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    I haven't dropped anything here for aaaages so heres an old song i wrote about me bitching about other rappers, any feedback will be appreciated



    {Chorus x2}
    Like working at MCdonalds i French fry rappers
    I'm talking about the gangstas and the Hentai jackers
    After i spit this verse you’ll seem ten times wacker

    Verse 1 (16 lines)
    Yo, here’s some food for thought, you weak geaks..
    You're feces, don’t try to use the force to beat me
    You nerds are never better with your star-trek steez
    Spit whatevers clever, like it's a smart Technique
    YOU don’t even know what you're bitching about
    You just wait for net-beef like you're fishing for cows
    I figured you out, you got down right blind minds
    Fuck you square-mcs that try to sound like Einstein
    Like your sharpest knife in the box, you're measly
    Tryna be raw, typing your thoughts on your pc
    You hibernate in cyberspace with foolish shit talk
    The kind that hates and violates the rules of hip hop
    Ya shits on the inter-net like a swimmer with diarrhea
    Thinking your intellects, don’t give a shit bout the pioneers

    These type of rappers are coming up globally
    You nerds are so boring sheep count you to go to sleep

    {Chorus x2}
    Like working at m.cdonalds i French fry rappers
    I’m talking about the ganstas and the Hentai jackers
    After i spit this verse you’ll seem ten times wacker

    Verse 2 (34 lines)
    You chocolate rappers are Kornier than Limp Bizket
    But you clones keep coming up like your infinite
    Killers, crack dealers, and all you rich gimmicks
    That rap about the dope game but never lived in it
    And your 24 inch rims with things imprinted
    I could write all your albums in less than 10 minutes
    You rap about the same shit how, your a G for life
    Even if were a G you couldn’t be before I
    Cause I’m so bright that you cant even see me sun
    And you’re a fake thug that carries a bb gun
    Lyrically.. you rappers aint shit to me
    I’ll snap your gat in half if your c-c-click is weak
    But you aint really strapped, you’re just in a stricked school
    Your crap floats to the top like your shitting in pools
    Kids are thinking it's cool, they must be lunatics
    These stupid kids are even rocking g-unit kicks
    If you got dope beats they’ll play your candy vocals
    Even if you hide in your crib staying anti social
    Nowadays you don't even gotta earn respect
    If your wearing ice your cool, but i’ll burn your neck
    Eat a rapper, cough up the chain and floss my teeth
    You lossed the key to rap, i open the chamber forcefully
    You’re so shallow that you brag about your dick size
    If you were riding a bike you wouldn’t spit fly
    First you were a ghetto child, now you live the rich life
    What.. From selling Crack to Pedofiles and sick guys?
    Like the diaper you're wearing, you’re full of shit
    Pull ya wig when the bullets hit, give you a mullet bitch
    You talk on how you busting shots with the hammer
    But i know you be fucking cops with bannanas
    Change your socks, it smells like you work for the law
    You don’t have a phat crib, you knock door to door
    You can’t even arrange a range or afford a ford
    You travel with your trolly, cause you’re more than poor
    You never 'share', cause you're 'broker' than most
    So don't brag about your cash, cause right now..
    Locusts what dope..






    Copywrite © 2005 - 2006 Locust

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    thanks for the feed homie..
    yea i'll record it whenever i get a beat to go with it..
    i didn't know you produce.. that'd be sick if you could hook it up man, fo schnitzel lol..
    Last edited by Locust; 04-14-2006 at 07:17 AM.

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    word thanks, ill get at you with something by tomorrow

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    thats ill locust

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    thanks man..

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    how you come up with a chorus dude, I mean that chorus you used is pretty catchy, I got a few words written down now and I really can't think of a chorus for my shits

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    Came out from my lips beating the balls lol Pretty cool I have an idea "you should record this" [just foolin' around Sp0k3n ] But he's tallented, aren't he? To write the funny, a little bit weird TRUTH Man If I had born in USA... Damn! This ain't good... But you should hear what I can in my language... Breathin' the mic dust (for 6 months already) Where was I? Ah yeah... Locust - If all your rhymes are similar to this one - you're the genius GZA almost Keep up homie! {|> | 3 < 3}
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jay_Cross [7th sun]
    Came out from my lips beating the balls lol Pretty cool I have an idea "you should record this" [just foolin' around Sp0k3n ] But he's tallented, aren't he? To write the funny, a little bit weird TRUTH Man If I had born in USA... Damn! This ain't good... But you should hear what I can in my language... Breathin' the mic dust (for 6 months already) Where was I? Ah yeah... Locust - If all your rhymes are similar to this one - you're the genius GZA almost Keep up homie! {|> | 3 < 3}
    its like I dont understand any word lol

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    I like

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    Quote Originally Posted by Claustrofobic
    how you come up with a chorus dude, I mean that chorus you used is pretty catchy, I got a few words written down now and I really can't think of a chorus for my shits
    whats the song about?
    What i do is summarize what the verses are about in a few catchy lines (if the song has a topic).. usually the chorus is like 4 lines

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jay_Cross [7th sun]
    Came out from my lips beating the balls lol Pretty cool I have an idea "you should record this" [just foolin' around Sp0k3n ] But he's tallented, aren't he? To write the funny, a little bit weird TRUTH Man If I had born in USA... Damn! This ain't good... But you should hear what I can in my language... Breathin' the mic dust (for 6 months already) Where was I? Ah yeah... Locust - If all your rhymes are similar to this one - you're the genius GZA almost Keep up homie! {|> | 3 < 3}
    i dont understand everything you said but thanks anyway

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    Good shit loc, impressive with the multi's, I'm so used to seeing boring ass rhyme schemes on this sight. I'm all about multi's and flow and shit, definately gotta throw this on wax.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Locust
    i dont understand everything you said but thanks anyway
    Slow mind? Maybe blind? Need some weed? Or just I was too sweet? Damn! Just wanted to say that your 'song' was outstandin'! (I was so excited, so wrote a bunch of shit - not a normal post ) Anyway - good work man, not simple and workaday - what can I say
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    Quote Originally Posted by SpOk3N
    Wow..........that made no sense whatsoever LOL
    Maybe need a translation? Or more wide imagination?
    Fucking funny hat I wear, I didn't bought It I swear!

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