a,b,c cats for a price
and thats they life
its a cold werld nigga im the inncubater to ya life

[T-ribe]

Concept B think'n he's drop'n jewles
Those is man made dimonds, rook
Inspect a dick, cuz...
U aint got a clue
What u gonna do stand'n 4foot2
You in the center of my square, God
Canniblistk rhymes got u cornered duk

Use ya rhyme structure ta lift ya skirt up
My rhymes is so cold they come with ear muffs
dez lyrics are infectious
Make ya break out in hives
Jesus Sr....what a fuckin concept
your livin a lie

Keep my lyrics explicit
and u keep rap'n for disney
Pull out ya 22.
I'll make u holy wit the semi
What an untimely death,and with no street cred
You wasn't feelin me
till I put 1 more hole in ya head

I told him 2 walk like a warrior
Yet and still he half steps
Warned him to fight like a man
Than he fell from the chin checks
Check it, this kat aint pussy
Dog is straight bitch
Come'n out of the closet
wit ya wig and lip stick.

AYo should I give you a 1-0 lead again
cuz there aint no way u beat me this round
Fuckin clown......(SMACK) Homie don't play dat!

[Classic]

the only time t-ribes hard is wit his little 3-inch errection
if he wins this battle the votes be rigged like the election
(Nice opener.)
pull out his skeleton and stomp his dreams into gelitin
concepts never a gentlemen
t-ribe be irrelevant
i be mice to his elephant
(Bleh, decent punch here.)
he aint fuckin no1 like he selebit...son im wrekkin
wit raps so phat they cant be birthed without c-section
(Good punch.)
total perfection...when spittin darts
cut of all ya limbs n hang u on my wall to create art
(Decent punch.)

concept spread seas apart....and drowns the weak
over flowing all tribes and streets
(Good play of name here. Decent punch.)
your now beneath
below my feet
watch me curb stomp this faggot and expose his meat
(Decent here.)
t-ribes a trick wit treats...but this aint october
scarin t-ribe like whisky to a alcoholic 1 year sober
(Good punch.)
nigga i told ya
ill break ya mind down rape it and mold ya
(Decent here.)
son u aint no battle mc i told ya twice
tribe be smilin when he reads this cause concepts nice
(Decent here.)



Concept B think'n he's drop'n jewles
Those is man made dimonds, rook
Inspect a dick, cuz...
U aint got a clue
(Kind of choppy here. I'd like some bar structure. At least, that's what I prefer. Bleh opener.)
What u gonna do stand'n 4foot2
You in the center of my square, God
Canniblistk rhymes got u cornered duk
(Decent punch.)
Use ya rhyme structure ta lift ya skirt up
My rhymes is so cold they come with ear muffs
(Half-decent, talk of yourself doesn't cut it in battles.)
dez lyrics are infectious
Make ya break out in hives
Jesus Sr....what a fuckin concept
your livin a lie
(Half-Decent here too.)
Keep my lyrics explicit
and u keep rap'n for disney
Pull out ya 22.
I'll make u holy wit the semi
(Decent here, tried wordplay with his name?)
What an untimely death,and with no street cred
You wasn't feelin me
till I put 1 more hole in ya head
(Decent here.)
I told him 2 walk like a warrior
Yet and still he half steps
Warned him to fight like a man
Than he fell from the chin checks
(Half-decent here.)
Check it, this kat aint pussy
Dog is straight bitch
Come'n out of the closet
wit ya wig and lip stick.
(Good punch here.)
AYo should I give you a 1-0 lead again
cuz there aint no way u beat me this round
Fuckin clown......(SMACK) Homie don't play dat!
(Okay, wasn't really structure here either. Some multies though. Half-decent.)

Vote - The God Concept.
God came stronger, wordplay of name, more consistent, harder punches, his verse was just overall better.
Tribe just needs to elevate some, make some harder punches. Wordplay his name man.
Make your battles a "Classic".

[T-ribe]

Votes needed

[T-ribe]

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[Slippy The Pimp]

Use ya rhyme structure ta lift ya skirt up
My rhymes is so cold they come with ear muffs
dez lyrics are infectious
Make ya break out in hives
Jesus Sr....what a fuckin concept
your livin a lie


I told him 2 walk like a warrior
Yet and still he half steps
Warned him to fight like a man
Than he fell from the chin checks
Check it, this kat aint pussy
Dog is straight bitch
Come'n out of the closet
wit ya wig and lip stick.

vs.

the only time t-ribes hard is wit his little 3-inch errection
if he wins this battle the votes be rigged like the election
pull out his skeleton and stomp his dreams into gelitin
concepts never a gentlemen
t-ribe be irrelevant
i be mice to his elephant(what are your trying to say here?)

concept spread seas apart....and drowns the weak
over flowing all tribes and streets
your now beneath
below my feet
watch me curb stomp this faggot and expose his meat(second time you brought gay shit into the rhyme,exposeing a man's meat? plus hows a mouse gonna stomp out an elephant, shit just don't add up)
t-ribes a trick wit treats...but this aint october

I think tribe brought a more solid verse this round-

Vote T-ribe

[tha god concept]

mice 2 his elephant cause ....... cause elephants are scared of mice

curb stomp and expose his meat........u must no what a fuckin curb stomp is....his meat bein the flesh that gets exposed after the stomp

[tha god concept]

anyway votes.....

[T-ribe]

1 up
Good lookin on the vote God

[tha god concept]

1-1 votes..........

[CREEPY FOLLOWS]

concept sucks, simple as that, you're weak babyboy, just fall back and quit while you're ahead, don't get yourself in some shit you can't handle

[CREEPY FOLLOWS]

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T-ribe gets my vote

[RockD]

Tribe gets my vote his retaliation was not only a good defense against your claim but he dished out str8 poison aswell.

great verse by both mc's but vorte goes to T

Vote - T-ribe

[hazidus hitman]

wordplay-god
punches-god
creativity-tie
vocab-T
flow-god


vote: tha god concept

to me his lyrics were more direct, decent flows, made more sense, used metaphors correctly. good battle by both tho
keep it up!